Penname: Sweet Pea [Contact]

Real name: Angela

Member Since: 02/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio: Just a lady with a healthy fanfic obsession.


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Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

I have always been alone and that was all I knew how to be. My mother and father only showed up on two occasions: my dreams and my nightmares. In my dreams, they were normal people who worked nine-to-five jobs. They were always there when I needed someone to talk to. We lived in a suburban area where all the neighbors watched me grow up. We were average people in my dreams, but in my nightmares, the truth came out. My mother was a city prostitute with a drug addiction. She slept with numerous men; consequently, my father had a name or a face. For all I know, he was just a quick [ rendevous ] to help her habit. I have bounced around from different foster homes, never finding a place that I was truly happy with or that was ever happy with me.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 18847
Read Count: 14279
Published: 04/01/09
Updated: 21/05/09


Title: Chapter 4: Liandra.

I see a cute romance forming. Update soon!!

Author's Response: Yes, a cute, twisted romance is definitely budding.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/01/09

Title: Chapter 5: Sever.

Talk about a quick change of emotions. I went from giggling at "hint of old man," to confusion and sorrow when she saw his scars.

These poor kids have both been through a lot. 

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Date: 26/01/09

Title: Chapter 6: Jake's Story.

I'm glad Jake got away. What kind of weak man provokes a child to fight him.

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Date: 12/02/09

Title: Chapter 7: Collision.

I am so happy that Jack told her that about Amir. She may owe him a lot for helping her out, but she doesn't owe him her life. That fool is obviously crazy and she needs to run from him!!!

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Date: 30/03/09

Title: Chapter 10: Slut.

He may have some issues, but at least he's willing to give himself a chance to be happy.

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Date: 12/05/09

Title: Chapter 9: Body Heat.

Broken spirits find a way to start the healing process. I hope these two can find their way through all the crap that life keeps throwing at them. For some reason, I can already see Amir making a reapearrance

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Date: 07/05/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Simone doesn't dye her hair or wear strange clothing. She lives instead.



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Categories: Daytime Television, Passions
Characters: Eve Russell, Simone Russell, Whitney Russell
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3025
Read Count: 3138
Published: 05/01/09
Updated: 05/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Rebellions of Simone Russell

That poor girl did always get pushed aside on that show for story lines that were untterly ridiculous. At least she's heading South!!!!!

Author's Response:

Simone did always get pushed aside, and boy, did I hate Whitney during the first couple of years I watched the show. She got a bit more depth during the Foxney storyline, but the writers ruined that story and the couple for me. I hated that the writers never knew what to do with Simone. I feel like writing more fic just to make up for the nonsense the character had to endure.

Thanks for reading, Sweet Pea!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/01/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Jimmy Smits/Sanaa Lathan

Michelle Landau is a woman of many secrets. And when Quentin Costa a.k.a. The Carver returns to claim her as a victim, Michelle survives the near attack, but finds that Quentin's defesnse attorney wants to use her past with A.D.A. Miguel Prado against her as part of the defense. Michelle and Miguel are reunited in an effort to stop this from happening. But Miguel's ideas of warding off trouble and hers, are not quite the same...



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Michelle Landau
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Michelle/Christian (Nip/Tuck)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14849
Read Count: 12076
Published: 06/01/09
Updated: 17/01/09


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Damn!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/01/09

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Michelle may have some sexy men in her life, but that always turn out to be crazy!

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Date: 07/01/09

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Aw hell, this is why you never mess with a true psycho and Dexter is a true psycho!

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Date: 08/01/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He should have known that she wouldn't stay away from Dexter. This is Michelle!!!

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Date: 13/01/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Melinda and Said

Dr. Melinda Warner has always lived a quiet life. But when Captain Don Cragen and Det. Olivia Benson of the Manhatten Special Victims Unit, ask her to go back into her past and rekindle a relationship with Oz Penitentiary inmate, Kareem Said, Dr. Warner's life goes from quiet to dangerous...stormy and passionate...



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Melinda Warner
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17293
Read Count: 15494
Published: 07/01/09
Updated: 04/04/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*On bended knee* Thank you for combing to shows that I love!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/01/09

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good update with more insight into the Carver case. That's some crazy suff!!

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Date: 09/01/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ah damn. The ending got me, poor Said.

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Date: 15/01/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Banner

Ugly Betty

Something about setting things on fire always seemed to put her in the mood.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Wilhelmina Slater
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Sexual Content
Series: Something Wicked
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 997
Read Count: 3006
Published: 07/01/09
Updated: 07/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Bowling for Kittens

Funny!

Author's Response:

Thanks Sweet Pea :)

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/01/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Jazzelle is tired of her boyfriend playing around on her and treating her like like she didn't matter but when a new man comes into her life will she leave him or endure the hurt?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5783
Read Count: 28958
Published: 07/01/09
Updated: 14/02/09


Title: Chapter 4: StOp TrIpPiN

What is it gonna take for her to walk away. Some skank answering my man's phone and telling me he's in the shower is enough for walking papers!!!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/01/09

Title: Chapter 5: It'S oVeR

It took her long enough. Darius is either vary stupid or ballsy for actually making out with another woman right in front of his girl.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
Date: 10/01/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Growing up everyone has memorable moments that they will never forget; and with these two peas in a pod it's no different. Follow Justin and Lorraine to see if they really were just friends or could it been young love all along...

Because every relationship has a lil history...



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Perfect Blend
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 291
Read Count: 2779
Published: 08/01/09
Updated: 08/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: 1986

CUTE!

Author's Response: lol thanks, i think the next short is going be about first kiss. still in the air. please stay tune, thanks again - dani

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
Date: 09/01/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

With this ring, I thee wed…wait a minute-What?!

Okay so sure, every since Lorraine has known Justin she’s always taken his hand without any hesitation. However, what they never had in mind was taking each other’s hand in marriage. Especially when their significant others are waiting at home.

Don't know what to do

What to say

Not sure what to tell you

Confused...

Unsure what to do after drunken “I Do’s” have been said, now sober they are only left to wonder…

Were they just empty meaningless vowels?

Or do intoxicated words hold more truth then their willing to face?

Which way do I 

Take your hand

Or let go…

take  

Lyrics: Take Your Hand by Usher



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Perfect Blend
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 20769
Read Count: 3228
Published: 08/01/09
Updated: 16/11/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Proposal “I Do; Don’t I?”

That many questions running through your mind means DO NOT SAY YES! Especially when one of those thoughts is to run to the nearest exit.

Author's Response:

i know right?! thats what i am saying, thank you for the review it made me smile. im working on the next chapter now and should be up soon, thanks again stay tune - dani

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
Date: 09/01/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Dara Jensen and Sonny Corinthos discover a creative way to beat the heat.



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Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Dara Jensen
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1860
Read Count: 1059
Published: 09/01/09
Updated: 09/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I had to fan myself after reading this one. This is why I read fanfiction. In ff, couples are 'really' given a chance to develop.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/01/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

It starts with a small favor and ends with a large regret. (Prompt 6 – Hate) Companion to To Be Desired.

 

A CSI: Miami fic.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1041
Read Count: 2757
Published: 13/01/09
Updated: 13/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Second Temptation of Alexx

Absolutely loving this!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/01/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

 

              A simple story: girl meets boy and they want each other.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11211
Read Count: 3668
Published: 15/01/09
Updated: 15/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Middle

I just realized that the chapters were backwards, but it didn't really mess with the flow of the story to me.

Talk about daring, she knew what they both wanted and took charge!



Author's Response:

Yeah...
It was originally just going to be the first chapter, but I got such encouraging responses that I decided to continue with it. I'm not very good with plot development, so I thought just explaining their background would be a good idea. And yes, she is the take charge type: I wanted to have a female character who was nice, but not completely submissive.
Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to respond! :) 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/01/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Daylan Channing suffers a heavy burden.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2023
Read Count: 6034
Published: 17/01/09
Updated: 17/01/09


Title: Chapter 2: Heart's Hardship

Oh wow!!! This seems VERY promising. Update soon. I really want to know what happened to her and who Aaron.

Author's Response: Ahh I was going to just leave it there but we'll see what happens. Thank you for reading =]

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/01/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary: Arthur makes a life-changing revelation on his birthday. *this was written in response to a prompt battle for a Gwen fan site. The premise is 'When Arthur realized he loved her [Gwen]". It's short, cuz some of my stories have to be lol.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5931
Read Count: 4960
Published: 20/01/09
Updated: 20/01/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I enjoyed this story. Loved the boast in Arthur's confidence in the end when he realized that being King meant he could do what he wanted.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/01/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 37]
Summary: Falling in love isn't supposed to be torture. Goodbyes aren't supposed to tear two people in half. But neither of these statements are true when it comes to Rayne and Adam.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6715
Read Count: 23952
Published: 23/01/09
Updated: 10/03/09


Title: Chapter 1: Little Goodbyes

It needed to be spaced out more. Spacing making it a lot easier to read, and helps with the flow of the story.

I enjoyed reading this piece about a couple 'finally' letting go. It's never easy to truly let go, but sometimes it's the best option.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23/01/09