Penname: Sweet Pea [Contact]

Real name: Angela

Member Since: 02/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio: Just a lady with a healthy fanfic obsession.


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Love and Prejudice by Candace
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 133]
Summary:

Love and Prejudice

A Pride and Prejudice spin off. Five years after their marriage, Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam Darcy are made the guardians of Mary Caroline Farthington, a free black woman and the  heir and adopted daughter of Lord Matthew Farthington. When Colonel Fitzwilliam returns from Louisiana, fresh on the heels of a hearty defeat in the Battle of New Orleans, he visits the Darcy's for the Christmas holidays. When the soldier and the heiress fall in love, will love be able to overcome prejudice?



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Categories: Books
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 93045
Read Count: 100779
Published: 09/07/09
Updated: 18/12/10

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Their little flirtations are so cute! Even I blush when she blushes.

Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping that their flirtations would be believeable, as well as Mary's responses.

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Date: 14/07/09
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Not the church people. Well, there's no hurt like church, pain caused by those who call themselves Christians will make you cry.

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Date: 14/07/09
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

There would have been no internal debate. I would have locked the door as soon as I entered the chamber. I still can't believe that Darcy will not accept the union of his cousin and Mary. Does he think that Fritzwilliam will not protect her?

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Date: 14/07/09
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

“I am surprised, madam, that you have such strong objections to a conversation that did not concern you.” As soon as I read that, all I could think was "Oh no he didn't."

I'm happy that Mary and Richard are going forward regardless of what others think. Someone had to break society idea of normal and what is acceptable. 

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Date: 14/07/09
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Oh no! Not cute little William and Richard. Just when everything seemed to be coming together! Life can be so cruel sometimes.

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Date: 14/07/09
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

What is going on with Georgiana? Is she jealous of our young couple?

The make-out scene was spicy and probably would have made my grandmother blush, but you're right. It's nothing compared to some of the stuff going on today. Make-out session between pre-teens on TV are more raunchy.

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Date: 14/07/09
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I knew something was up with Georgian! I hope she doesn't somehow mess up the growing affection between Richard and Mary. 

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Date: 15/07/09
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Darcy is holding to his opinion that they are not a good match. I am happy that Richard let his intentions to marry Mary be known.

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Date: 18/07/09
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Daniela and Letitia are on my hit list.

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Date: 18/07/09
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Thank goodness Mary now has people there on her side. Dealing with those two cold fish on a daily basis can not be easy.

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Date: 18/07/09
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I laughed at the fact that their father's issue was that Gregory was bedding lowly maids, not that he was sleeping with anything that moves.

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Date: 18/07/09
Tribble Talk by bana05
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary: Spock wished he could admit tribbles didn't affect him the same way they did humans, but that would be a lie. And Vulcans don't lie.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon, General
Genre: Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Fluff
Series: Star Trek: Beyond TOS
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1694
Read Count: 4239
Published: 10/07/09
Updated: 10/07/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Tribble Talk

Love how Spock trys to keep up appearances in public, but they barely make it to a room before he has her body pulled against his own.

Author's Response: I think he's the type to keep private life private, you know?  But yeah, Uhura's his woman, tribbles be darned! lol thanks for reading!

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Date: 11/07/09
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First Few Desperate Hours by oucellogal
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 109]
Summary:

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After her disastrous blind date, Kat Miller and Scotty Valens find some common ground...and a whole lot more. 

Banner by TokenBlackGirl

 



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 79477
Read Count: 123211
Published: 12/07/09
Updated: 07/11/09

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Title: Chapter 9: Orange Ball of Pain

These two are catching feelings and they don't even realize it!!!! The fact that he basically watched her sleep touched my heart!

Author's Response:

They totally are.  For detectives, they're really not all that bright sometimes.  I'm glad you liked the end.  Scotty kind of insisted on that, and I just let him run with it.

Thanks for the review!!

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Date: 11/09/09
Title: Chapter 1: Standard Bitter Love Song #4

Kat and Scotty have a little girl together, but they're not together. That sucks, big time!

Author's Response: Well, stay tuned. :)  Thanks so much for the review; more soon!

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Date: 13/07/09
Title: Chapter 2: You or Your Memory

Awesome update. I like that he's finally starting to realize that he doesn't regret or feel shameful about what happend between him and Kat. They needed eachother at that moment, and they probably still need each other.

Author's Response: Yeah, I think there's a lot more going on in Scotty's brain than perhaps he realizes.  It'll be fun to see him figure it out.  And yes, they do still need each other.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 20/07/09
Title: Chapter 3: The Recognition Scene

I know the real reason for not hand shake at the end, if they would have touched each other again it would have been on. I can just see the kiss in my head!!!

Author's Response:

Oooooh, maybe!  I never really thought of that, in all honesty.  But, yeah, kablooie.

Thanks for the review!!

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Date: 27/07/09
Title: Chapter 4: The Mess Inside

I really like the "girl talk" between Lilly and Kat. Lilly was straight foward, but not pushy. Kat showed some vulnerability, but still stayed in character.

Author's Response: Thank you!  Lilly is hard to get just right, and Vulnerable!Kat is even worse.  Glad they're both believable!

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Date: 30/07/09
Title: Chapter 5: It Froze Me

I'm not surprise that Scott walked away the way that he did, and neither should Kay be. I liked how you took him to the bridge and think about Elisa, but come to the inevitable conclusion that Kat was having his baby and that is where is focus needs to be.

Author's Response:

No, I  don't think anyone's surprised, except possibly Scotty, having gotten such a huge shock.  Elisa was a huge part of his life, but you're right, his focus needs to be on the present.  I think he'll get there!

Thanks for the review!

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Date: 11/08/09
Title: Chapter 7: How to Embrace a Swamp Creature

They've been sleeping in the same bed for three years and nothing happend? I find that hard to believe!!!

Author's Response: I've learned that detectives are remarkably clueless.  We'll see what happens.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 26/08/09
Title: Chapter 8: Orange Ball of Hate

Did you really leave off right there, I must have missed a paragraph!!!! Obviously she doesn't lose the baby, but something is beyond wrong.

Author's Response: Yeah, I really did.  I know, I'm evil.  But I promise I won't make you wait too long!  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 04/09/09
Title: Chapter 10: Tell Me on a Sunday

I cannot lie. I'm growing a little impatient waiting for these two to go ahead and admit that they love each other. Their love is like a slow burn waiting to explode.

Author's Response: It really is a slow burn, isn't it?  Sometimes those are the best kind!

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Date: 21/09/09
Title: Chapter 11: Orange Ball of Love

She confused the hell of him at the end. That poor man probably doesn't know up from down after she acted, all because she had a sex dream about him.

Author's Response: Yep, she sure did.  He has no idea what happened, and he's so adorably clueless.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 26/09/09
Title: Chapter 12: I'm So Lonesome I Could Cry

I knew she was in labor. Please let Scotty get there in time.

Author's Response: Sometimes it can sneak up on you!  I'm not sure where Scotty is, but we'll find out soon enough.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 05/10/09
Title: Chapter 13: Distant Stations

These two are sweet and cute together!!! I'm still wondering when they're going to get a clue about their true feelings for each other.

Author's Response: Thank you!  They're slow, but I think next chapter will provide an important step for them.

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Date: 11/10/09
Spell It Out by notayoyo
Rated: Most Ages
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Summary:

Kat glowered in Scotty’s direction, and he flashed an innocent smile, before focusing his attention on the elevator buttons, only to intently look in her direction yet again. “What?!” she growled. 

(Pairing: Kat/Lilly)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Slash
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 302
Read Count: 2299
Published: 13/07/09
Updated: 13/07/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Spell It Out

A lady always gets the last word, and I laughed at Kat's saying to the men of Cold Case.

Author's Response: Yup, a lady should always get the last word LOL!  xD

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Date: 13/07/09