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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Ebony 'Bunny' Banks is the type of girl Clark Davis never thought he'd be in love with. With her cloud of hair and perfect imperfections, she wasn't the girl his parents or society taught him to go for. Clark Davis is the type of guy Ebony Banks would never notice with his close tie to the cheering hags and his movie star appearance. They are on two completely opposite sides of the popularity scale. Him being a pretty popular guy and her a wallflower. Yet somehow these two seemed to have found each other and the odds of love seems to be in their favor.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3103
Read Count: 4831
Published: February 16 2015
Updated: February 28 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Him

I like the synopsis of the story. You gave a good intro of Clark. I can't wait to see more of the development of the story. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: February 17 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 84]
Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

Zaira Jacobs and Eli Jacobs (her son) runs away from their past, from the pain, and from a 6 foot 4 German (Adrian Hitzag).

 

However, Adrian is not too eager to let his beloved mate escape from his grasp.

 

Follow the story of a determine mother, a curious son, and a possessive German.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 24066
Read Count: 43586
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: January 07 2016


Title: Chapter 8: Darkness, take me please[7]

Glad to read an update! I wonder how Adrian will hold up in the confrontation against the demon Igor. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: January 08 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Nothing but Nightmares [3]

Loved the update! That dream was intense! Who is Igor? I went back to the other chapters, but couldn't find a mention on him. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: April 09 2015

Title: Chapter 3: The Collision of Fate [2]

I remember reading this story on Lit! Glad to see it here! I'm loving where this story could possibly go. Adrian is not one to mess with, but he found his match in Zaira. Hmmm...makes me curious as to why Eli took to Adrian so fast.  Just a few typos here and there, but they aren't a detriment to the story. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: April 01 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 243]
Summary:

You can pick your friends. You can pick your nose. But you can't pick your family.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 87982
Read Count: 45726
Published: April 06 2015
Updated: February 14 2019


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very very interesting! Can't wait for the next bits!

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Date: April 06 2015

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Dun..dun..duuuuuun! This was hot! Unprotected sex! Let the hilarity resume! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: February 15 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Very cut sweet update! However, did Shyla forget that it was her mother's plan to get her out of the house? Hmmm...does Momma think her daughter could fall for the brother-in-law, so she wants to prevent it? I'm curious about the jewel thiefs...my first conclusion was that it involved Shyla's parents, but I'm suspicious about people in general and knew that was a crazy idea. Can't wait for the next update. I'm loving the development between Shyla and Matt. Butt slap was hilarious. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: April 18 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Gosh, the end of this had me dying!!!! So funny! Let him go to the salon! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: October 02 2015

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OHHHHHH Lordt!!!! Matt's mom stirring up trouble! The phone convo he had with his boys made me almost die from laughter. I'm loving this change and I like how the danger is slowly leaking in for this couple. Great story telling! 



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Thank you!

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Date: November 26 2015

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hahahaha...loove! More please! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: January 31 2016

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

How did I miss this update? Love this story and can't wait to see more of the fallout of them sleeping together. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: February 04 2017

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Things are coming to a head and I love it! Absolutely adore this damn story!!! 



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Thank you for reading! 

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Date: March 27 2017

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yaaaaasss for updates! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: July 22 2017

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Gosh...this has to be the most hilarious couple I've read, since I read about Miki and Conall in the Shelly Laurenston were series. Great update and I love seeing their development. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: September 08 2017

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Merry Christmas to me!!!! I'm very happy to see and update! Abby cracks me up! Such a hilarious chapter! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: December 25 2018

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[Reviews - 256]
Summary:

Working as a Home Health Aide and struggling to make ends meet. All Aries Washington wanted to do was prove the child she had three years ago, was in fact the son of Cameron Marino. She didn't have any delusions about them putting their differences aside and falling madly in love. Why would she? Cameron was engaged to her ex best friend Ambrosia, A.K.A Ms. Perfect. So imagine her surprise when he not only demands she moves in with him, but marry him too.

Aries had no idea that once she gave birth to her own little Marino, that, that meant she automatically belonged to the whole Marino family. With a group of people who take their strong family ties seriously, she's about to find out that once your in, there's no out. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Marino Family
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 19092
Read Count: 53265
Published: May 14 2015
Updated: June 01 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I think chapter 3 is really progressed the story. I cannot wait until the famiy knows that she speaks the truth. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: May 15 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Ooooohhhh...Ambrosia!!! You about to be in trouuuubblllle! Many these updates are killing me because I want the truth to come out! Patience...patience is a virtue. I cannot WAIT until the first set of Marino's meet Aries and Jaylen. I hope Aries gives Papa Marino what for! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: May 16 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

Dun Dun Dun. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: May 19 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Ohhh heck, stuff just got real! I can't wait to see the battle between the Marinos and Ambrosia. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 01 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 153]
Summary:

Appearances can be deceiving



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 26983
Read Count: 37197
Published: May 30 2015
Updated: June 13 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Waaaaaay beyond good! I just devoured those chapters!!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: May 30 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Kudos to Adele! I love her character!!!! Man...Gabriel...when will he ever learn. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 04 2015

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[Reviews - 200]
Summary:

Nathaniel Hendricks lived alone in his lakehouse on Lake Michigan spending his days remebering the young son he tracgically lost and the wife who left him when he needed her the most. The only thing that kept him remotely happy was the lake he lived by boating and fishing. He already failed as a father and a husband so why would God give him another chance?

Eden Wilson spent most of her life running from abuse and now as a young adult she finds herself running from an obsessive abusive ex-boyfriend. Not wanting the child she's carrying to be in danger she spends most of her pregancy running until she tries to get in contact with her uncle for help. Eden finds herself with her uncle's friend a lonely handsome man Nathaniel who gives her shelter in a snowstorm. 

Little did either of them know how close the baby would bring them together or how much this little bundle of joy would help them learn about secound chances.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 28561
Read Count: 37468
Published: June 16 2015
Updated: June 14 2016


Title: Chapter 3: JANUARY 20TH 1990

I like the development of this, please continue. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 16 2015

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Summary:

Athena works for an undercover agency, but all she does is sit behind a desk and hack into people's accounts. So when Archie, an agent who loses his brother in a shootout askes Athena to go undercover with him to find his brother's killer, she's a bit hesitant.

How will Athena survive going undercover and "befriending" some of the most dangerous criminals in the city?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2265
Read Count: 579
Published: June 18 2015
Updated: June 18 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Operation: Find Andy

Ohh...she's cute...I like her! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 18 2015

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Summary:

While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 121645
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017


Title: Chapter 9: EASTER SUNDAY 1995

I'll have to reread, but I thought her parents died in an house fire. Can't wait to read the next update! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: August 28 2015

Title: Chapter 8: DAY 11

Hmm..I'm think they probably should build a new shelter. I don't think they will come across anything besides caves. I'm sure Anika will be doing all of the work. I still don't understand why she hasn't separated from Hunter. He's dead weight to her. I still can't wait to read more! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: August 26 2015

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