Penname: helloWORLD [Contact]

Real name: KIAH

Member Since: May 11 2011

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Drawn Together by Outlawstar615
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 113]
Summary:


Nia Jones, an amazing designer at Sohma Graphics, has strong feelings for her boss. She doesn't think they'll ever be reciprocated. In fact, she thinks he hates her. They both realize otherwise when his suave older half-brother is abruptly added to their lives.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 20126
Read Count: 22683
Published: July 23 2012
Updated: May 26 2014

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ooooo this is gonna be good! 

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Date: July 25 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awwww yayyyy they meet again!

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Date: July 25 2012
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Just Ordinary by Forks and Knives
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 193]
Summary:

Carmen Shelly preyed on married men and usually won her sought after prize. Business is booming until her partner sets his sights on her single sister.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41535
Read Count: 39607
Published: July 29 2012
Updated: February 28 2016

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Title: Chapter 4: Three Counter-attack and the retreat

I'm glad Richard and Nicole aren't letting Carmen get to them. I know its eating her alive knowing that things aren't going her way. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: August 16 2012
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%$!k me, I'm Irish by kellyklue
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

What's a girl to do, when she doesn't listen to her head but instead throws caution to the wind for one night?

We've all had an encounter with that guy, right? The one who knows that he is sex on two legs. That guy who you know should be avoided, but still manages to reel you in easily. That guy who is still in your bed, even though he is long gone.

No? You don't know him. Well, Ambi does. 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 30393
Read Count: 47598
Published: December 29 2012
Updated: February 06 2014

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Title: Chapter 2: I want you to want me

Gosh I love this! Irish is hottttt!



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Thank you. Irish is hottt! Next chapter will be up soon.

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Date: December 31 2012
Love bites, Love bleeds by Inthenykoftime
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Kwon Jae Hwa had been prepared to succeed. He had worked hard for everything he had earned all of his life, and that resulted in getting him to great places in life.

One day, his life is interrupted by a vibrant, young, aspiring dancer. She's carefree, and the complete opposite of what he is used to, but something tells him that she is exactly what he wants.

He has no reason to doubt that she feels the same about him, until she is offered the opportunity of a lifetime that puts a halt on everything they have, and Jae Hwa is left with a great responsibility to handle on his own.

Jae Hwa must face the one hardship he never thought he would have to go through with his first love.

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 28452
Read Count: 70044
Published: February 14 2013
Updated: June 12 2013

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Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aw, I hope they can makeup soon and get back on track

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Date: February 24 2013
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Consequence by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 702]
Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91992
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015

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Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

omg! That was amazing! Im so happy everyone found happiness and that Ant finally got to meet his father and uncle. I look forward to your next story.



Author's Response:

Thanks hellowWORLD!  So glad you enjoyed the story.  Imagination willing, next on deck is Rich's story.  Stay tuned...

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Date: May 03 2015
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Love, God & Negotiations by Joelle Jax
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Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78730
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

omg! Why is Brandon so awesome?! I like that they were both so mature about what they were feeling between one another and that they didn't beat around the bush and waste any time. They know what they wanted and just went for it which i can appreciate. I look forward to reading more.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, hellowWORLD!  Brandon is pretty adorable, and he and Diya are all about being open and honest with their feelings (him more than her).  Let's see how long they can endure the transparency.  Update imminent. 

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Date: July 04 2015
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Date Night, First Fight (Revised)

Omg I was scared that dude was gonna try to hurt Diya! I'm glad she was able to get away and stop branny from going in to find the crazy dude. I think in a way, their fight helped them because Diya ended up opening up to him a little more and the were able to get some of their frustrations out. And I was about to say Diya came close enough to her celibacy pack so she should be proud but i went back to reread the last part and wondered how i could've missed it lol. Who in the world interupted them?! I'm so glad you've got back in the groove of things. Even if you're still having problems, the fact that you were able to do this is just amazing to me. This is one of my favorite stories because its so realistic and I love that Diya and Branny aren't just pretending to be perfect while on her celibacy journey but is keeping it real about how hard it is and how temptations can make you want to through it out the window. Can't wait to see what happens next! You're awesome! 



Author's Response:

Thanks hellowWORLD!!!  Brandon and Diya did come real close to fumbling that celibacy ball just short of the goal line.  They still might.  The night is young(ish) and their yet to be unmasked visitor may or may not be staying long.  More on that next chapter.  

Thanks again for the fab review!  So happy to know you're enjoying my treatment of the characters and their story!

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Date: January 03 2016
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - [Bran]ded

Why is this story so awesome?!



Author's Response:

I'm not sure, but surely thank you for thinking so : )

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Date: April 17 2016
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Divide and Conquer

They're just so cute. I'm glad Brandon let her know he was on to her morning routine so that she didn't have to keep doing all of that in the morings anymore lol. Those little girls are adorable and I feel like maybe Marisol had a little crush on Brandon when they were younger that never really went away. You're style of writing is so engaging and it paints the perfect picture in my head of what I read on screeen. Can't wait to see what happens next. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely compliment, helloWORLD (and reviewing, of course)!  The nature of Marisol's feelings toward Brandon will be revealed in due time, and they may be a bit of a surprise.  We'll see.  Update posted. 

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Date: July 06 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - T.M.I. (Revised)

Diya is a strong woman because I don't know how long I would've been able to last lol. Especially with Brandon takling like that. Demon cat is for sure out to get her so she'd better watch her back lol. I love how Brandon isn't ashamed of her and is so open. Well obviously not on all topics but, he's trying at least. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Camilla and Brandon's mouth will continue to cause problems for Diya, poor girl.  I love Branny too, but that whole selective disclosure thing he's got going could become a problem.  More on that later.  Thanks helloWORLD!

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Date: July 14 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Slippery When Wet

LAWD, I dont know what else to say. I swear its like i can picture your words as though its a movie playing in my head and when she got caught, I almost kicked my laptop off the bed lol. I'm hoping Diya decides to let Brandon meet her parents soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks helloWORLD!!!  Brandon's and the De la Roys' paths will eventually cross, and it will interesting to say the least.  Stay tuned...

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Date: July 31 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Night Light

I need the recipe to make me a Branny please! lol. I figured the person was someone Marisol knew and I'm going to try to give her the benefit of the doubt since she'd just went through something traumatic hours before. But half of me still feels like she didnt let Brandon know Diya called because she wanted him to herself for a little while longer. I love that they are both beginning to open up a little bit more even if it was because something like that happened. Can't wait to see what happens next! 



Author's Response:

You're right to be suspicious of Marisol's motives.  At best, they're a bit intrusive, though understandable (sort of).  At worst, they're a not-so-subtle manipulation aimed at reclaiming Brandon's full attention.  Either way, our boy seems to be willing to indulge her, which might undo all the progress they made with their talk.  More on that to come.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, helloWORLD!

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Date: September 21 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - On the Outside

AH! IM SO HAPPY I COULD CRY!



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks helloWORLD : )

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Date: January 03 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

omg somehow i ended up on the old site and I thought this story disapeared! I wanted to reread and catch back up so im so glad its still here lol 



Author's Response:

Glad you found us again : )

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Date: August 16 2016
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

Omg so much has happened! Marisol is something else but im glad Brandon didn't automatically give in to her. I know she's dealing with things but its good that he is establishing more boundaries. I'm so excited to see how dinner with her family is going to be. If anyone can handle her family , its brandon. 



Author's Response:

Let us hope.  Thanks, helloWORLD!

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Date: October 20 2018
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

wtf brandon?! All this time he's been making Di feel like it was all in her head when Marisol was his first love?! I was rooting for him and their relationship but thats foul that he waited until now to tell her this. Especially after all they've went through. 

 

I'm so glad you updaated! I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

I promise to make the wait as short and relatively painless as possible.  Thanks, helloWORLD!!!

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Date: March 12 2019
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - More Than Words

Ugh I'm so torn! I'm rooting for them but I def think they've both been at fault at certain points in their relationship. I'm so glad you were able to update and hopefully your muse comes back soon! Thansk for all that you do!



Author's Response:

You're most welcome, helloWORLD.  Thank YOU for sticking with me and Briya (blame Artamiss Caine : ).  Both have definitely played their part in things going left, and will continue to, as next chapter will thoroughly demonstrate.

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Date: February 14 2020

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