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Choosey Lover by CaramelGal
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 298]
Summary:

 

Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69614
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015

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Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Glad that Elle has a friend like Tracie that snacks you in the head with the truth; Now let's hope that Elle takes her advice. Also Elle, you have to Kiss a few Frogs b4 on of them turns into a Prince.

 



Author's Response:

Tracie never fails to give it to Elle straight no chaser. Like you, I hope she takes her advice also.  I think the few frogs she’s had have clearly gotten her too spooked to kiss the others lol. Thanks for your advice, reading and reviewing liberty lady.

CG

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Date: December 01 2014
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Shanking head,  so wanna Slap Elle until my hand hurts. This is what happens when u let your girls get u all worked up without the facts. If Elle had put on her Big Girl Panties and knocked on Dean's door, she might have met Josie, who I assume is Dean's sister.

Please write Elle with a spine next chapter. Lol.

 Oh I hope my rants don't have u thinking I don't like thus story b/c I do my getting passionate about the characters means ur doing a Great job writing. Lol



Author's Response:

Elle is definitely easily persuaded, which is doing her more harm than good. Btw, Dean’s an only child. No worries.  I sense your frustrations are directed at Elle, so all is well.  Thanks again for reading and reviewing liberty lady.

SN: Elle with a snipe though? I can’t!

CG

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Date: December 06 2014
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Lol, happy birthday to Dean, so glad that he's a gentleman and didn't take advantage of a drunk Elle. But knowing her, she will run again instead of just getting everything out on the table. Can't wait to find out who Josie is.

Oh not fond of Tracie now, never leave your drunk girlfriend for a one night stand.



Author's Response:

He has a knack for doing the right thing unlike Elle lol.  Yeah, Tracie definitely was wrong for that.  That and Josie’s ties to Dean will be discussed in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing liberty lady.

CG

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Date: December 09 2014
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Love Dean, and what he said to Elle, it's like he's been in my head Lol. I should have figured that Josie was Dean's cousin.

Elle please Woman up and Talk to Dean that would be a great birthday present.

 Elle telling Tracie off was a good thing, she know she was wrong.



Author's Response:

Yep, I think he said everything you and several other reviewers have been thinking from day one. I hear your pleas and they will not be forgotten in the next chapter. I agree, she did address the Tracie situation accordingly. Thanks so much for continuously supporting, reading and reviewing liberty lady. 

CG

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Date: December 12 2014
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Elle is making my head hurt. Ok I'm glad that she apologized for treating Dean like a used piece of gum, but she knows that she wants to be more than friends with Dean.

Maybe with time away from Dean  she can Finally find her Big Girl Panties and confront Justin, call him a bastard and Let the Past Go.

Until then I'll keep some Tylenol handy Lol.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Lord, she’s causing headaches now? Smh. Yeah, she needs to tie those loose ends. And distance makes the heart grow fonder, right? Thanks for continuously reading and reviewing liberty lady.

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Date: December 17 2014
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Dean and Elle are sad souls right now, they need to get together and Fast.

I have a feeling that Katie is going to be an issue, Dean needs to watch out.

Justin is Tool, and seems like he hasn't changed at all, everything is all about Him.



Author's Response:

Seriously, as I write I think about this all the time. They’re miserable! Katie does have some interesting qualities that will be discussed in future chapters. And yes, Justin’s a total tool and meant to teach Elle a lesson. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing liberty lady.

CG

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Date: December 20 2014
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Ok, who do I Slap first, Dean or Elle, those two are just stuck on Stupid. And why do I get the feeling that Dean is going to bring Katie or whatever her name is to that party, and Elle is going to be pea green with envy. Can't wait for that.

Oh and Gretchen must be pregnant, and hasn't told her hubby yet.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you’re excited for the possible shenanigans of the event lol. And knowing Gretchen, that’s probably just her usual behavior that we’ve hardly ever witnessed before. Thanks for reading and reviewing liberty lady.

CG

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Date: December 25 2014
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Ok, so glad that Elle told Justin off, he deserved it, and I hope he got the message.

It's time for Dean and Elle to go for what they want, and that's one another. Elle stop questioning things and just Let Go and Let Flow.

Dean needs to cut Katie off, she seems stalkerish to me, and I think that she and Randall had a one nighter.

As for Randall, he seems creepy, and I think he was spying on Dean and Elle; IMO he maybe a bit jealous of Dean.

Hope you enjoyed your holidays, and have a Blessed New Year.



Author's Response:

These circumstances have certainly upped the ante for these two, huh? Let’s see if Elle and Dean can come back from this. Yeah, I think Randall is giving everyone the creeps and he does seem a bit jealous. Thanks so much for the well wishes. And I enjoyed my holidays immensely. I hope you did as well liberty lady.

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Date: January 02 2015
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Please tell me that those two are Finally going to get this party started. And please Elle, don't over think things, just Go for it.

Hope we saw the last of Katie, and I knew she slept with Randell. She's the type that wants to be a "Kept" woman.

Tracie was spot on with what she told Gretchen, she and Tyler are Adults, what they do is Their business and not his parents. I think Tyler is a good guy, and will be happy to be a father, and set his parents straight if need be.



Author's Response:

Yeah, they are. But it's at their own pace and on their own terms. We’ll see if Elle is capable of letting go of that thinking cap of hers. Katie definitely showed her true colors in this chapter. Dean did the right thing by cutting off all ties. Tracie came through on her rant. Hopefully Gretch will take her advice. Thanks for reading and reviewing liberty lady.

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Date: January 08 2015
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Lol, love that Dean has Elle finally Smilling 😃. It a wonder that she can even walk.

Ok Randall has gone into Creepy mode, Elle needs to tell her bosses to give his account to someone else. I still say he's jealous of Dean.

Oh glad that this story is Back, I missed it. Can't wait for more.

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Date: March 12 2015
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I don't think Dean will be taking many cold showers, b/c I give it about 2 weeks before Elle Jumps his Bones Lol

And I agree with Tracie, Dean was marking his territory with all the hickies.

Can't wait to see what they texted each other .



Author's Response:

Two weeks??? Lol we’ll see. Yeah, Tracie was spitting knowledge which she tends to do often. He texted her back at the end of the chapter. But no worries, I have plans for their future texts *rubs hands like Birdman* Thanks for reviewing liberty lady!

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Date: January 18 2015
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Great update, glad that Elle was honest with Dean even if she needed liquid courage to do so Lol. 

Elle needs to be very careful of Randall when she's alone with him, andcifvI were her, I would have some Mace or Pepper Spray handy..

Can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

For once, her drunkenness worked in her favor lol. Let’s pray she listens to Dean and doesn’t trust Randall for one second. More is on the way darling and thanks for reviewing liberty lady.

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Date: January 28 2015
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Lol, loved Elle taking care of her man, I remember when I got sick, my Uncle brought me some Hennessey, it worked wonders.

I hope that soon Dean and Elle will finally get Physical, it seems that fate is playing a cruel joke on them Lol.

Randall is still creepy.



Author's Response:

Glad you like & Henny does do the trick. Here’s to praying all the stars align for them to finally get some action lol. And girl when isn’t he? Lol thanks for reviewing liberty lady.

CG

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Date: February 09 2015
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Lol, Tracie still makes me laugh, and knowing her, that dress she gave Elle is Hot.

Ok enough with the waiting, it's time for Elle and Dean to Wear out the Mattress.



Author's Response:

"Wear out the mattress" though? You want Elle to wibble wobble after Dean puts them paws on her, huh? Lol, you're a trip and thanks for the reviewing liberty lady!

CG

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Date: February 13 2015
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Wow, Dean put it on her. That was worth the wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks liberty lady! Glad you enjoyed it.

CG

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Date: February 23 2015
His Webcam Girl by PassionFruit
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Felicia Adams doesn't have a regular life. She's a single mother working two jobs trying to keep a roof over her and her son's heads. One of those jobs includes being a webcam girl. She does it all for guys who are too shy to meet girls in reality, from harmless flirting to sexual acts. She then meets Andrew Harper, the sexy mysterious billionaire. Andrew just can't keep a girlfriend. His dates are selfish gold diggers, and all they want is to shine in the spotlight. All he wants is a girl to one day marry, he can't possibly find a wife on Virtualdates.com, right?




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9176
Read Count: 25391
Published: December 21 2014
Updated: April 08 2015

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Short but a great chapter, Felicia and Andrew have a great banter. Can't wait for their date, and love the dress.

Lol at Robert being left at the curb, the Douche 

Don't keep us waiting long.

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Date: February 16 2015
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Robert got just what he deserved, arrogant jackass, Andrew should Fire is ignorant ass.

Liking Andrew and Felica, can't wait to see their date.

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Date: January 10 2015
Take Your Time by god gave me style
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

It's been fifteen years since Aria has smelled the sweetness of Tennessee. She's been running as hard and fast as she can, but he's always there, just a step behind her. She'll never be free of him... but the question is, does she want to be?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 19659
Read Count: 6077
Published: December 30 2014
Updated: February 01 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: -one-

Great start so far, looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! I'm working on the next part as I type this :)

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Date: January 01 2015
Never Ordinary by LawyerForLove
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Tina Hamilton's mother always told her to travel in style for she never knows who she could run into. Who knew her mothers words would actually prove true.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7744
Read Count: 4669
Published: January 14 2015
Updated: February 15 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Terminal D

Like thé start so far, looking forward to more of Tina and Manu.

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Date: January 14 2015
Retired
Stars Colliding by Jaye Sims
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 213]
Summary:

Lia Mariani and Dominic MacCleod were two up and coming leading actors who'd met on set and immediately struck up a friendship.  As the friendship blossomed, they both realized they'd fallen in love with each other.  They were just two chickenshit to admit it because of the differences in their races and his families outdated ideas about black people.  HER parents were afraid of their daughter getting hurt if Dominic decided to bow to the pressure of his families disdain for Lia.  

And hiding in the shadows is a man obsessed with possessing Lia.  Will these outside forces bond them together or tear them apart?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:No
Word count: 40900
Read Count: 139435
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: May 26 2015

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Title: Chapter 19: Can't Hide From Mamma

Congrats to the happy couple, and knowing Dom, his daughter isn't going to be allowed to date until she's 40 Lol.

Oh and Mike is a riot, I hope he gets his own story 

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Date: April 22 2015
Title: Chapter 18: There's No Place Like Home

Great chapter,  I'm loving Message more and more she's a Riot.

So glad they found the house of their dreams, and got far away from Crazy Eric, hope we never see him again(crossing fingers)

 

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Date: April 21 2015
Title: Chapter 17: Changing Tides

Great chapter. As for Dom's so-called parents, they need Prayer, it's like they only live you if you do what They want, I bet Donal didn't even want to marry Irene. Speaking of Irene, I wonder if she's always had the Hots for Dominic.

 I knew Kia was pregnant, Dom is going Love being a Dad.

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Date: April 19 2015
Title: Chapter 16: B**tch Don't Kill My Vibe

Nessa seems to be the only relative of Dominic that has any sense, and Donal needs a spine, how could he marry that cold fish Irene, I bet he hasn't gotten Laid since he said I do to her.

Gulia is the best, loved how she had Dom's parents picking up their face off the floor.

 Really enjoying this story, hurry with more.

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Date: April 18 2015
Title: Chapter 21: Allegra Rose

Good for you Aileen, I knew seeing her New granddaughter would get to her. I hope they can work things out.

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Date: May 02 2015
Title: Chapter 23: Mending Fences Part 1

Not surprised by Irenes confession, she still has a torch for Dominic. I feel bad for Donal and the kids Irene just used him, maybe he needs a story(wink wink)

 

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Date: May 23 2015

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