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Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78669
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021


Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - More Than Words

Brillant update, Please stay the course on this story. I'm patient and when you are ready to present a new chapter for our pleasure..... in months or longer so be it. I love your writing. Now lets talk about Brandon unwilliness to cut off the trouble maker/ brats. May be it time for Diya to part ways with Brandon. Brandon should have chose Diya period!!



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, Brandon seems to think he is choosing Diya.  She would beg to differ, and may be taking your advice in the not so distant future. 

Thanks so much for the lovely review and continued support, blueangel.  It is much appreciated.

P.S. Update posted : )

Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2020

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Them or Me

Brillant!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks blueangel!!! 'Preciate ya!

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Date: February 17 2020

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Hell Hath...

I cannot see Diya comeback and dealing with Brandon. Brandon and his family need to burn!



Author's Response:

It's a mess, and destined to get so much worse. 

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Date: May 01 2020

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Hell Hath...

Hello Joelle Jax, I hope you are well, caught up in the story. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

I'm doing good, Bain. Thanks for asking! I pray all is well with you, too. 

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Date: May 01 2020

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Seconds from Disaster

Sadness...feeling Diya pain and that damn Brandon is still placing Marisol and the brats before her. Hell, I would had ran from his tried arse too. Beautifully written chapter. Please take care. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Yeah, Diya's patience with Brandon's relationship with Marisol has, quite possibly, run it's course. More on that next chapter. Thanks so much, Bain!!!

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Date: May 09 2020

Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Knights and Shining Armour

Good Evening Madame,

Truly enjoy this update and I'm glad you're well. Now getting to Diya I wish she just pickup and leave everyone behind. Mannie is trying to get back in her good standing, and Zeria is a horrible person to exposure Diya pain so openly. That damn family lis messy and mean, lest not forget Brandon. Perhaps he need to find out that his bastard grandfather and brother hurt Diya. As for Marisol and the brats they need to be kick to the curb. You mention David Koresh in this chapter, when the events in Waco happen I was in chemistry lab and my instructor came rushing in and announced to the students what was occuring on national TV, everyone was shock. Per usually a wonderful chapter. Please take care. Thank you Bain

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Date: November 14 2020

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Leave of Absence

Outstanding writing, I'm so upset for Diya. She needs to leave and go to therapy. That rotten so-called family is toxic. There must be a back story on Diya's father behavior or Diya is the whipping girl. I hope Brandon find out what happened to Diya. 

Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

You're not alone in wanting Brandon to know what happened to Diya. But we all know the consequences will be dire. I'm not sure if I'll go into William's backstory. It pretty much comes down to constantly witnessing the evils committed against his people by folks who look like Brandon, and being an overprotective father.

Diya desperately needs space and therapy. I'm just not convinced she'll get it.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Bain!!! 

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Date: February 10 2021

Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Odd Woman Out

This such a lovely story. To be honest I just want Diya to have peace. Perhap these two need this moment and Diya will be able to tell Brandon what happen to her. Still have no affection for Marisol and the brats. 



Author's Response:

I hear you. Unfortunately, telling Brandon what happened will create as many, if not more problems for the two of them than keeping the secret. But, in the end, Diya may not be given the choice. More on that to come.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Bain! So glad you're sticking with the story and still enjoying it.

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Date: May 09 2021

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Summary:

Need I say more?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4858
Read Count: 1220
Published: September 16 2015
Updated: September 16 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hello Joelle Jax,

I adore this story and the writing is fluid. Sitting here and re-reading this gem. Trying to capture these characters in my head so I can keep and bring forth for moments of bliss when life is not what it should be. Excellent story. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bain!!! You are such a sweetheart and the kind of reader every writer needs.

I haven't forgotten about Rich and hope to tell his story soon.

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Date: June 16 2021

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Summary:

Daphne Gregory is on the run. She's looking for a place to lay low until things calm down back home. When she lands in Oklahoma, the last thing she expects to find is a friend in resident playboy Landon Phelps.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Outlander
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 53311
Read Count: 22109
Published: November 15 2017
Updated: October 03 2019


Title: Chapter 20: August 2011: Safe

Such a sweet and well written romantic story. Love the character and setting.

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Date: March 13 2019

Title: Chapter 2: Prologue: April 2009

Excellent beginning, looking forward to reading this story

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Date: March 13 2019

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Summary:

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Uhura receives an assignment, light years away from her husband, who misses who?

a separate story stands on its own.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15502
Read Count: 1931
Published: March 07 2019
Updated: April 13 2019


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A New Mission

Excellent start to the story!

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Date: March 13 2019

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Preparations

EXcellent!

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Date: March 13 2019

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-It is Time to go

Love this story, huge Spock and Uhura fan.

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Date: March 13 2019

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Missing You Already

Excellent!

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Date: March 13 2019

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Summary:

The Bones is the sequel to Outlander.

Four years after getting married, Landon and Daphne appear to be happily married. Behind closed doors, the two are struggling with fertility issues that threaten to claim their marriage.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Outlander
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 85331
Read Count: 11479
Published: January 08 2020
Updated: November 02 2022


Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

Excellent!!!

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Date: October 25 2021

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12

Excellent!!!!

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Date: December 15 2020

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13

Excellent!!!

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Date: December 24 2020

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

Excellent!!

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Date: February 21 2021

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

Excellent!!!!

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Date: June 24 2021

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

This such a sweet story.

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Date: April 25 2021

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Excellent!!!!

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Date: July 05 2021

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27

Brillant !!!

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Date: November 03 2022

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

Excellent!!!

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Date: July 19 2021

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

Excellent!!!!!

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Date: September 18 2021

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.