Title: Chance Encounter
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! It has become one of my favorites! The pace of the story was fast and exciting, but worth it! This may be one of your best! Don't take this the wrong way, but I think since you were limited to only 500 words, you used them well and did waste them on "filler" information. It would be nice to see if some of the other writers on the Chamber, can take up this challenge and do as well! I think you made Jacci proud for stepping up and holding it down!
I can only say you deserve all 10's, for the effort, the love, the romance, the content etc..... But mostly for the characters....Billy Weston and Paris Branch have love like no other!
Author's Response: Thank you Kitty. I did try to stay at 500 words, but failed for the most part. However you are right. It as a good exercise and it also allowed me to have frequent updates once I decided to continue the story. It flowed freely and I was able to get to 500 words without a lot of effort. Normally, I feel as though I have to do 4 to 5 thousand words to put out a chapter and that can be a challenge when you have an idea for a chapter, but then when you put that idea on paper, it's only 1000 words. Then I feel as if its not big enough to submit. This challenge changed all that. I could say what I want, stop where I want and I enjoyed writing this more than any other story I've put out there.
Im going to bring it to an end though, but you are right. I'm going to have to thank Jacci in the shout box.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
Date: August 08 2013