Penname: ElegantBunny [Contact]

Real name: Whitney

Member Since: September 11 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm an avid reader and someday Editor. I like to write and listen to music. My favorite stories to read are romance and usually themed. Anything else you want to know drop me a line. :3




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Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 315]
Summary:

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Taylor Mooreland has more than her share of problems. Her mother's an irresponsible dreamer who's more interested in floating from audition to audition than she is in paying her bills. So, Taylor's got to keep the ship afloat, taking care of her little brother and working to help pay the bills while she's going to school. And if life wasn't difficult enough, now she's gotten herself into quite the mess with a guy who thinks she's a man.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 48727
Read Count: 130222
Published: January 15 2009
Updated: June 09 2013


Title: Chapter 12: Twelve

I screamed when I saw this update. I'm sooooooo glad you've updated and are continuing. I'm beyond addicted to all of these characters and I'm loving the pace you've set up so far. Can't wait to see the next update. 

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2012

Title: Chapter 15: Fifteen

-UGLY SOBBING- I'm so happy it's complete!!!! I loved this story so much and you wrapped it up beautifully.



Author's Response:

I got someone to ugly sob? Victory! Hee. Thanks a lot! I appreciate it.

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
Summary:

 

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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80851
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012


Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I love Prom Night!!!! It's amazing to see the transformation of them both. Micah was the bullied now he's the dominator. I loved it. Loved that Lei could shock him as well. Amazingly hot. Great update. 

I also love the family input. It was cute and wholesome. 



Author's Response:

LOL.  Lei did shock him a bit.  Ah, but the weekend isn't over yet...

More to come soon!

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed
Date: October 20 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

 

 

 

His greatest gift....

 

He sits on the floor blanketed by dust, chipped paint and years of abandonment and waits. He hasn't to wait too long and soon Beethoven's Appassionata fills the air, the quiet and ominous arpeggios of the first movement, full of longing echoes through his very bones.

There is nothing else in this moment but the beauty of the melody cosseting him into a world unlike any he's ever known. The transition is gradual. Colors creep in from the edges of his vision turning his monochrome prison into a realm of diluted colors. The strains of piano chords ascend and descend skimming effortlessly over complex intervals with dexterity.

It is wondrous. Tints of violets, reds and greens wash over the gray coolness of his vision, giving him the ability to see color. Three months now she's been able to do this. Gift Cyvian with the impossible.

 

Will be his ultimate downfall...

In the ongoing war between Bloodletters and Werekins, demon mercenary Cyvian's allegiance is no one but himself. Having struck a deal with the Bloodletter king to keep the demons from his territory in exchange for temporary solace in his city, he does exactly that. But when that contract is broken, threatening the life of the human female he has vowed to protect, nothing and no one will stop him from keeping her safe.

 

(The amazing picture of my hero doesn't belong to me, but from a great artist on Deviantart!)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6650
Read Count: 4443
Published: November 30 2011
Updated: October 19 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

-twitches- I love this story so much already that i squealed when i saw the update. Can't wait for another update. Excellent job!

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 06 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

*Response to the Take Me Please Challenge*

Five miles outside of hell and a few meters from the devil's doorstep, Mari finds her favorite kind of challenge, a pretty boy with a big stick.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: Southern Gents
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9399
Read Count: 20099
Published: March 07 2012
Updated: March 08 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Your Cast

More, Yay!!!! Loving this duo so far. Really interested in seeing them set off.

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed
Date: March 07 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 615]
Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90702
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014


Title: Chapter 10: “Did you just say pussy?”

-sobs- I need more!!! I'm so dreading the moment Adam finds out about who she really is. But they're so cute and sexy together I know it'll all be okay. Adam talking about eating out...ugh yes. I love this so much. Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

 

How could she love them? They destroyed everything...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4425
Read Count: 6947
Published: August 21 2012
Updated: August 25 2012


Title: Chapter 1: 1 - Storms on the distance.

So I'm really really really hoping this is a menage story. With the way you're setting it up...I'm practically foaming at the mouth. I love the update. Thank you for posting.

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 23 2012

Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 288935
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

I got so excited you updated...This is beautiful and if you published it I'd pay to own it for good. You're a very talented writer and you've developed each and every character (and side character) so wonderfully. I'm looking forward to what you decide to do.

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I need a super cold shower now or my very own Henry because sweet baby jesus...That was amazingly hot and I love how attentive Henry was to her the entire time. They play so perfectly off of one another. You see how far Valerie has come from the first time they were truly intimate.  Amazing job!

I squeal for each and every one of your updates.

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This is so cute it hurts. And it's so well humored and written. I'm really loving every single update. I don't want Val to lose this one. He's a true gem

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed
Date: June 30 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I get so excited every time I see an update for this story. You are amazing and this story has me so hooked. I look forward a bunch to the next installment.

 

P.S. I NEED THEM TOGETHER!!!! -gross sobbing in a corner-

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I am Dead and Gone. I loved this interaction between Val and Henry. I love that they're so open with each other and Henry's so endearing and praiseful. And him going down on her.... I have no words.

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.