Penname: my inkpen leaks [Contact]

Real name: Jay

Member Since: December 12 2011

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Return To Me by chocolate470
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 105]
Summary:

For long as she can remember, Mika's life revolved around work and home until her research into the Ozuno clan changed her world forever. A ninja assassin named Raizo unexpectedly entered her life then quickly disappeared. Could a new assignment bring about his return?

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All publicly recognized characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The plot is the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 38881
Read Count: 25756
Published: October 26 2011
Updated: October 01 2013

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

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OMGosh this story is the BOMB! First & Foremost I just want to say that this chocolate girl right here LOVES her some Bi Rain!! Lmaoo Every since I've seen Ninja Assassin, I can't get enough of this guy. And once I found out just how talented he was, he caught my attention more than just looking sexy as ever in the film (Not to mention, he was in the film with a SISTAH..Lmaoo That's what really hooked me!) However, I just wanted to tell you that I love your story! I can understand Mika's feelings in the beginning when it came to Raizo. Even though they knew each other in a short amount of time, they had to endure so much TOGETHER in a short amount a time. And what woman in their right mind could forget a guy who drop lines like "Your heart is special" when the guy didn't even know her from his next door neighbor? Not even the smoothiest foo with the hottest game would use that line (I don't believe) Lol So I definitely understand her yearning to reconnect with him.

Now Raizo, I sympathis with what he is going through as well. He really doesn't know how to place his emotions when it comes to matters of the heart because of his horrible upbringing. But even through all that, his emotions aren't completely lost and Mika brings it out of him. He probably just didn't know how to handle it because he hasn't felt that way since Kirko which he expressed to Mika. So hopefully, they both work through it.

But they sure as hell worked the hell out on the dresser Lmaoo girl I was over her like YEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! Rain look some damn good in that photo wooo...

I know things might get tricky with this case. I can't wait to find out what happens next, and how Mika & Raizo will handle things. Keep up the excellent writing & I hope you don't end this too soon!!

--Jay



Author's Response:

Hey Hey my inkpen leaks,

This chocolate girl over here feels the same way too LOL!!! I absolutely dig both of them in Ninja Assassin and my brain instantly started working on a concept along certain lines that the story didn't want to touch. I sort of lost my way (which sometimes happens) but one my reviewer Flame help me sort out some things. I'm back on track although bc of preparing for the christmas and work this next chapter has been a total grind (don't worry I know what I want to write, I'm so tired putting pen to paper.) I hope it doesn't take until January to put up the next chapter, heaven forbid lol!

Back to Raizo - thats one sexy, delicious Asian dude and I couldn't resist adding that image. He must barely walk the streets LMAO!!! Glad you like the little sex scene I incorporated those two deserve a little action LOL!!!

Thanks so much for writing such an introspective review. I fully enjoyed reading all your thoughts and I'm also happy that your mind is immerse in my little story. As for ending it soon, I'll see where my mind takes me. Thanks! 

 Reviewer: my inkpen leaks Signed
Date: December 14 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.