Penname: Amiefuzzy [Contact]

Real name: Maria

Member Since: December 16 2008

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am not a writer like so many talented others, but am an avid reader.


I love this site and count myself lucky to be blessed by the work of so many talented authors!




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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34242
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Hmmm...the sharks are circling...too bad Griffin can't even rely on those that are supposed to be on his side.  Not really feeling Rich or Mickey, and I really hope Griffin does not underestimate either of them!

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Date: January 19 2015

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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

In 69 B.C  Gaius Julius Caesar, a loyal general of Rome and protector of his people, fell in love. It was not the love of his beautiful wife, Cornelia, nor was it the love of his promise to Rome, but of a simple slave girl who possessed his heart at the age of thirty-one, while she was seventeen. Her name was Nona, and this is their tale before her heart was captured by another and before the ides of March.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Historical
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29023
Read Count: 14136
Published: March 23 2014
Updated: March 25 2014


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I've really enjoyed reading this...watched a little bit of the show Spartacus but can't really remember any of the players.  I do remember it being really raunchy and bloody though :)

Too bad Nona died in the end, and I feel sorry for poor Gallius.

Very interesting read; thanks for sharing!

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Date: March 25 2014

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[Reviews - 572]
Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118379
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Lovers' Dance

Really enjoying your story...it's funny, interesting and overall an enjoyable read. Look forward to the next update!

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Date: May 27 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Noooo; don't give up now, Matt!  Madi really needs you and I truly believe that he is the one to help her get past her self-destructive behavior.  The fact that she opened up to him is telling, as it seems she has not even told her dearest friends why she's blamed herself for their deaths all this time.

I totally understand why Matt would begin to doubt himself, but I really hope they can get through this and he can help Madi deal with her parents' death once and for all.

Love this story, and please write it as you see fit; it's not for us the readers to tell you how to write your story.  It's your vision and I will read it any way you write it.  I think you're doing a fantastic job, btw!

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Date: July 22 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Gosh, I feel for Madi, but at the same time she's got to find a better way to cope with her grief as the way she is going about it right now is pretty self-destructive.  I know Matt will help her to see the light and force her to deal with her grief in a more constructive way, one way or another:)

So, Nathan is a convert, huh...that should be interesting!  Love Bella!

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Date: July 21 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Loving this story...I laughed out loud at Maddie's outburst at the auction!  She is truly something else!  I really love how innocent and sweet she is and how open her nature is.  Love that she has a fierce ally in Bella!

Yes!  So happy Matt got the truth out of Grumps and that he jumped so strongly to her defence!  Now, at least Grumps know how Matt feels; can't wait to see if he actually trys to apologize to Maddie!  I can see that being quite a challenge for him!

Can't wait for the next update; this story is soo good!

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Date: July 07 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I really love this couple...Madi is a hoot...love her character.  Love Bella too!

I'm glad Madi is going to enjoy her relationship with Matt, rather than succumb to grumps' wishes!  I hope she either tells what was said to her or Matt finds out somehow.  He needs to set the old geezer straight...something tells me Matt is not going to give up Madi without a fight!

Loving this story, and I'm really looking forward to the next installment!



Author's Response:

So glad you like my story. Matt & Madi are sweet together :)

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Date: June 30 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

OMG...have I told you lately how mch I absolutely LOVE this story???  Matt and Madi are the most adorable couple ever!  

So glad Maddie told off her leaching relatives; I hate that it caused her pain, but it was a long time coming!

Poor Matt...I felt for him; you had me a little nervous when he was acting all cold towards her...phew!  Thank goodness that didn't last!

Now back to England where it will be time to work on the other side of the family to bring them around.

Can't wait for the next update!

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Date: August 27 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Awww...love these two!  Maddie's family is a trip.  Seem like a bunch of users to me :(  Poor Maddie!

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Date: August 15 2014

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[Reviews - 148]
Summary:

   In the year of 1648 B.C, the Nubians reigned over Pharaohs army and won with victory over the territory of the West Nile. In celebration King Kladon communes a marriage for his daughter's hand.


   Princess Kira is a highly trained warrior of the Nubian Kingdom, alongside her boisterous brother, Keitou. When she is told that she is to marry the Royal Lords son, Akisou, she is furious and rides away from the Nubian Palace. However, Kira finds herself caught in a trap when her and her party are ambushed by Pharaohs soldiers.

   Pharaoh Raad is a stoic and tenacious king who shows no mercy when it comes to slaying his enemies...all except one. Only trying to prove vengeance against the Nubian King, the mighty Pharoah himself cannot deny his budding desire for the beautiful, yet dangerous Queen to be.

   War will sprout...love will flow...who will be the true winner of the Nile.


WARNING: Graphic violence, and much nudity.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Historical
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 49658
Read Count: 34598
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: October 15 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am loving this so far...it is unusual for a woman to be a skilled warrior, so I am liking that aspect.  I'm sure Kira and Raad are in for some great clashes ahead.  Looking forward to the next update!

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Date: June 20 2014

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[Reviews - 165]
Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 57815
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

This proves to be the start to a very interesting ride.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: June 20 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Loving the development of this story; even though Richard is acting a bit like a creeper right now...lol.  I wonder how Camryn will react to the BDSM side of Richard's lifestyle...

Yes, Annabelle is definitely going to be a problem, and will not go quietly, even though she is the reason she no longer has Richard...isn't it true that you don't know what you have until you lose it.  Will be interesting to see how she deals with the new "interloper"...lol.

More please:)

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Date: June 30 2014

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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

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Four adopted brothers who share a bond closer than any natural DNA  come home after being summoned by Evelyn Mercer, their mother.  This is the story of the Mercer Men and the women they love.



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Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 98148
Read Count: 24862
Published: July 08 2014
Updated: July 24 2014


Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 The Dance

Poor Justin; if I were him I would murder Juju when we got home...she orchestrated that whole fiasco with Marilyn just to put her in her place, not thinking about how it could possibly affect Justin.  Glad she was able to make it up to him somewhat towards the end though...

Bobby is too funny; love how protective he is of Juliana and how easily he has slipped into "daddy mode".

Loving this story!

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Date: July 22 2014

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Homecoming

Brenda, you've done it again!  Love everything you write, and the way you manage to inject spirituality into your writing, while maintaining mainstream interest is pretty awesome!

Love all the different roads the Mercer brothers have taken and the strong mother that unifies them all.  I never saw the movie, but you make me want to go rent it:)

Anywho, looking forward to the next update!

 

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Date: July 21 2014

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Puppy Love and Parenting

Thanks for the update...hope Juju's invitation to Bae is taken well and she'd not seen as being too forward; that would crush her...

Love the fact that Jerry is so determined to be a positive influence in Teresa's life and the father-figure she so desperately needs!  It's so sad that experience made her doubt his intentions initially; she is too young to have that kind of baggage, but alas things like that happen every day to young girls and it's so sad.  I'm glad they are getting to bond though, and spend some quality time together.  I still think Teresa should tell her grandmother though, so she knows what happened and can take steps to make sure those two are not left alone unsupervised.

 

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Date: July 23 2014

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 136]
Summary:

Chase James is Chris' older brother from Making It Hard For Me. Chase recently filed for divorce freeing himself from a woman he never loved. Although he would like to pursue a meaningful relationship with someone, now is not the time. With Chris starting his internship program, Chase is down a mechanic and in serious need of help. Maya has lived a sheltered life helping her father run his Auto Repair Shop until he passed away 6 months ago. Without enough customers to support the shop, Maya was forced to close it. After several months without work, she is in desperate need of a job.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19395
Read Count: 40427
Published: August 11 2014
Updated: December 22 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- November

Great start!  Can't wait to read more.  Love these two already.  It's great to hear that Chase has gotten rid of Angie, but I hate that he has to pay her deceitful behind alimony!



Author's Response:

I know. I think they will be adorable together. I think Chase doesn't mind paying as long as he gets rid of her. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: August 11 2014

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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

 

 

One night of passion. That all started with a grapefruit.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2527
Read Count: 1254
Published: September 25 2014
Updated: September 25 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Play

Wow; that was so hot!  Great job on your first writing foray; very enjoyable read:)

Hope to see more of your work.



Author's Response:

This was a tough one because I really wanted to channel the "steaminess" from the situation into words. I'm happy you liked it and I'll definitely be posting more in the near future. Thanks for reading and reviewing Amiefuzzy.

CG

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Date: September 25 2014

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[Reviews - 95]
Summary:

 

 

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Joss just knows this summer will change her life... If she can manage to tolerate her bunk leader 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 14449
Read Count: 16599
Published: November 08 2014
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 5: Country Club Fresh

Loving this story, it's sweet, cute and quite refreshing.  Love how Obie just laid it all out there because Joss is so clueless, lol.

I hate it that you had to go through all that crap house-hunting; at least you found out now, rather than down the road when you had already moved and started the new job.  Something better will come along that will make this opportunity pale in comparison; just don't give up!  Good luck with everything!



Author's Response:

I love that Joss is so confused about the situation. She has no idea what to do with him its so cute. 

Yeah I'm glad I learned before I put down a deposit and stuff. Thanks for the encouragement I really needed it.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2014

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Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78669
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - T.M.I. (Revised)

You know it's funny when they say "be careful what you wish for; you might just get it"...seems truer words have never been spoken when it comes to Diya.  Poor Brandon; who knew the depth of pain behind the story of that tattoo!

I love it that they are so into each other, but I can see their various camps pulling them from either end and the foundation that they build will have to withstand all manner of obstacles, from Brandon's fan club led by Marisol and the evil she-cat to Diya's over-the-top, interfering family headed by dear ole daddy:)

This is building up to be another thoroughly entertaining tale and I am strapping myself in for another incredible ride, as you never disappoint:)



Author's Response:

Yeah, poor Diya got a bit more than she was bargaining for.  This may be the end of story time after all.  

Your visions for their future are spot on.  The only question is can they withstand the inevitable storms, internal and external?  

So glad to have you along for this ride, Amiefuzzy!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: July 14 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Kiss and Telltale

JJ, you have another winner on your hands here; thoroughly enjoying the tale so far!  I understand where Diya is coming from and I get that she is reluctant to have her feelings hurt again, but unfortunately love comes with no guarantees so she will just have to step out in faith.

I wonder what deep, dark secrets Brandon is hiding; he's definitely been through some painful and dark times in the past.  I really wish they would both open up and be honest with each other, but I know that is easier said than done.

Yeah, Marisol getting attacked is going to be a negative for Diya, as Brandon will most likely shower her with attention and concern, which may leave Diya feeling like the odd man out.  Of course Diya can't object without seeming heartless, so she'll likely be in a tough spot.

Can't wait to see what you have in store for our dear couple...should be very interesting:)



Author's Response:

You're right.  Diya will eventually have to take the difficult step of letting Brandon know about her family and them about him.  And it'll be better if she takes that step herself rather than to be pushed.  Time is not on her side.

Brandon's secrets are...well, I'll just let you read and find out for yourself.  I think when you learn them, you'll completely understand why he was so reluctant to share, even if you can't get behind that.

Diya will definitely be in a tough spot in the aftermath of Marisol's attack.  The only question is "how tough" and "how long"?

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Amiefuzzy!!!  So glad you're enjoying Brandon and Diya's story so far.

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Date: September 19 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Night Light

Hmmm...interesting.  I can't say I'm surprised that Marisol did not tell Brandon that Diya called, and of course we all know that she didn't forget.

Love that Diya and Brandon did somewhat talk and that they seem to be okay, for now at least.  It'll be interesting to see how the Marisol issue will pan out and how Diya deals with it.

Thanks for the background info on Diya and her daddy...sure sheds some light on their relationship.  Still doesn't give him the right to try to control her life, but it does shed some insight into their relationship dynamic.



Author's Response:

Dealing with the issue of Marisol, whether real or imagined, will play a significant part in the plot as the story continues, with the focus being on how Diya deals with it and her family--namely her father.  Does she keep quiet about her Marisol misgivings and risk losing Brandon, or speak up and still risk losing him to because he feels she doesn't trust him?  And will she risk her relationship with her father (the one member of her family with whom she shares a close, loving relationship) or risk losing the man she loves?  We shall see.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Amiefuzzy!

 

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Date: September 21 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Fallen Angels

JJ, I must say you've done it again!  I just got caught up on this wonderful tale, and I must say that though I am Team Brandon, these last two chapters threw me for a loop.  Brandon is a complex character, and I get that he wants Diya to open up and tell him how she really feels, but that works both ways; he needs to be ready to reciprocate.  I know when you've been hurt in the past it's hard to open up and trust the new person to not add to your hurts, but sometimes you just have to take a leap of faith.

It'll be interesting to see where this couple goes from here...Branny has some explaining to do and it'll be interesting how he makes it up to Diya.  As always you have me totally invested in your characters and feeling their pain and angst.

Great writing as always; welcome back!



Author's Response:

Thanks Amiefuzzy!!!  So happy to hear you're enjoying Brandon and Diya's story.  Now, on to the foolishness.  

Brandon is all about being open and honest in the here and now.  But he has no desire to go digging around in the past, especially when it comes to Tyler and his ex, for reasons that will become increasingly clear as the story progresses.  More on that to come : )

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Date: January 13 2016

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - [Bran]ded

Goodness, Brandon and Diya are so unbelievable cute together!  I just love how they communicate, not only through words (though that aspect does need some workJ), but mostly through their actions.  I know Brandon is still not secure in the knowledge that he really, truly deserves Diya’s love, the fact that she is continually showering him with the same at some point will register, and he will have to accept it.

 

Can’t wait for the next update!  I see this relationship progressing in a new, steamy direction J or maybe that’s just the perv. in me lol.



Author's Response:

Lol!  Perv or not, you're right on the money ; )  

Diya asking Brandon to choose her tattoo and it's location went a long way at convincing Brandon of Diya's devotion, if not his deservingness.  But you know there's always something or someone waiting in the wings to create confusion and doubt.  Who and/or what we'll soon see.  Thanks Amiefuzzy!!!

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Date: March 04 2016

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Surprise, Surprise

JJ, thank you for the double-update!  Loving this story!

Diya and her Branny are the cutest! I do understand where Diya is coming from with her over-the-top family, but she really needs to take the leap of faith and trust that Branny will leap with her!  Baby steps though, lol.  I like that even though she was terrified of her father's reaction, she still acknowledged Brandon, so there is that.

I would love for you to continue to update when you have time, and not necessarily wait until the whole book is completed, but that is just my humble opinion...I will read it anyway you decide to write it...love all your stories!

Can't wait to see what happens next...poor papa...lol

 



Author's Response:

Lol.  Poor Papa indeed.  He's having a rough time of it, and things are destined to get worse for all parties involved.  Thanks for giving my girl credit.  Looks like she's gonna get a big push into that leap of faith.  Brandon is sure to leap with her; it's the landing they need to worry about.  

Thanks so much for the input, and for reading and reviewing, Amiefuzzy!!!  

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Date: June 17 2016

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Summary:

Need I say more?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4858
Read Count: 1220
Published: September 16 2015
Updated: September 16 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay, Rich's story is here!  So happy, as he was one of my fave characters in Consequence. 

Good to know my fave couple and their two-bundles-of-joy-to-be are still doing well, and still as in-love as ever!

This should be a very interesting ride, as Rich definitely needs to be brought to his knees:)

More please:)



Author's Response:

Oh, yes he does.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Amiefuzzy!!!

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Date: September 19 2015

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