Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Kiss and Telltale
JJ, you have another winner on your hands here; thoroughly enjoying the tale so far! I understand where Diya is coming from and I get that she is reluctant to have her feelings hurt again, but unfortunately love comes with no guarantees so she will just have to step out in faith.
I wonder what deep, dark secrets Brandon is hiding; he's definitely been through some painful and dark times in the past. I really wish they would both open up and be honest with each other, but I know that is easier said than done.
Yeah, Marisol getting attacked is going to be a negative for Diya, as Brandon will most likely shower her with attention and concern, which may leave Diya feeling like the odd man out. Of course Diya can't object without seeming heartless, so she'll likely be in a tough spot.
Can't wait to see what you have in store for our dear couple...should be very interesting:)
Author's Response: You're right. Diya will eventually have to take the difficult step of letting Brandon know about her family and them about him. And it'll be better if she takes that step herself rather than to be pushed. Time is not on her side.
Brandon's secrets are...well, I'll just let you read and find out for yourself. I think when you learn them, you'll completely understand why he was so reluctant to share, even if you can't get behind that.
Diya will definitely be in a tough spot in the aftermath of Marisol's attack. The only question is "how tough" and "how long"?
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Amiefuzzy!!! So glad you're enjoying Brandon and Diya's story so far.
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed
Date: September 19 2015