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Member Since: December 17 2008

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Love AA and I/R reading. Honestly just discovered alot of it about 6 years ago.

Love some of the authors and creators of this site from another site and would love to read new work from other authors as well.




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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 424]
Summary:

She despised celebrities, maybe even hated them. That was until she met him. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 88706
Read Count: 297858
Published: June 18 2012
Updated: April 23 2013


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I don't see why Keyshia doesn't think she can have a relationship with Jason and be his PA as well? Does she not think they are mature enough to handle it?

Good stuff!

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Date: August 21 2012

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Sometimes I wonder if Keyshia is bipolar! She breaks off the relationship because she doesn't want to complcate things by working for a man -her boyfriend - that she's alrrady sleeping with, yet she has no problem in asking him to help undress her for bed??? What does she want? But before that she gets weird because as she woke up from a nap laying on top of him. Really, Keyshia? And why would she blush because Carter looked at her weird? Grow up girl!

 

Good stuff!

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Date: August 27 2012

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

These two need to stop playing because this is just ridiculous! 

And I ask again....is Keyshia bipolar?! What is her problem with Jason, really? Because I really she's the one with it.



Author's Response:

i think everyone's just a little confused. she doesn't have a problem with him. she's just really hesistant about being with him because she's afraid of what people might think, also she doesn't want anything having to do with being famous. 

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Date: September 04 2012

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Keyshia really has put herself -and Jason- through nonsense for no good reason that I can see. What has this accomplished her? Did she think that she couldn't be his assistant in day and his woman at night? As his assistant she practically runs his life; both personal and professional, at times. What is the difference in this case?

Good stuff!

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Date: September 14 2012

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I want to hit Eric with a frying pan sooo bad!!! I cant believe him.

Key and Jay need to sort this out now, for real.

 

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Date: October 16 2012

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

He should tell it back to her! I'm tired of these two acting like dummies dancing around each other already! She's going to have that wife-beater waiting to happen named Eric to deal with and Jason is going to have to deal with that psycho Alyssa! Geez, they know how to pick them!

Good!!

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Date: November 01 2012

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm glad that's cleared up. Now these two can get on with it.

I really can't stand Alicia, or her loser brother. 

 

 

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Date: November 12 2012

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Time for a family reunion? Hardly!Keep stepping grandma!

Alicia is vile and I'm glad she got knocked the hell out...lol!

Nice!

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Date: December 07 2012

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I just want to know what that old hag got?

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Date: January 01 2013

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Loved the chapter.I'm glad his mom turned out to be so sweet.

Well this is good; she's preggers and he asked her to marry him before she told him. Thats makes all the difference, I think.

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Date: February 12 2013

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21-Part2

Yayyyyy!!!! I loved it! Beautiful job tying up the loose ends.

Excellent!



Author's Response:

thanks! means a lot of because i honestly tried so hard haha turns out i forgot to talk about a few people

you're lovely for sticking through til the end :)

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Date: April 23 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

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A cop and a assistant discrict attorney hot moment.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1206
Read Count: 7759
Published: July 01 2012
Updated: June 17 2017


Title: One Last Time

Loooks interesting. Can't wait for more.

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Date: July 02 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

Noah Bianchi has been in lust for his new secretary Eliza from the moment he met her, but how will he introduce her to his dominant lifestlye? By bending her over his desk of course.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7176
Read Count: 8084
Published: July 26 2012
Updated: August 10 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Come Into My Web

Ok, while reading this, I kept getting that much angrier at Eliza. However, I must confess that I don't know much about the Dom-Sub "lifestyle" such as it is. I agree that I don't like seeing her that submissive. To me, it reeks of weakness, but I guess that's the attraction for a Dom in that life. I think you can be submissive to your man and still be a strong woman. That doesn't- at least not yet- seem to be the case with Eliza. She's described as quiet, shy and mousy; and her actions support the assumption that this means she doesn't stand up for herself. I understand alpha, but Noah is a bit off-putting. He seems a bit extreme. However, he did muse that it was a testing process for her, so maybe it looks worse than it is. I'm probably all wrong about both of them and they will completely surprise me...lol!

You have definitely got my attention with this so I'm anxious to see where you take us with this.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Come Into My Web

I agree with pmgayles review. For all of those reasons, it is a little hard to read. However, I'm sure you're going to do it justice, so I'm in it to the finish. Curious to see what you do with it.


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Date: August 11 2012

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 193]
Summary:

Carmen Shelly preyed on married men and usually won her sought after prize. Business is booming until her partner sets his sights on her single sister.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41535
Read Count: 39601
Published: July 29 2012
Updated: February 28 2016


Title: Chapter 5: Four- I declare...War {glimpse into the mind of a psychopath}

Holy crap, this woman is wacked all the way out! I cant even believe what she is saying and doing to people. There has to be some justice and have this lunatic taken down before she really gets to Nichole. I'm also hoping Nichole gets wise to her and has something good for her. And Richard needs to be at the ready because he knows firsthand what she's like.

 

This is like a soap! 

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Date: August 25 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Five- Drawing a line in the sand

Carmen is truly a disgusting waste of space! I cant believe this woman, I really cant. The absolute glee she displayed at the prospect of this man she hired to rape and hurt her sister was scary. Someone not wanting her is just not an option in her world, is it? Ugh!!

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Date: September 14 2012

Title: Chapter 8: Seven- Going off the deep end

I really need to know why Richard told Carmen that he was thinking about seeing Danny? That was a stupid move considering how distrustful he is of her to begin with. Why would he say anything to her about the attack on Nichole if he actually thought this man was connected to Carmen in any way. That really didn't make sense to me.

I hope Victoria, Richard, Nichole and Audrey somehow get together and do Carmen in!

Danny needs to make it to bear witness to Carmen and her deeds.

Carmen is just so far gone its unreal! Her hatred for Nichole is epic and she really will take everyone down so long as Nichole is in the numer. Wow!

Nice!

P.S I like the new pic of Nichole better, too.

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Date: March 21 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

Stop this crazy woman!!

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Date: October 04 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 282]
Summary:

 

Cara Nightingale had made the same mistake twice.  Could she recover from past mistakes and get her life in order?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66737
Read Count: 81069
Published: August 07 2012
Updated: October 15 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

My initial reaction is not a favorable one in either Cara or Stephan's camp, so I'll withhold it until there is more. I will say I hope she doesn't give her babies up because she's too scared of what Stephan might say. If she tells him and he kicks her to the curb, then that's one thing, but to deny her babies their family because of what she thinks will happen; that sucks on her part. 

This is going to be an emotional one.

Good stuff!

 

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Date: August 08 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

And that's why I withheld my initial comments about them; I would have misjudged Stephan, somewhat. He came off as a highhanded snob, but that's not exactly the truth regarding him. However, if he know about hard work, scrubbing toilets and the like, he could show that with a little more humanity in the workplace. I can also see he will take his responsibility to Cara and the children extremely seriously. He wants them all and he's not even trying to hide the fact. And I can see how he's taking offense to looking like some careless jerk who would run out on his kids when he didn't know about them, in front of her parents. I'd be mad, too.

Well, Cara really has no excuse. No good one, anyway. She should have told him. She was willing to drastically change the lives of her children based on an assumption. There are women out there who have had a helluva lot less to work with and told the fathers. Now she has to face the music.

Good stuff!

 


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Date: August 08 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Paying the Piper

Lol...Cara's parents are too funny! And they were basically right. This won't kill them. It's being done backwards, but better late than never.

Well, it's a doozy, but I think Cara is learning her lesson. I think she's really beginning to understand what she did. No need to keep beating the horse.

I really cant wait for this thing to get started with them.

Good stuff!

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Date: August 09 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 A Meeting of the Minds

I don't like this constant harp about Cara being "slow" that's gong around. I think that's the wrong word her father chose. It makes her sound weak and stupid. Has she made bad decisions? Yes. Does she need more confidence and a backbone? Absolutely! But not being able to handle stressors or stress as well as some others doesn't make her "slow." Very poor choice of words on her dads part because it holds such a negative connotation. It makes her appear damaged before she even gets there.

I think I'm gonna like Stephan's parents.

Good stuff!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Maybe "slow" isn't a good word to describe Cara.  Her father didn't mean it in a negative way really, but I understand your point.  Cara just marches to a different drummer.  She is not stupid.  

Her point of view is coming up in the next chapter so perhaps everyone will understand her a little bit better.

 

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Date: August 10 2012

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Visit

Ok, it's all out of everybody's systems now. Now they can get to the rest of it. Glad they admitted their feelings because this might help Cara some.

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Date: August 11 2012

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

That whole comparison with Cara and her mother was completely uncalled for, to me. What does tearing Cara down amd presenting Joanne as the "acceptable" type is...ughh! Douglas is a jerk! 

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Date: August 28 2012

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

You know, Douglas is just pissing me off now. I'm looking at this joker on the one hand, insulting Cara about her looks, the hue of her skin, and insinuating she's some loose woman who is trapping his nephew; while on the other hand, openly lusting after this same "scheming" woman's mother himself, in front of her husband and child. So the question begs to be aske; what "values" is he displaying with this behavior? How does he think that what he's doing is somehow better?

And another thing, what's up with Joanne? She's just sitting there like a bump on a log with Douglas acting like this in front of her family? She's not stupid, his intent is clear and they all know it. After all, he's hardly making a secret of it. She doesn't have to fight Cecil's battles for him as the man, but I'd definitely let Douglas know that his opinion of not only her daughter, but his loosebehavior, dont line up, and is not appreciated. And she doesn't have to go off or get in the gutter either; just be classy and intelligent in her responses and reactions about it. I really expected her to call him out some on it because Douglas is the worst kind of hypocrite!

And poor Cara; I don't know why Anja put on this big production, and who for? Stephan and Cara didn't really want or need all of that. And yes, Cara agreed, but only because Anja was speeding headlong into it. With those "family" members all in one place, on her all at once, its just something she could have eased into with the marriage itself. Just because of who Cara is, Anja maybe should have kept it smaller. Having said that, I think Cara should have stayed there with Stephan, if for no other reason that to show them they didn't hit a nerve, even if they had. Never let them see you sweat! I hope these little run-ins will make Cara stronger each time.

Good stuff!

 

 



Author's Response:

Anja is a bit out of control, however in her defense she had the best of intentions.  She has been wanting her only child to get married for years and now that it's a reality, she's a bit excited.  She will not tolerate anyone talking bad about her new 'daughter' though.  She was ready to bitch slap her own sister.  LOL

Joanne did handle Douglas quietly.  She didn't want a scene caused drawing attention to them.  Cecil got his point across and Joanne was more direct with Douglas once they got on the dance floor.  The dance was short and she came back to the table alone. Josef knew something was up and confronted his uncle.  That was when Fawn and Gena swooped in.  LOL

Douglas (like some older senior folks) thinks that age has given him license to do and say whatever he pleases.  Stephan is fed up and so is Josef.  More is coming at the Morning after breakfast.  LOL

thanks always for you in depth reviews, Flikchick. 

 

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31 2012

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