Penname: flikchick [Contact]

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Member Since: December 17 2008

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Love AA and I/R reading. Honestly just discovered alot of it about 6 years ago.

Love some of the authors and creators of this site from another site and would love to read new work from other authors as well.




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Summary:

A story how even though you think you have your life planned out, cupid's arrow will hit you when you least expect it. Chris and Kat both attend Tulane University. This is Chris last year and after graduation he's leaving town. But, what happens when a beautiful African American woman catches his eye?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 55615
Read Count: 374227
Published: March 01 2014
Updated: August 20 2014


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

What the hell happened? Kat should not have encouraged him to fight, sure, but he didn't have to go along with it either. And so maybe they need to talk about how they handle those types of situations in the future.



Author's Response:

Next chapter we'll find out what's really bothering Chris about the whole situation. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2014

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Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 54514
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Totally missed this update! 

Hope Charlie is going to be ok with what she's seeing...lol!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

OK, so I just read this whole thing and I while I'm a little unsure of what to think, I'm in. As someone said, it went from a racially charged town she managed to move to to a shifter tale. Not that it can't be both, it just seemed to come out of nowhere.

For Charlie, I see a really good backstory with that parent thing going on. As far as her personality, I'm still on the fence about her. I find it hard to believe that she would notlock her doors given the trouble she's having with the town. And, she lives in a remote wooded area alone? Simple common sense goes a long way for me. 

Same for Reese, I think. I'm still trying to figure him out as well.

Keep it coming....

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Date: August 12 2014

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Wow....lol! Nothing else to say!

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Date: September 14 2014

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Ha! Well, suck it up, Charlie. You couldn't lose him now if you tried!

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Date: November 24 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
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Things should have been simple. She would go to university, get a job, make enough money to travel the world and have numerous affairs. So where had she gone wrong? How did she end up in the arms of a sexy man from out of space? And why was he so sure that she was the only girl for him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1402
Read Count: 1488
Published: May 14 2014
Updated: May 14 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Prolouge

Ok. I'm in.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.

Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19790
Read Count: 43971
Published: May 20 2014
Updated: September 13 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm loving the buildup, but now its time to find out what the deal is between these two.



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Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I hate conniving bitches!! And I hate more that she clearly got away with something major. Make her pay.

As for the baby, I'm going to assume it isn't his because I'd hate for a child to suffer because of this. Although I do see why Jace could possibly do that given his mother. She's someone who doesn't know when to step off, so the hard line has to be taken with her.

Waiting for the  rest....



Author's Response:

Jace is going to have to get Sara in check and quick, if he wants to have a shot at Breezy. Sara is use to getting whst she wants and she knows that Breezy is Jace's weakness. So, she's going to do whatever she can to keep them apart. 

Thanks for reading and keep the reviews coming. They are my motivation. Stay tuned.

Yevette

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Date: July 09 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Ok. This was transitional of a sort. Breezy now knows his marital status. This is also Jace's chance to start over and make his case and state his intentions going forward into the future with Breezy. However, all this can happen after the explanations. I need to know!!!


And what did Paul mean Jace has done something else?


Wating for more......


Good stuff!



Author's Response:

I love love love a reader that pays attention to details. Yeah, this is sort of a transitional period for Jace. He knows that he wants Breezy but he's gotta figure out a way to get her to trust him again. 

As for Breezy, well, she still isn't ready to let Jace in on her life. She just wants to get this wedding overwith and get back to the safety of her home in Texas. Away from any drama and to keep her past hidden. But as we all know, things have a way of coming to the light. 

So stay tuned. And thanks for reading. I really appreciate it. 

Yevette

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 (continued)

Wow! Aside from the obvious with Sara, is the base of this problemnot being sorted and resolved was that they didn't communicate with each other when the needed to? 

Without knowing the specifics yet, I will say that they both made it way too easy for Sara to get as far as she did. And that's by not talking. 

Breezy I see is a runner. That's hard to handle from a partner. She doesn't stand still long enough to listen to anything so this is what happens.

Jace lets her run. Even with Breezy not being there, what just happened with Sara, shouldn't have. He should have had this cleaned up with her long ago. She walked in like she owned the place and him, insulted his character concerning Breezy, insulted Breezy, then walked the hell out like the Queen of everthing while basically laughing at them all. Really?

They both need to wake up and make some decisions here. However, we'll see what happens next.

 

Nice!!



Author's Response:

They have a big communication problem. Breezy is going to have to stand her ground. She has let too many things in her life go unresolved with no closure. Jace, although a fighter, has got to learn to fight a little harder for what he wants. He's kind of use to getting what he wants and not having to work at it where women are concerned. But Breezy poses a challenge and she always has. He wants to be more for her. But he just doesn't know how.

And Sara has gotten away with her behavior for far too long. She needs to accept the fact that they are no longer together and let Jace move on with his life.

I'm pretty certain that it's Breezy that she has a problem with. That's because Breezy has managed to do what none of the others have. She captured his heart. But as long as Sara thinks he's miserable, then she's happy. She doen't really care about the other women. Because she knows that he does not love them.

But things are about to get fun!! We've got a wedding to help plan and it should be very interesting especially with Phoenix.

So stay tuned. I love your reviews. They make me really think. And as always thanks for reading.

Yevette

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 (continued)

Ok, that whole scene with Sara...yeah. She and Jace are NOT married, she comes in demanding explanations from him about his behavior, and she's clearly pregnant with someone else's baby? The background on her in this story is gonna be something else! I can't wait to hear it.



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Date: July 11 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds interesting!



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Date: May 21 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good! Lets see what is what!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Please stay tuned. 

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Date: June 17 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What on earth happened here???



Author's Response:

LOL!!! Hang on. We're about to find out what the deal is with Jace and his crazy ex wife. 

Thanks for reading and keep the reviews coming. I really appreciate them. 

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Date: June 29 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I want to know what Breezy has been doing in Texas all this time? What is she hiding? So I hope they really talk and this will finally answer some questions.

Awww....the boys are just acknowledging the future lady of the house is all.

 



Author's Response:

The two of them are going to do some talking in this next chapter and we'll get a better understanding of what has been going on with these two plus some secrets will be revealed. Stay tuned. Thanks for reading. 

Much Love

Yevette

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Date: September 14 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Forbidden Fruit

Magdalena was the only daughter of Ezra, the Great. She was the fruit that was never to sampled until an Alpha won her hand in the competition that was to be held at her 18th moon.  Now with her festival for her birthday about to start, who will win the right to claim her?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15365
Read Count: 6992
Published: May 24 2014
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Just hooked up to this story.

Ok, for me, all of her family, but especially her mother, is getting on my last nerve! Why speak in riddles? Just tell the girl what she needs to know! I felt Lena's frustration with that. And then to put her in her lap and hum a tune when she expresses her anger?? Really? And what is her father all about? Is he doing this for more power, or is this some form of protection  for her and him? And I'm still not sure her girlfriends are much help to her in any practical way.

Maddox, yeah I think he's her soul/true mate.

And with how she's watched from the time she gets up until the time she goes to bed, how did Alexi manage to start pulling her clothes off and those two almost start a brawl?

Alexi, not sure about him yet. He seems harmless enough, but that seems kind of creepy on him. Not sure.

This will be an interesting story....



Author's Response:

Maggie, mother is only trying to do what she thinks is for the best so she has a hard time trying to completely understand what is going on. And for Maggie duty comes before everything, right? and thank you for your review.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2015

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Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 57825
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I just reading this entire story. Wow!

I know next to nothing about the whole Dom/Sub lifestyle but I'm giving them all the side eye right about now! Thank you for this story because I think I'm going to get an education of sorts with it!

Camryn is making me shake my head at her. She first seemed like she had it together, but now I'm not so sure. She's coming off wishy-washy now.

What she finds intolerable in Trey, Richard displays in spades! She hates Trey's possessiveness, but Richard is nuts with it! Maybe its the Dom thing. I don't know. However, what I thought I knew about it is that both parties had to mutually agree to the parameters - whatever they may be - so both parties woud have mutual satisfaction and gratification. And maybe I thought it was limited to the bedroom; clearly, here, its not. She goes along and just reacts to it all. Now all of this with that crazy ass Annabelle? I'm sorry, but is getting a good nut off with him worth what she worked so damn hard for? This man is practically a stranger to her. The reality is she doesn't  really know jack sh*t about him. Or what he has going on with Annabelle. And, honestly, Richard creeps me out! Sort of strolling around with the stones to be the dominant peacock in this situation with Annabelle, Camryn, and Graham!!

Richard, with the threatening to bust down doors, telling her what to do, being rather demanding of her; all along with that temper that switches on and off too damn quick for me. Red flags in my world! Again, maybe its the Dom thing. I would have been offended, and disturbed, after that conversation with Phyllis. Because thats exactly how it played out with Ricahrd and Graham. 

And Graham....with his equally weird ass, taking his junk out to stroke one out is automatic grounds for dismissal in my book too!

Camryn was right about one thing; he needs to get his sh*t together concerning Annabelle. She's stupid for letting him drag her any place behind that, and damn sure not to wait outside in the car while he handles Annabelle in the house?!!! And then what? Just go to his place for the night and act like that didn't happen? Or screw it away? Is he for real? The Dom/Sub relationship has that kind of power? If thats where he's headed, he has no right to place her in that kind of position and she shouldn't let him. Camryn is reading up on it, but is she ready for that as alifestyle

Definitely keep this coming! Can't wait!

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Date: November 24 2014

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

And how much do I love that Cam let her inner gangsta out to play? LOL!! She took it to miss Roberta...ha!

I love that her sibs and the kids all piled into that hotel room with her and just hung out!

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Date: May 14 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Wow...Nora is a trip! Nyesha needs to take note from Camryn because this probably partly why she chooses men that end up touching her little girl; her parents! Cam was right. Nora absolutely doesn't have ANY say about her and Trent. Does she actually think she can bully up a relationship between them on Cam's end? 

Cam is sitting here telling this woman all about Trent; that this dude aint right and Nora is here channeling her whole life dealing with her ex through Cam and Nyesha?!! I wonder has she seen anyone professionally about this. Her wole take on relationships is warped and unhealthy.

What she needs to do with Ricahrd there is tell her mother, Trent and whoever else that's sitting there to their faces that she and Trent are NOT a couple anymore, she does NOT want him, she has moved on, and this is who she's moved on with! Say that loud, make that extremely clear to Nora and Trent; then if Nora decides she wants to play deaf and stupid, its on her whatever she gets from Cam. She's stepping over the line with this and Cam is the one having to deal with Trent the nut. This man is following her all around the place and that aint funny.

Good chapter!!!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15 2015

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Hmmm....just when Ricahrd almost had me.....

I'll have to be honest, Richard made the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. It's not so much that he blew up, people can do that, its HOW he blew up. And for me, an apology and making me breakfast couldn't necessarily erase that. When you see/suspect red flags, pay heed. There were a lot of control issues flying out of him at that moment. I didn't like the manhandling and throwing; or her telling him out of fear she'd never leave him. What was up with THAT? I was worried for a minute there.

See, I forgot that at the beginning of this story, Richard was being a little creepy about Camryn himself. He was doing a little stalking of his own. He likes to control and I was hoping it was limited to sex, but when you cuss and yell at me, tell me I can't leave, and throw my shit across a room and break a freaking mirror, we have a problem. But that's just me.

Maybe this all part of the lifestyle and its just a common reaction for such. I'm just thinking on the flip side of this chapter. 

Good stuff!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 18 2015

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Glad Richard wasn't crazy in the end. You tied it up nicely with allyour characters.

Very well done!

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Date: May 24 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111874
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017


Title: Chapter 7: Friends? Pt 1

Again, she agreed. I hate when people do that. Going forward, she needs to tell him her issues with school and his demands. They can work something out in special cases. But, she need not use that as an excuse for everything. Because, again, SHE AGREED!! She's going to have to give a little, too.

Seriously, what the hell did she think she was agreeing to anyway? She gets his money, new car, new apartment, and school funding and he gets what from her? The long arm, and constant whining about keeping up her end. Its hundreds of thousands of dollars here! Its like lending someone money and that someone gets mad when asked to pay the money back! Geez!

Yes, I will defend Jameson on this one point.

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24 2014

Title: Chapter 20: Whisper

Jameson should get rid of that agreement now. I get his reasons, but if he plans on going forward with Elise in a real meaningful way, he needs to trust that.

As for his parents, meh, they will be ok.

Jen, please give her what she is begging for!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 22 2015

Title: Chapter 21: Breakdowns

Ok, time to get in to Jameson a bit. He's being unfair and immature about this contract at this point. He wants it both ways. Elise has matured and put in a lot to the relationship in terms of herself. Jameson is being selfish. If he doesn't think he has the goods to keep her now, thr. He never will. I got on to Elise in the beginning for taking more than giving, but that's what Jameson is doing. He wants guarantees that people can't really give. Anything can happen at any time. He's trying to use money and that contract like some crystal ball! That's not fair.



Author's Response:

Yes he is using his money as a placeholder which sucks. So we will get to see more of his thoughts. Thanks so much.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2015

Title: Chapter 22: Birthday Woes

What I think is that Jameson should really stop talking to her like a child. Sometimes people don't want to talk about things right away. Its ok to leave her to her thoughts once in a while. Otherwise she'll start to feel like she can't get herself together in her own time before she comes to him. All the big stuff getting talked out ASAP, sure, everyone has things they don't necessarily talk to the world about.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.