Penname: VeMo [Contact]

Real name: Vela Moss

Member Since: December 30 2012

Membership status: Member

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[Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.

Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 21
Read Count: 18592
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: October 06 2016


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Charlie's talent with numbers keep coming up.  I wonder  if she can  work her numbers and make this  three dollars and thirty seven cents I have turn into  some thousands.  Good chapter, enjoyed it so much.  Alec better let her make some  money to put  with that  change he's earning at the restaurant  or else he won't have to worry about who's gonna turn the  bedside light out, because they won't have any electricity.



Author's Response:

Vemo, I swear you're trying to kill me with your comments! Thanks for reading. I can't stop laughing ;-)

 

K.

Reviewer: VeMo Signed
Date: June 30 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Charlie was cool. She handled  the situation just right. I know it made her  angry when she realized she was calling Alec about his son and he's with his ex. I mean how much closure does Vanessa need? Is she special or something? Did she ride on the short bus in school?  Vanessa were with a married man, who after two and half years with you didn't seek a divorce.  Get over him and move on. Vanessa knows she should have called an uber and went home. What is Alec doing?  I just want to know how many bus stops they passed on the way to the hospital that he could have dropped at. Charlie has  to put him or Vanessa in check.  Her child is too ill for that  high school drama. Sometimes when a person (Vanessa) begs for it, you got to go on to the  cabinet and dust off  a can of whup ass.



Author's Response:

Oh Vemo, again. You have no idea! Honestly! That uber and bus stop comments, I can't! How do you do it? Where do you get these lines from? I have never heard of going on to a cabinet to dust off a can of whup ass!!!! Fifteen minutes straight, I laughed for fifteen minutes straight, then got hiccups! As always, you are a joy.

 

K. 

Reviewer: VeMo Signed
Date: July 06 2016

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Alec is on a rollercoaster of emotions.   He needed someone to blame and bash.  Poor Sean, after finding out the reason why he didn't contact Charlie's family, my heart went to him.  I don't know about Alec's decision to terminate Charlie's working relationship with Sean. That income will be needed to get Olly in the school he wants to attend.  The flexiblity of the job would help if he got sick again.Alec better rethink that decision. I hear Ramen Noodles aren't as cheap as they use to be. 

Reviewer: VeMo Signed
Date: August 06 2016

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Annalise Keating daydreams of having a real family with the ones she loves after a passionate night with Nate.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Analisse Keating
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 683
Read Count: 1791
Published: August 03 2016
Updated: August 03 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's an  interesting story. Can't wait to find who all the people are and how their relationships developed.

Reviewer: VeMo Signed
Date: August 13 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's an  interesting story. Can't wait to find who all the people are and how their relationships developed.

Reviewer: VeMo Signed
Date: August 13 2016

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Summary:

Bumping into an old childhood friend might be exactly what Caitlyn needs, and Duncan Everston can still make her smile. Can an unexpected lunch turn into more? Or should the past remain exactly that...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19677
Read Count: 2981
Published: October 09 2017
Updated: November 13 2017


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Cait is a mess. She has to stop allowing Fred to have that much control over her, where he can cripple her emtionally with a stupid coversation . Why is she even talking to that crumb? She has to claim a sense of self and stop letting Fred transfer his misery to her.   She'll get the last laugh when Nancy and the baby runs his old ass in the ground.  Only Mick Jagger can get away with hanging at the playground trolling for toddlers.

Reviewer: VeMo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28 2017

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