Penname: idriveavitz [Contact]

Real name: medicated

Member Since: January 10 2009

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Sugar Mama by Missus James
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 960]
Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 283977
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019

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Title: Chapter 20: Sweet Compromise

It took me a while it get caught up.  I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS STORY...from the characters and chemistry to even the descriptions of each scene.  Thank you for writing this.  Thank you for sharing this.  You have a fan for life.  Looking forward to more.  



Author's Response:

I am so happy that you love the story. This story began as an experiment and now, I think I want to get this published one day. Maybe not by a publisher, but self-publish it on Amazon or something. With all this amazing feedback, I think that's definitely a huge possibility. 

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2018
Title: Chapter 26: Salty Tears

Thank you for the update.  I'll admit, my eyes got a little watery, which I think is a sign that you are a great writer.  I could truly feel Miles' pain. That being said, Lance's punk ass has been a little quiet...  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you so much. I try to convey character emotions as best I can. I am glad you were able to connect with Miles. 

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21 2018
HEARTSTRINGS by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Tradgedy strikes leaving Anthony Romano to be a single father to his twin girls. He may not be single for long when he finds himself falling for the quiet and reserved godmother of his girls Phoebe Jones. Dark secrets come to light things about Phoebe that Anthony never knew. Things they would both have to get through.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 14123
Read Count: 5803
Published: November 18 2018
Updated: July 20 2020

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Title: Chapter 1: ANTHONY I

Wow!  Great start, I love the characters & backstory.  I can already tell that Brooke (and possibly Tony's father) are going to be a problem.  Definitely looking forward to more.  Thanks for sharing!

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18 2018
A SAMPLE OR THE HEART by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Fuck men.

Fuck sex.

Octavia Jenkins didn't need either she just wants a baby no matter how cold and detached the process is.

He loves women.

He loves sex.

Dane Irving never "finishes" in a woman but the thought of another man's sample for his friend bothers him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1769
Read Count: 863
Published: August 03 2020
Updated: August 03 2020

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Title: Chapter 1: A DONOR?

Love the chemistry that is apparent in this brief glimse.  Looking forward to more

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04 2020

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.