Penname: Penelope [Contact]

Real name: Eddice

Member Since: February 20 2013

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Summary:

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Stop fighting about the same old thing, Let's start over, We can't let our good love die, Maybe we can start over, Give love another life,

 

I know that this will hurt you, I know you'll cry, I know I called you selfish, but that's a lie, I feel I know that's the best for us,

 

Let's start over 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 31466
Read Count: 10916
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: September 19 2016


Title: Chapter 4: Scared of Lonely

Nice update.  I had forgotten about this story and had to start over--it's still good.

E. helped in the demise of his marriage by not realizing being a workaholic made it easy to cut him loose.  He literally brought his work home and made A. feel invisible.  It was bad enough A. had to put up with his mom...  

It's time for A. to become interested in someone else and shake things up--I don't care if she did sleep with E.  He's moved on and can tell another woman he loves her--that's just wrong.  Yeah, time for her to move on.  

If this happens, please don't let her bring the new man around the daughter early, but let E. realize another man may soon be in his princess life and taking her to the zoo.  

It would be a shocker if all the daughter-in- laws grab their kids and leave their husbands and then maybe the sons will strengthen their backbones and stand up to dear mom.  

E is not dumb, but the light is starting to flicker on why mom loves his new girl so much--what woman helps her son find another woman, so quickly after a breakup? That should have told dum-dum something then--did he not know what A. had to put up with?  He was never there, even when he was and then a dragon MIL coming in to criticize your every move bc she is afraid of being replaced? Yes, time to shake things up!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!! Ethan's brother will be the first to have a backbone about his mother jumping into their business don't worry as the stroy progress.

Ethan is going to experience first hand how Aurora felt during their marriage so his going to learn real soon. Aurora will have a love interest, Ethan can't easily have all her attention his going to have to prove himself to her. 

 

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Date: June 16 2014

Title: Chapter 5: She Can't Love You

It's about time A. decides to accept the loss and pain of not having him in her life and decide to move on.  E is still working so much that he forgets his daughter and has not learned anything that can help him to make his marriage a success in a start over.  

Since E. is enjoying sex with his new girl and looks content, A should let him know she is happy for him and has decided it is time for her to move on, also; after she get in that ass about bringing a strange woman around her child and having sex with her while P is in the house.  

I hope she tells E that when she finally decide to sex up her new man, they will go to his place or a nice hotel instead, until she feels comfortable enough to bring him around P.

Caroline needs to suggest Katherine make her a grandmother again--watch how fast C smile slips when K shoots that idea down.  Poor Margaret, she won't confront Ian about mom bc she thinks Ian will choose his mom, and she may be right.  

Story is so good and I can't wait to read more.

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Date: June 19 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Greenlight

Thank goodness Ian has come to his senses.  Now Ethan needs to apologize to A.  and he is finally seeing some light--another man spending more time with your kid than you, is no joke.  

I hope Aurora meets someone, a man who makes her laugh and feel like a woman---she don't have to have sex with him...just be attracted to him.  Then maybe he and she can run into Ethan and Katherine while out.  K. may be beautiful, but A. wasn't a supermodel for nothing.   I wish Katherine would see Ethan reaction, bc he will not be able to hide his feelings.  

Kinda feel sorry for this couple---want them back together in a HEA, but unless they learn to communicate and figure out the problem that lead to the divorce, they will just be wasting their time.

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Date: June 22 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Diva

Every time I read the last part, I get madder at Ethan.  Girl, move on...he has.  The man lets his mom help destroy his marriage and then takes us with the woman she approves of.  The woman basically just said she tolerates your child and you don't blink an eye? 

I hope you put Ethan through some serious hoops in trying to win her back and I hope Aurora (since she is so beautiful and all) opens up and satrts dating.  Let Ethan jog by and see a sports car in the driveway one morning--even if the guy slept on the sofa.

 

 

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Date: September 26 2016

Title: Chapter 8: Diva

Needpic of bad ass Alma.

I know Aurora is hurting to see him grab Katherine hand and heap praise upon her.  Way pass time for Aurora to make hersef available to date

 I would poiitely wish ethan the best and tell him it is time for me to let go of the past and move on, too.  No man wants to know their child will have another male figure in their life.

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Date: September 20 2016

Title: Chapter 8: Diva

Ethan grow a brain and a pair.

Katherine go back to Caroline bragging on Aurora and watch how fast that dragon turns on you.

Alma needs to let it slip that Katherine spent the night and did the dirty with Percy in house.

Aurora go get yourself a man and some...

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Date: September 20 2016

Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary:

For Elyshia Jenkins, one night will change her life forever.
If it is for the better or worse, only time will tell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 16634
Read Count: 38138
Published: September 03 2013
Updated: January 03 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Proposition

I can't help but eagerly read your updates.  I just can't get over how he viciously raped her and now she is attracted to him.  How did they meet?  How does Liam make his living?  How is the brother doing and will Liam meet him?



Author's Response:

First of all, thanks for reading and reviewing.

wow, so many questions? Well she was attracted to him from the very first time she saw him.  I will write about the first time she met him as I go along, just remember this is in her POV, the first time she sees him might not be the first time he sees her.  What does Liam do?  How is the brother doing? Will Liam meet him?  Sorry lady, spoilers!!!!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: October 27 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Contract

I like your storyto read it again and I am sure there is a point you are getting to, but it seem to be taking the long route.  I wish they would talk more...



Author's Response:

Sorry to disappoint, not yet...it will be long but please stay with me on this hopefully not to tedious a journey

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Date: January 04 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Love is kind, yet brutal. Warm, but so cold. Joyful, yet sad



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 18403
Read Count: 4302
Published: September 24 2013
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am with you now--thanks for labeling the flashbacks and present day scenes.  So married Caleb wants her, pregnanted her, and he knows her dad (who was never there for her).  Looking forward to you tying this to her falling for him and then finding out he was married--am I on the right track?



Author's Response:

I was really hoping you would write a review again! Haha. Just because I couldnt find you when I took down the chapter. Yeeees you getting there, but remember we starting from the beginning. I forgot to make that clear. Hopefully things will be more clear. Because when I write, I get so excited and forget other people are reading it and I just wanna shoo it out. But thank you sooooo much for staying with me! :D Do you think it will be helpful if we gave Caleb pov or wait for a sequel where he gets to explain? I need some suggestions. 

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Date: January 07 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I was lost and will admit, confused--this is the same story about the married man with a child andwife, vbut is having an affair, right?  Who is Jacob?  What is going on...?



Author's Response:

Stick with me! Questions will be answered! I promise. Also, would you mind telling me what confused you? Would a bridge chapter have helped? 

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Date: January 06 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

While Riley waits for devastating news of one sort, she receives word of another.  Will she refuse to accept either, or surrender to the inconvenient miracle?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4378
Read Count: 1498
Published: October 07 2013
Updated: October 07 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Marry the sneak and have Mitch's babies--just joking.  Call it off and disappear for a while, but let him know you know he lied.

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Date: December 17 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Who knew the boy with the big dreams and kind smile would be her undoing. She may have fallen in love, but he fell along with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4234
Read Count: 7642
Published: October 20 2013
Updated: December 04 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Meeting

Please let Oliver be saying 'hi baby' to a daughter and he is a single father.  Hopefully Alaia will come out more and we find out why she is so timid.

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Date: October 27 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Tess is a sucessful accountant on the fast track to being a firm partner. Unfortunately she is lacking in the love department, Jay is a co-worker and good friend who is ready and willing to help her with this deficiency. But is Tess really over her ex-boyfriend Eric? Unfortunately for Tess, realtionships can not fit neatly on a spreadsheet.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 49338
Read Count: 24743
Published: October 24 2013
Updated: November 27 2013


Title: Chapter 5: Old Habits Die Hard in Glistening Darkness...

Jay has basically pampered and spoiled this woman and that apparently wasn't enough.  Now anybody can backslide to something that we know is not good for us, but Tess got what Tess wanted and that was some D from Eric. 

I hope Eric is knocking on Jay's door right now telling him.  

Jay should find another job and get tested on the way to the orientation class. If he stays...well, I just think he can do better.  

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Date: October 27 2013

Title: Chapter 11: The Ups of Downs…

I want to see Eric realize that he has LOST; an epilogue would be fine.

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Date: November 15 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Promises....

Bravo!!  Thamk you.

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Date: November 27 2013

Title: Chapter 13: A Future Under the Table...

Eric got knocked the beep out! 

Jay's father just laid it all out there, didn't he? 

Good to know Jay got back in the saddle again and that poor maid :-).  

What is next for my favorite couple? 

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Date: November 25 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Changes, Honesty, and Tears…

Nothing sadder than someone who has been cheated on begging to be taken back. 

Pulled it off in the end though, bc before that break down, it came across to me as though Tess was full of it. 

I think he should lay off oncatering to her and spoiling her--she can spoil herself, now.

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Date: November 11 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Stopped in His Tracks...

OMG!! Tess finally getting her backbone with Eric, hopefully he LISTENED and didn't just not hear her words.  Now she needs to prepare herself to accept whatever consequences come from telling Jay what went down. 

Eric showed he was prepared to tell Jay--like it was some kinda game.  Does he even know what he put her through with his cheating?  He did try to come off as a knight on holding her while she cried from his cheating--loser!

Well done!

 

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Date: October 30 2013

Title: Chapter 9: No More Mr. Nice Jay….

to get him back, Tess is going to have to overlook the women Jay starts to date while trying to forget about her hurting him---then she will truly know what he went through.

I wish Eric would show up naked to just test Tess, but she would probably fail.  Jay should stay away bc she is still weak. 

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Date: November 04 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Comes to the light…Comes to the light…Everything...

go jay! go jay!  Lord knows it's about time he learned the truth bc she sure wasn't going to tell him. 

If I was her mom I wouldn't even say 'told you so', just give her the breakup gift pack: box of kleenx, visine to get the red out, advil for the headache, and a journal. 

If she is pregnant, she had better not tell him until she see who the baby looks like--Eric will disappear like the Flash then.

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Date: November 02 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Little Does He Know....

sorry Jay, but Eric already has touch her, again.  Tess is about to go through some stuff and well, she brought it on herself. 

Jay is going to be so hurt and I am glad he has some money and does seem to matter to Ms Tess.  When Eric finds out Jay is on the same financial footing as he is then he is going to hit back and tell how he did Tess and spent the night.     

I think Jay left college for a reason---a broken heart, perhaps? 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: October 28 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary: Is their love the kind that really stands the test of time, and distance. A young army family full of love but ever growing and facing challenges can this young couple make it. Also please everyone keep in mind this site is very new to me.I need a beta as well if anyone who happens to read this is interested, please do let me know. PS I love feedback good or bad

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 13311
Read Count: 6418
Published: October 25 2013
Updated: February 11 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Daniel really wants to reup, again, so since they both know he will be gone a lot, she should have him help her go to an agency and pick out someone to help her around the house while he's gone, perferably male.



Author's Response: lol I like the way you think! We shall see whats in store for them, but this is deff the calm before the store! Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- cast chapter 1

Daniel don't watch it, she will hire a man to help around the house, and we know what that means...



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Date: November 12 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

 

 

 

Simone Alexander was not adventurous by nature but she was a go-getter. When an unbelievable opportunity comes her way, she does not hesitate to seize it. Now, she finds herself half way around the world immersed in a culture completely different from her own. Here she faces challenges that push her grow in every aspect of her life; the most unexpected of them all......love.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 38379
Read Count: 34598
Published: November 11 2013
Updated: June 28 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pics

Will you add a pic of Daiki?  Would be nice if the mom and he met and connected, since she seems nice and caring.  Thank you for the update.   

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Date: December 25 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I really like your  story and look forward to the updates.  

He is coming around and there is passion/chemistry between these two and no one realizes it. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11 2016

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