Penname: Penelope [Contact]

Real name: Eddice

Member Since: February 20 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 292]
Summary:

She's a mess he can't help wanting to fix.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Southern Gentlemen
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 90
Read Count: 69512
Published: January 11 2014
Updated: October 19 2015


Title: Alexa and Brody

Glad Brody threw Chloe out like the trash she was.  What's up with the scar he got as a baby?  Did he have a heart problem (maybe that why he has to take the pills)?  Can't be a transplant, there would be more pills and a strict diet.  This may be why Gran and Pops worry and why he has to prove his independence. 

I hope he gets Alexa before she strips, but hey with that money, she may not need the money he got back from Chloe.   I too was wondering why he didn't hit redial, but then maybe Aiden will--and Brody will answer.  Love this story!

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Date: March 11 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

thank you for putting these two back on track.  Alexa had to be on ecstasy in order to show her true feelings to her Brody.  He now knows her name, her nephew, and that she has been on the pole before and will do whatever in order to reach her nephew.  I like how he wrapped her up bc he also knows how she wouldn't want him to see her in stripper gear.  

ROAD TRIP!!! 

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Date: March 12 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Pop raised his boys right.  I hated to see this chapter end, but I can't wait to read Brody's pov.

 I can't wait to see Gram show this poor girl some family love.  

Where is Aiden's mother--does Alexa ever talk to her?

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Date: March 17 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Pop raised his boys right.  I hated to see this chapter end, but I can't wait to read Brody's pov.

 I can't wait to see Gram show this poor girl some family love.  

Where is Aiden's mother--does Alexa ever talk to her?

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Date: March 17 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

I think I would pray for my sister and let her go.  

Elena has to decide if she can continue to live with a man that raped her sister, beat her, and traumatize her son.  She goes back to him, then that will be the answer.   

Thank goodness, Brody didn't hide his love for our girl.  Now she has to get him to tell her the truth about not working in the famly business.



Author's Response:

I think this. What you said is true about Elena. She's got her own course and has to go about things her own way. And Brody! Sigh... He stands next to her and proud because he chose her! Love him to pieces :D

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Date: August 25 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

There has to be something Brody can do with his Dad.  Driving that truck for long distances is not healthy for him--and he is not happy doing it.  Loving the story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Penelope! Soon enough Brody will start to see the light ;)

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Date: September 02 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

If it wasn't for bad luck...

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Date: September 12 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Pop got married.

She got her ballet studio and family back; they all moved into a house.

He got a job with the family.

The bad guy is dead.

Perfect ending for a perfect story--Thank you!

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Date: September 23 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Niya DeLuca, a jobless twenty-six year old woman is convinced that her dreams of becoming the wife to a wealthy, handsome, powerful man are finally going to coming true.

Sebastian Costa, a wealthy bachelor loves to play games with women, and he always wins. He’s instantly attracted to Niya's beauty and she quickly becomes his new play toy.

But what happens when Sebastian meets the woman identically beautiful but impossible to corrupt?

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2723
Read Count: 1990
Published: January 11 2014
Updated: January 11 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 The Meeting

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Please don't have Bas have sex witht her--that will mean he did both twins and it's kinda tacky, actually it's pretty nasty.



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: January 11 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34246
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Beautiful!

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Date: February 16 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Taken down for publication!

Oh we haven't forgotten Troy's tagalong trashy assistant.  I guess there will soon be three job openings😉.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Pops gonna have his own private nurse;-)

Roxie finally see that Griff needs her as much as she needs him.  Roxie will soonbe part of the CHandlers and couldn't get accepted into a better family.

I didn't think Micky would be as dirty as Rich, and then he had the nerve to blame it all on Rich.

In each chapter you give your all and it shows.  Thank you for the update. 

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Date: February 17 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Cover Reveal!

Two thumbs up & Congratulations!

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Date: March 31 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Griff needs to do Griff---his teammates are grown men and don't need him to babysit.  The club scene is not him--I bet he won't be drinking anytime soon.

When are they going to talk about the prenup?  He knows Roxie is not feeling it.  What will Mitch do if they decide to trash it--show his true colors?

So he does see how the media is pushing Rose on him---what is he going to do about it?

I think her weight lose has been fast and drastic--she knows she has lost too much, but don't know how to stop.

Pops is going to have to talk some sense into Griff.



Author's Response:

I agree! Dude, should have not been in the club, lol! I think he was over that type of scene in college. 

Prenup is coming! And it's coming guns blazing, lol. 

Love all your questions and Pop will be back I assure you ;) Thanks!

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Date: January 27 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Don't trust Mickey and Griff's instincts are telling him not to trust him either--that's why he keeps trying to convince himself he should.  I bet he just had Griff sign a prenup. Micky mistakenly thinks Griff is some cornfed hick with no brains--well he's cornfed, but he won't take kindly to anyone hurting his Roxie.

This man is going to do his best to separate Griff and Roxie, bcause then Grif will not have to spend time with Roxie and can make more money for Mickey/Rich.

I hope Roxie instincts kick in and they get Grif's dad involved--got the feeling either one will stomp a Mississippi mudhold in these two.

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Date: January 20 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Taken down for publication!

I hope the couple get quietly married, on the farm.  These two are tight and learned to tell one another everything--Mickey does not realize what he is up against when he tried to come between them. 

He wants Griff to remain single and then he will have more time to be promoted, which leads to more money...and if it takes breaking them up, Tricky Mickey will do this (probably has done it to other couples).  Maybe Griff's ex friend has heard stuff about Mick...?

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Date: January 20 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Can' wait until they see the billboard of Griff and Rose and I am sure they will have to ask about Rose.  

I think Roxie reminds Pops of a long-lost love.  

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Date: January 23 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Please let his brother and dad channel Gram for Roxie.  Brody should call Griff if he suspects anything off with her.  

She doesn't want to bother Griff, she doesn't want to show she can't handle pressure;  she needs to regroup and focus on what is important and that's just her and him---nothing else takes priority.

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Date: January 22 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Is Roxie doing better or putting up a front?  She is avoiding her problems by hiding out in the gym and that won't end well.  She use to do roller derby and that means she had to be in shape--I know she has been idle for some months, but I think her weight issues are blown out of porportions and her past is making it easy for her to believe a few people opinions.   

Did she ever read what people wrote when Rich had that hashtag put out there?  There may have been good things bc their love for one another is obvilous and there are a lot of curvy women in America who would speak up for Roxie.  

Kerry tried to give her a clue and Griff may not care for the weight loss. 

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Date: January 22 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Pops saw how much weight she had lost when that shrug fell off.  I don't think Roxie is all that excited about planning the wedding since the conversation about her weight.  

Brody  should let pops fly home and he and Roxie go to Atlanta to surprise Griff. On the other hand,  I hope Pop goes with them and they meet Griff's slimy agents and Rose.

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Date: January 25 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

That faker is a Foe! Run Roxie and put on those derby skates so you can be prepared to throw down. Roxie is not going to be interested in hanging around those she-cats.

Griff better get it together, bc those two clowns working for him are looking out for themselves.  Stop thinking your agent is funny bc he is testing the waters to see how far he can go before he slam Roxie hard.  Sure did miss you--WELCOME BACK!

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Date: December 15 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I love how fast you put up your updates and these two just leave me smiling.  Thanks for showing up how strog they are and how they stand togWhat's up with all that paperwork for the wedding?  Did Mickey slide a prenupt into the paperwork?  This was short but sweet.

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Date: December 16 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Rich and Mickey are two peas in a pod--a rotten pod.  If Ryan had met Mickey, he would have had the same reaction as he did to Rich.  Those two don't know Grif and his friends.  I can't wait for D toshowup.

Those two peas are going to try to suck up to Roxie and then show their true colors. I bet they have Griff modeling with a gorgeous model.  Griff was humble and praised the star of  the team, but i bet he was cute in his glasses.

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Date: December 17 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Roxie is going to have to go head to head with Rich and Griff will need to let Mitch know they need us and not the other way around.  I think Rich and Mitch are going to try and pair up Rose and Griff bc they seem 'right'.  So glad Griff is still smart and can't wait until Rich ticks Roxie off by saying one too many sly remarks. I hope Rose doesn't think Griff's glow was for her.  I think Griff is going to have to tell Mitch what Roxie means to him and what he will do if anyone attempts to come between them.  Roxie and Griff should go to TX and marry, and not tell any of the yahoos up north.



Author's Response:

Lots of hurdles to come. It's going to be a journey for sure! Thanks for commenting Penelope!

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Date: December 18 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Very good choices for your characters. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Penelope!

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Date: December 19 2014

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