Penname: Penelope [Contact]

Real name: Eddice

Member Since: February 20 2013

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Summary:

'You're my golden girl. You're the one I've chosen girl. You're 24K. You make it bright when it's gray. You're my golden girl. The sun has been kind to you. You're 24K (girl), But the sky's never gray (never gray)'  

Golden Girl Frank Ocean


He was her first and last love. After three years apart, it still fells like she is fourteen and standing on that very beach they meet; when ever she looks into his eyes.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1583
Read Count: 1695
Published: January 20 2014
Updated: January 20 2014


Title: Golden Girl

I just know she is going to run into the one who broke her heart at the new school, but this time she should be the distant one. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

What happens when you begin to second guess the gift you gave to someone? Do you ask them for it back? Or perhaps you just take it back? Maybe that gift was fine for then, but holds no value now. Five years later, Teddy considers re-gifting but Tanner is worried that it is the same old tired shit just wrapped up in a shinier package. *Sequel to “The Gift of Goodbye”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10569
Read Count: 7620
Published: January 23 2014
Updated: February 19 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I had almost forgotten about this story, but it was so good that I didn't have to read the previous chapters to catch us--the pic did it for me.

These two have matured, well, Teddy is trying.  He ended it and she moved on, but they both are using other people to mask the absence of their true love.  

 Teddy is such a thug...I love it.

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Date: February 17 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Cast photos

I loved it!  Sometimes things just aren't meant to be.  Teddy had to grow up, but I would be leery of the past cheating.  Is he cheating on the new girl?  If not maybe she is the one for him. Sometimes all you can have in common is the past.

As long as he stays on his side of town things should be good.  How will Tanner boyfriend take it finding out he is about to thank her ex?  Are they happy with their new partners? 

I, for one, was glad to see Tanner found someone else, but i know for a fact we can settle for someone who we consider stable, just to get away from the drama.  It is the cheating...

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Date: January 23 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

David temper is scary and he is a lick from hitting Tanner, and then he will find out what poking the bear really means.  

So David knows he is a substitute and if Angela ponder on Teddy's words '...losing himself in her', she will realize that she is also a substitute. 

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Date: February 20 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 35]
Summary:

Two people falling in love by unexpcted circumstances. Showing their love through one of their eyes.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9683
Read Count: 8322
Published: February 06 2014
Updated: June 24 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Two more chapters, pretty please.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

omg! You made me cry...but you also made me smile.  Thank you for the story.

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Date: June 24 2014

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Summary:

Haunted by her former life, Kattia seeks solace in another.  But there is one who pursues her—a ruthless hunter whose existence is dedicated to the ruination of hers.  One who will never give up the chase.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7076
Read Count: 852
Published: February 16 2014
Updated: March 08 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Ashes to Ashes

I was so into this that when i reached the end, all i could say was noooo...



Author's Response:

Thanks Penelope!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16 2014

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Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118387
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Lovers' Dance

Don't give up Matt!  I think Matt needs to talk to either the aunt or gramps; he needs some grown-up advice.  Madi needs to come to terms that the grieving process has been going on for what 20+ yrs. and seek some help.  

Dante should keep the key because she has problems, but respect boundaries.  I just feel that Matt is doing all the begging and chasing and needs a break, before he loses his mind.   

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Alright Matt, way to go!  Can't wait to see how Gramps plan on kissing Madi's azz.  Madi is not losing anything if Matt's family doesn't come around and Nathan has been around her and still can act the fool, so...no loss there either.   

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Date: July 07 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Matt needs to listen to the same advice he gave Nathan about 'still waters...'.  Sanne should be put back in her place of waiting on her employers--Matt better not take the bait so freely being offered.  If anyone can prevent Madi from coming out on the short end of the stick, it's Matt--take a vacation and have a deep conversation and then she can start her therapy, bc Matt hasn't forgotten.  

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Date: August 04 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The man told Madi he loves her and she know he means it.  Now Madi needs to come clean about Gramps--things have and are changing and he has lived his life...

Maybe it's a test and Gramps wants to know if Madi has staying power for his boy.  



Author's Response:

We just have see how things develop, but I truly enjoy writing Grumps' character!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Get a suite Madi, get a reservation for a suite, bc auntie is gonna show her azz.



Author's Response:

Ha ha ha!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Jenny stepped over the line in flaunting her azz; wouldn't trust her, nor let her come for a visit.  How old is Jamal, again?  Please let him be a goofy teen.  The uncle is cool and we all know an Aunt Cleo (aunt Minnie in my case lol).

I really thought it was funny with the husband stepping back from Cleo, after agreeing with Madi.  Madi is coming through and multi-tasking like she took something.

Maybe the shelter's director will drop by to thank the family for the food donation and Matt will give kudos to Aunt Cleo.  That is the only thing that will get him on her decent side and get the goat of her competitor.  

LOL at Matt, the gazillionaire, admitting Cleo scared him.  I would love to see Cleo go up against Matt's mom and gramps.  Madi family is bad, but Matt's family is worst.  

I can understand Madi loving her family, and all their faults--they are her family.  

 

 

 

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Date: August 17 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.

Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19790
Read Count: 43970
Published: May 20 2014
Updated: September 13 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Run, Breezy, Run!! Loving your story...wonder how low Sara and Jace are going to feel knowing their actions help keep him from his kid.  What did Sara mean by  ...'we've been here before" nad Breezy comment on this not happening for a third time?  Jace better not ba the daddy to Sara's baby. 



Author's Response:

You almost got me. LOL!!!! But no spoilers. I love a reader that pays attention detail. Thanks for reading. Stay tuned. I will post again next week. 

Yevette

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2014

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Summary:

In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks.  Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set.  Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear.  While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.

 Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect.  For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business.  Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of.  As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.   

 When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace?  Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise? 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 70686
Read Count: 14883
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

1  both

2  unforgiving

3. Both

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Date: June 19 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Father:  no, too busy scheming and has never been there for her before

Larry:  who's Larry?

Carter:  yes, he was the last one on her mind and I bet she has his number memorized

unknown male: no, because Shauna keeps all males, except dad, out of her life



Author's Response:

"Larry" is Tamryn's father's first name.  Thanks for reading, reviewing, and voting, Penelope!

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Date: August 15 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Tam is going with Carter bc she is about to lose her mine and deep down she still trusts him.  

Carter is going to take one look at her interaction with Aaron and realize he has competition.  I am liking me some Aaron, soory erica. 

Tam with Carter will push Shauna around another bend---Larry the dad needs to watch his back with Shauna, bc I think she will take him out.  Too bad Shauna can't tell on Aaron and Tam, bc that will tell on her.  Maybe she will go after Aaron and get Erica in the process.  

Why does Carter want Tam with him, and it is not all about caring about her either?  I think everyone is using the girl like a puppet and she is going to wind up snapping.



Author's Response:

Lol at you plotting ways to free Aaron up for Tam!  Shauna will surely lose her sh*t when she finds out about Tam staying with Carter.  Everyone needs to be concerned about being a target for retaliation, including her father.

Carter wants Tam with him for several reasons.  One, he knows she's not safe in a house with Shauna--the person he believes set Tam up.  The others will become clear in the next couple chapters. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Penelope!

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Date: September 07 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am loving this story!  Aaron give it up, bc Mikhail has claimed his woman.  



Author's Response:

Thanks Penelope!  So glad you like it.

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Date: January 21 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

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Author's Response:

Duly noted.  Thanks Penelope!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2015

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[Reviews - 165]
Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 57825
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Annabelle better watch herself--she is dealing with two gansters and don't know it (lol).  I hope they tighten that azz up!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Annabelle better watch herself--she is dealing with two gansters and don't know it (lol).  I hope they tighten that azz up!

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Date: March 30 2015

Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Watch your back with A.  I think our girl can handle herself and is right to be cautious.  Richard can't get her too easily and hopefully he goes for more than just some hot sex.  He should her cut that crazy ex loose long ago.

I get excited whenever I see a new update to your story---it's drawing me in.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying!

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Date: June 30 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

ok, well hell yeah, Professor.  Guess things backfired on Graham.   I hope Cam is ready to deal with Anna.

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Date: July 22 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

things are about to come to a head for Richard and Cam.  Graham is sneaky, sneaky, sneaky...wouldn't be surprise if Annabelle's date doesn't show up and she tries to rope Richard into doing the scene--all planned out between her and Graham, of course.  

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Date: July 15 2014

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Oh no not the camera!  Please tell me Anna will no longer have acess to his home.  Well if the ex won't leave her along he will once he sees the pictures.  Can't wait until Richard puts that pic on his desk, Anna will know for sure it's over then.   This update started off hot and ended HAWT!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2015

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