Make him work for it Cam.  I am really liking the way you write--great update!

Cam is going to have to put Annabelle in her place and be harder about it than she was with her mom.   Annabelle no longer can hold her job probation period over her head.

 I wished Richard had told Annbelle 'yep it is my fault the marriage failed and aren't you glad you didn't have my kid?'

Blake is going to get in trouble because he still has feelings for the ex and don't know how to say no.  Minerva is going to feel the fool for being used as the babysitter, while the bfriend parties.   You story made me lol and although funny, i think Minerva needs to load those boys into a car and take them to the party.     

Man, give it up--awkward enough ken and doc are bunking together, surprised you haven;t heard them going at it.  Kirk needs to grow up and move on, again.

Ken is still hurting and while I feel her pain, I wish she would stop playing that same old song. 

I think she need to get a job and start looking for a place to stay or call danica for advice--maybe she has an extra bedroom.  Brian will be of no help in standing up to Macy--he can't even tell her to stop spending his money, much less take his key back.   Right now his nicenes is being mistaken for weakness. 

Brian better step up and put what's her name out.  Good move on Kelly's part, bc the last thing she needs is for old girl to catch them and twist a knot in her azz. 

This was so good!  Macy lost her mind and Brian's found his :-)

Kelly got some street in her and that is good, bc Macy PI is going to dig up some crap that will touch everybody.  

Can't wait till Brian and Macy have their 'talk'.

Thanks you for the update.

Thank goodness the Detective was smart enough to pull the most important info out of the file, before handing it over.

I guess the point for Henry to go see her Dad was to say he was sorry.  As Pops was beating his azz, Henry must have relalize that he wasn't dumb enough to tell that he basically turned her over to be his dealer's whore. 

Very well done on Brian discovering he had been played by that snake Macy.  I hope he realizes while in his hotel how Macy feels toward Kelly and decides to go home--maybe he can run into Dani and she spills the beans about Macy pushing our girl down the stairs...

I know in your previous story you had the two women get into a fight, if that happens again, can Kelly get in some kicks this time?

I think Allen will/should punch Henry in the throat--hard.  Z. will not be able to forgive him, until she forgives herself first and maybe not even then.  

Seems to me that her returning memories are making her hate herself.  She was basically a sex slave and feared death--perhaps Brian should get her into some intense therapy?  The past is going to break her, especially since she is holding her emotions in. 

Just exactly where is her relationship with Derrick?  Z. is attracted to him, but not in any earth shattering way, while Derrick is hoping for more.   Isn't it time for Bryant to start making his feelings known to Z, as he is providing her support?  

Get busy, Brian and then kick her out.  In fact, just trick Macy--tell her he's taking her for a surprise and then take her to the appointment with the Doc.  

Poor Zoey, when she remembers what she went through and why, Brian needs to be unencumbered so that he can be there for her.  I like the story's do over. 

Please give Brian a backbone earilier this time.  He is just too nice for this chick and hopefully he kicks her to the curb, esp. for her racist rant, which will probably come out in full force. 

Girl, you got me in tears.