She should tell Danica about Macy... Who will then tell Brian.  I hope Brian overhears Macy showing her true colors., because I  don't see Kelly standing up to her.

Hopefully, she will remember that she was some rapist property and ask where was her husband?  

I would not go with a stranger and that is what her 'husband' is to her.  I sure hope Brian and the rest stand up to Henry; her daddy knows Henry is worst than sorry and should speak up.  If she does have to leave Brian then go with the dad.

First Neymar and then the next day she is into David---hope she is not leaning toward being the team groupie aka jump off.  IMO, she is moving too damn fast.  Perhaps she should come clean with David, bc giving up the V card wasn't done lightly, even though she was drunk.  If she doesn't tell him, Neymar will in his own spoiled way.  

I am confused on who this girl is interested in, but does she even know?  I see David getting hurt. 

I thought it would be David, but Neymar will do.  Did Chris put something in her drink?  Wonder if she is on the pill, bc no condom was used.  Looking forward to more.  She may want to have a talk with her best bud on her disappearing act and who keeps a bed in a club?

Why did Neymar tell he had had sex with Jourdain?

Seems to be all about what Neymar wants or needs and David is just smoother with what he wants.  Neymar is not the brightest bulb in the box taking advice to use someone else to make J jealous.

J is kind of dim, too.  She enjoyed David's kiss, but had the nerve to be hurt about Bruna and N.  Maybe she should keep the bird (David) in hand and not bother with the one that has been in her bush (Neymar).  

Although i look forward to the updates, I am finding Neymar to be too much into looks--if J was crippled, he wouldn't give her a 2nd glance.  

Jourdan should for once choose no one and start from scratch.  David is coming on too fast and Neymar was with Bruna (possibly sexing her, too) just to get back at J.  Chris just wants to hit it like N. did---I don't care if he did say he wanted to be in the friend zone.  I expected her friend to be the wild child---not this 19 yr old virgin.  J should just pull back, regroup, and do her job; wonder who the grown up would be then, Neymar or David?

She just has to grow up--she wasn't that torn up over losing David and is sexually attracted to Neymar.  That self-made snowball was full of lies and rocks and knocked her off her feet.

I am team David, but think he deserves better, while Neymar has shown he has a very nasty and vindictive side. 

I would love to read more, but she has to become more mature and work on that character that was so promising in the beginning of the story.  

Thanks for sharing.

awesome!

Did he use a condom the second time?

Jack told the truth--harshly, but still the truth, still Nava is getting stronger.  I love the way you are developing your characters and I can lose myself in the plot, imagining myself in the warehouse with them.  Don't know about Conner...he is going to be fierce, if he ever catches Nava alone--I suggest she get a weapon for herself.

Once my Girl snaps back to her senses, she is going to be a force to be reckon with.  Now she knows at any time she could be on her own; she also now knows she will fight to the end to survive.  

Shame on Conner for sneaking a feel on a tramatized girl :-),but he did clean her up without violating her, which means he still has some humanity left.  

Wouldn't trust Tyler or Conner.  She knows Tyler hates her bc she is a woman and Conner wants her when she is helpless and scared.  Nava is getting stronger and my money will be on her when it comes down to Tyler.  

Casey is going to turn on Nava soon.

Jack is using wisdom.

Nava is slowly coming into her own--through trauma, but still she is getting stronger.  

Conner knows Tyler is psychotic, and will take out Tyler if need be, but for now he is using him for back up.

Poor Darrell & friends.