Title: Chapter 1: -one-
Whoa! This is one tight, emotionally-charged beginning; very well done in giving us a past and present on this couple.
She made her choice, went about it wrong for a long time--15 yrs and couldn't drop a line, email, phone call to say sorry?
Oddly, I understand why she ran and I think she has more than paid for it--job she hates, boyfriend who means nothing, and an ex who has moved on. Please don't add homewrecker to her list, bc Aria is only surviving, not living
Justin has been with Harper for 4 yrs, there are emotions invested--unless they have an 'understanding'. Justin changed from being that sweet kid the day she ran out on him and after 15 yrs he is a man. Oh he is going to punish her and he owes her nothing; 15 years is a long time to hold out hope for anyone!
Wonder if Harper is staying with him in their old house? I can barely wait till your next update--Happy New Year!
Author's Response: Happy New Year to you as well! Thank you for the read and review! I can sympathize with Aria as well, getting married at 20 is pretty daunting. You've barely had time to figure out who you are and how to take care of yourself, let alone another person. In her mind, she had only one way out and she took it. But, if she hasn't moved on, how can we expect Justin move on? I mean, he was the one who got left at the altar. How can he be in a committed relationship with another woman with this hanging in the background?
I'm trying to play devil's advocate here, lol. Thank you again for the read and review :)
Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: December 30 2014