Penname: CaramelGal [Contact]

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Member Since: March 06 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

A college graduate with too much time on my hands. So, I put them to a keyboard & let the words flow out.


 


"Now keep in mind that I'm a artist and I'm sensitive about my shit."-Erykah Badu 


 


 




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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34242
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

A perfect ending to a perfect story. I can't wait to see what you've got in store for Brody. Bravo 👏👏👏

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Rya, a dreamer at heart is as imaginative as her mind allows her to be. She can't wait to go off into world and live a life full of adventure. Haseem yearns for a normal safe life. After leaving a troubled past, he hopes to somehow atone for his sins and start with a clean slate. Without complications.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 8428
Read Count: 2653
Published: February 04 2014
Updated: February 17 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2- Educate me.

CALL HIM RYA!  

I'm loving these characters & their chemistry. As always, this is a great chapter to another excellent story. I can't wait for an update. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Caramelgal! I'm so glad you're liking this story so far. Update is coming soon.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 22 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

 


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Essy is tired of waiting up for her husband



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1152
Read Count: 2376
Published: February 14 2014
Updated: February 14 2014


Title: Chapter 1: LATE

I love this! I originally read it on Literotica, but loved that I was able to get cast pics on here. So much sexual tension...I thought Lee was gonna manhandle her lol. I wouldn't mind more of these two either. 



Author's Response:

Thank you I was considering some smutty one shots of these two

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143286
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

He found her house(Which he seems EXTREMELY to familiar with it). Stops by during the wee hours of the morning. Works her nerve while getting her hot & bothered. Then he let's her know "what that mouth do" from the jump. You've done it, you've got my full attention.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 17 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I knew it. And Mitch is sounding like a contender.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 24 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 164]
Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 54476
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

SO glad you updated! Seriously, I'm a little conflicted. I want them to be together, but Reese should have divulged all the details. So I'm kind of with Charlie. Interested in how this will go. Update soon.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

I doubt Reese can hold off that long without being near Charlie. I do think they need the space because Charlie is taking in a lot right now. We'll see how long he gives her "space" before he breaks. Good chapter.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 26 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 148]
Summary:

   In the year of 1648 B.C, the Nubians reigned over Pharaohs army and won with victory over the territory of the West Nile. In celebration King Kladon communes a marriage for his daughter's hand.


   Princess Kira is a highly trained warrior of the Nubian Kingdom, alongside her boisterous brother, Keitou. When she is told that she is to marry the Royal Lords son, Akisou, she is furious and rides away from the Nubian Palace. However, Kira finds herself caught in a trap when her and her party are ambushed by Pharaohs soldiers.

   Pharaoh Raad is a stoic and tenacious king who shows no mercy when it comes to slaying his enemies...all except one. Only trying to prove vengeance against the Nubian King, the mighty Pharoah himself cannot deny his budding desire for the beautiful, yet dangerous Queen to be.

   War will sprout...love will flow...who will be the true winner of the Nile.


WARNING: Graphic violence, and much nudity.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Historical
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 49658
Read Count: 34598
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: October 15 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I really like where this story is going. I'm especially interested in the development of Kiara & Raad's relationship. I'm really looking forward to an update.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111872
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017


Title: Chapter 9: Special Places

I think Elise is moving perfectly---at her own pace. I'm just glad to see her finally open up to Jameson. Great chapter.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Was it by chance that they met? 

 

This is an introduction to two people, Justine and Mikkel, and how their lives will intersect from their first meeting. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4570
Read Count: 2087
Published: July 02 2014
Updated: August 03 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Mikkel is so mysterious that I just want to know more about him each chapter. Justine seems like she needs someone like him to spice her life up a little. I'm loving this story so far & looking forward to your next update.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

tbk


Camille Jones accepted society's problem with her body long ago. Yet, she can't help the insecurity felt when approached by gym owner Ryan Kahuna, he was most women's wet dream. He could have any woman he wanted. 


Including her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11368
Read Count: 16318
Published: July 30 2014
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Parking Lot Pimpin

Loved this chapter! I hate Ryan isn't being truthful. Although I constantly had to remind myself he was nervous. Still not a great excuse, but it makes sense. I can't wait to see how Camille finds out he knows her name. Oh, I LIVE for all your commentary in the beginning & end of your stories. Especially about Beyonce. Those divorce rumors are SO tired. Bey kept a whole album from us. Never leaked one wedding picture. What makes people think we'll ever truly know what goes on behind closed doors??? Anyways.. I can't wait until next chapter

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

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Joshua just wanted to help out his band's singer get over the blues with a little drinking and a little loving- that's all.

Right?

 

****Sexy banner by the one and only Elizablu****



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: Of Steel and Silt
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2939
Read Count: 2715
Published: September 28 2014
Updated: September 28 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Her

That. Was. Amazing. I'd love to see where their relationship goes & more of your writing.

Author's Response:

Wow, that was so gracious of you, CaramelGal! I thank you. I'm already thinking about the story of theirs to tell.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Extreme sexual content. The title says it all.



Table of Contents
Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 456
Read Count: 4314
Published: October 06 2014
Updated: October 06 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Blow Job

Goddamn that was hot! I liked it.



Author's Response:

Aww... Thank you CaramelGAl. I was trying something new. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 857]
Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215322
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21

I'm not one for violence against women...but somebody needs to whoop Debbie's ass. One good time. Ole girl is working my last damn nerve! Otherwise, I'm glad to see Camille and Hiram moving forward.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 25 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

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Banner by: Siennna Gray

 

Croy Martin left her hometown in Texas for her dream job in a small town in Missouri. She falls into a seductive web that is weaved in front of her. Not afraid to fall in love, she dives in head first. Torn between three men, what's a girl to do?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 18155
Read Count: 15691
Published: October 29 2014
Updated: November 16 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Diana sounds annoying already and she just got introduced. The fact that Croy is not here for her drama makes me like her already. Love that you used Bre Scullark as your muse too (I was going to do the same). Great updates so far & I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's a process for me chosing muses. It's bad because I write the stories first and then have to go and find the one that fits my image. I hope you contine to enjoy the story!

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 95]
Summary:

 

 

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Joss just knows this summer will change her life... If she can manage to tolerate her bunk leader 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 14449
Read Count: 16599
Published: November 08 2014
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to Summer

I'm really feeling this so far. Never seen a story discussing a weight loss camp on here, but now I'm glad to say you're doing it---and you're doing it well. Joss reminds me of myself, she's her own worst critic. I also like Ezra Miller, so that's another win for this story. I'll be looking forward to your updates.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it! I think a lot of people can realate to the self esteem issues Joss has. Ezra is underused on this site lol he's gorgeous. The next chapter is up! Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Campfire Tales

The fact that Joss debunked him clearly putting the moves on her makes me want to shake her. Girl, Tobias wants you---act like you know. He keeps pushing boundaries with each chapter, so I can't wait for an update.



Author's Response:

Joss is so clueless while Tobias keeps trying to be subtle. The boy is gonna have to shout it at her.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20 2014

Title: Chapter 6: We All Try

I love how you keep reiterating Joss's need to do things for her. That's the most important thing about weight loss, self motivation. Even thought I think she needs more confidence than motivation, because I really feel like she’s just cute and thick. And that kiss...I'm here for it. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

She does need confidence and thats the hardest hurdle for her to tackle. Lol they're so cute together i cant wait for their future encounters.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A BLACK CHRISTMAS (A CONCRETE ROMANCE Book 2) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]

 

A BLACK CHRISTMAS

 

     Professor Adkins is a film instructor at a local Community College in a large urban city.  She has been deeply hurt by love and doesn't want to commit her heart to another relationship until Nile Ngugi an African film major catches her attention.

     Now, the attractive young teacher is reconsidering her position on love and dating during the lonlinest time of the year.  Will her heart be broken again?  Or will the holiday season give her a gift she can't resist?

WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 6542
Read Count: 867
Published: December 04 2014
Updated: December 04 2014


Title: Chapter 1: A BLACK CHRISTMAS

Definitely an amazing read for the holidays. Love it!



Author's Response:

I hope you'll like OUT of a Thousand Invitations.  It's a New Year's Eve short story.  Thanks.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Truth be told, Kari was the drug. The heroin only added to the high I felt when I was with her...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1093
Read Count: 3161
Published: December 11 2014
Updated: December 11 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You have quite a way with words and stories told through the main male character's POV are always refreshing. So far I love it.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

BLACK FEVER (A CONCRETE ROMANCE Book 1) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8133
Read Count: 2775
Published: December 16 2014
Updated: December 16 2014


Title: Chapter 1: BLACK FEVER

That dream was HOT. Another great quality short story.



Author's Response:

I wasn't sure if the dream scene would work.  Now I have my answer.  Thanks.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

It's been fifteen years since Aria has smelled the sweetness of Tennessee. She's been running as hard and fast as she can, but he's always there, just a step behind her. She'll never be free of him... but the question is, does she want to be?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 19659
Read Count: 6071
Published: December 30 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 2: -two-

So glad I read this! It's always refreshing when someone uses your hometown as their story setting. Even if it's the more rural part lol. I'm interested in where you'll go with these two characters. There's a lot of explaining and making up to do with these two---even for a friendship. I'm excited to see where this story goes and keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the read and review! Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

 

 

MINE

Who can you trust in this fucked up world? Nobody that's who!

 

Jelena was forced to live in the real world after her parent's were gunned down. It ain't all cotton candy and gumdrops either. You either have two choices here in Vegas: TO LIVE OR DIE. Jelena thought she knew life but nothing prepared her for life with Milo Castillo.

 

This is the story of Jelena Vera.

 

She fell in love with a Boss.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7860
Read Count: 2960
Published: January 06 2015
Updated: January 16 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One:Brave

Nice to get some more info on Jelena's past. It definitely explains alot. Poor thing just keeps getting hurt too. By the way, I LOVE that Jhene Aiko song. I swear when I first heard it it was on constant replay. Good chapter.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Tina Hamilton's mother always told her to travel in style for she never knows who she could run into. Who knew her mothers words would actually prove true.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7744
Read Count: 4665
Published: January 14 2015
Updated: February 15 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Terminal D

I'm intrigued and would definitely like more.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed
Date: January 14 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Daniel has always been late for everything in his life. He's been late for puberty, dating girls, and even the "monkey in the bush". When he discovers his new neighbor next door is a woman, a very pretty woman, will he take a chance and ask her out? Or will his former bully, Nick Young, beat him to it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 7978
Read Count: 10465
Published: January 23 2015
Updated: May 12 2015


Title: Chapter 3: cast

I'm loving this so far and the cast looks great! Why's Daniel's picture not working?



Author's Response:

Thanks! Can you not see Daniel's picture? I can see his pic just fine on my computer. If you can't see him just google James Marden, that should give you an idea of how Daniel looks.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.