Penname: Musicluva [Contact]

Real name: Monica

Member Since: March 09 2013

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[Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Her mistake was underestimating his obsession with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 24639
Read Count: 40316
Published: April 23 2015
Updated: July 14 2016


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter ten

Hmmm 🤔, he seems a bit possessive. Maya better be careful, and heed any red flags. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07 2016

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Summary:

Despite the absurdity of bargaining with the Almighty while topless and bound in the bedroom of a man whose last name she can’t remember, Diya De la Roy gives God an ultimatum:  Send her a man and a love worth having by next Valentine's Day, or she would give up on both.  Forever.  

Unbeknownst to Diya, she'll get that and more, along with a lesson in how perfectly wicked divine humor can be.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13212
Read Count: 11185
Published: May 02 2015
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

Loved this short story. I was on pins and needles reading the last section!!!! 😍💖💖💖😍



Author's Response:

Thanks Musicluva!  So happy you enjoyed Brandon and Diya's tale : )

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Date: May 03 2015

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[Reviews - 256]
Summary:

Working as a Home Health Aide and struggling to make ends meet. All Aries Washington wanted to do was prove the child she had three years ago, was in fact the son of Cameron Marino. She didn't have any delusions about them putting their differences aside and falling madly in love. Why would she? Cameron was engaged to her ex best friend Ambrosia, A.K.A Ms. Perfect. So imagine her surprise when he not only demands she moves in with him, but marry him too.

Aries had no idea that once she gave birth to her own little Marino, that, that meant she automatically belonged to the whole Marino family. With a group of people who take their strong family ties seriously, she's about to find out that once your in, there's no out. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Marino Family
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 19092
Read Count: 53277
Published: May 14 2015
Updated: June 01 2015


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

I'm a bit surprised that Cameron hasn't put 2 and 2 together to have some sort of clue as to why Aried hid the pregnancy. I meant, why would she want someone who would be devious enough to post naked pics of someone around their child?! 😕

Cameron and Jaylens introduction was sweet. 💖💕💖💕

I wonder how the discussion between Aries and Cameron will pan out!  Curious to see. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2015

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[Reviews - 50]
Summary:

He made a promise to protect her. Can he keep it? Can he keep her?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 12071
Read Count: 20331
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: May 26 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm intrigued. I wonder why Yani is with Nate. Looking forward to an update. 



Author's Response:

Hope you enjoyed the subsequent chapters. Thanks for reviewing - really appreciated.

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Date: May 21 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Pretty intense!  I wonder if she still has her job?

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Date: May 24 2015

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[Reviews - 181]
Summary:

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Chance Gyllenborgh seems to have it all. A pregnant, loving girlfriend, a close knit family, and great life.

 

Angelina Walker is running. She's a top chef and restaurantuer and a workaholic. She throws herself into work to avoid her personal life. Needing a break, she settles down in a town and meet a variety of different people, including Chance.

 

Things seem great at first glance but Below The Surface is where monsters lie and sociopaths dwell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 58269
Read Count: 48923
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: January 22 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Hmmm. The jury is still out on Jen. I'm sensing she may not have good intentions. Great start though. Update soon 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2015

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[Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Clark E. has always been the mysterious one out of all of his friends. With a new company on the rise and heartbreak in his past he has many doubts about women. Taking a chance and from the suggestion of his good friend he goes online and starts a romance with Katrina.

Katrina is the ugly duckling that has been named in her family. Living in the shadows of her older sister and cousin she becomes closed off from the outside world. Her only escape is the internet that gives her confidence. She makes a fake profile pretending to be someone else but then starts to develop feelings for Clark.

What happens when these two get to meet in the real world?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 8175
Read Count: 13732
Published: May 23 2015
Updated: August 03 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

The plot sounds interesting.  Update soon. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23 2015

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[Reviews - 225]
Summary:

Part 2



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11288
Read Count: 22096
Published: June 09 2015
Updated: October 05 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I miss Madi and Matt. I hope all is well on your end. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20 2016

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Mardi girl, you are lookin' to get that @$$ in a world of trouble!  Better get yourself home to your man that you haven't seen in 2 weeks!  I'm elated that Matt did show up at her last performance. I sure hope this guy from The Royal Ballet can open doors for them. Great update. Can't wait for those two get together to show how much they missed each other.  😉

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeeeessss!!! 😄😄😄😄 I'm so glad to see the sequel to this story started!!  

Matts parents are d@mn crazy. All I'm sayin' is that Madi needs to watch her back, and I'm hoping that Matt has sense enough to as well. I wonder what happened with Afam and his parents?  I think there's an underlying story brewing there.   Stay strong Madi!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

I'm happy that opening night of the ballet was a success for them all. I hope it continues. Hopefully having the press there will give them some good positive exposure.  

My heart goes out to Madi regarding her situation with her family.  They really did seem to take her for granted  it's as if they are jealous of her.  Most definitely not looking out for her best interest.

It's unfortunate that Matt couldn't make opening night. Having Dougie there to pick up the pieces (and get tics for all shows!) didn't help in Matts favor. I wonder what is Dougie playing at though. Buying tickets for all shows sends some pretty strong signals. Matt better watch his back too. 

Dag, I wonder what Mats mother and Louisa plan to cook up?  I'm on pins and needles with anticipation. Whatever it is, I think Madi is time enough for them. 

Update soon! 😍😍



Author's Response:

Hi Musicluva,

Madi and her family dynamics are definitely warped, and the Scotsman...ah, he's a smooth one. Kind of like Matt but not! Thanks for reviewing.

K.

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

I'm also curious as to who the young lady was that approached Madi after her show. Perhaps a long lost relative who actually has a heart? Hmmmm ... 😀

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Dag, I'm worried abt Maddi. I'm glad Dante stepped up and reached out to Matt about the emails. It's prob his crazy @$$3d ex! 😡 Not sure why Maddi would want to keep it from Matt, but he needs to get his @$$ home. I'm not trusting this Dougie fellow either. I wonder what is his angle?

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

I hope Madi stays strong and true to herself.  Not sure why Grumps is trying to change her.   I'm glad that Matt seems to love her for who she is (for the most part). She seems a bit undecided about her decision to get married. I hope it's not because of the state of her relationship with her family.

I wonder when he's going to approach her about the threats?

So glad to see your update! 😍

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Aaahhhh, my dearest Matt ** 😍swoon 😍**.  He just loves himself some Madi!  He is truly her knight in shining armor, and he has been all throughout their relationship.  I just love 'em. 💋💖

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Date: July 29 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

So glad that Madi is seeing the light!  Awesome update! 😍😍

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Date: July 31 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

So glad that Madi is seeing the light!  Awesome update! 😍😍

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

OMG!!!  I never expected this ... you never fail to surprise me (which I love😃). Congratulations Madi and Matt!! 🎊🎉d24;💫💥💖💖

LOL!! I know everyone is going to flip when they find out!  Please update so that we can share in the aftermath soon. 😄😄😃😄😆😄

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Date: September 01 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Madi is too funny! Thanks for the update. As always, looking forward to more. 

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Date: September 28 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Hmmm.  Sounds like Matt and Madi need to have serious conversation about their plans for kids. I think Madi and Matt are in for a rude awakening. 

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Date: October 05 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

I feel sorry for Madi in that it seems she's a bit lonely given Matts family hasn't accepted her in their circle.  I know she's still hurting since she's estranged from her so-called family  It would be nice if she had a bit of female support on her side ... even if it's just a close friend.  I know she's really missing Dante now.  

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Date: October 06 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh man! 😟 This was one of me favorites. I hope all is well with you. Look forward to your return when the two me is right for you. 

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Date: December 18 2015

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[Reviews - 200]
Summary:

Nathaniel Hendricks lived alone in his lakehouse on Lake Michigan spending his days remebering the young son he tracgically lost and the wife who left him when he needed her the most. The only thing that kept him remotely happy was the lake he lived by boating and fishing. He already failed as a father and a husband so why would God give him another chance?

Eden Wilson spent most of her life running from abuse and now as a young adult she finds herself running from an obsessive abusive ex-boyfriend. Not wanting the child she's carrying to be in danger she spends most of her pregancy running until she tries to get in contact with her uncle for help. Eden finds herself with her uncle's friend a lonely handsome man Nathaniel who gives her shelter in a snowstorm. 

Little did either of them know how close the baby would bring them together or how much this little bundle of joy would help them learn about secound chances.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 28561
Read Count: 37469
Published: June 16 2015
Updated: June 14 2016


Title: Chapter 5: JANUARY 22ND 1990

Wow!  I'm surprised they would print all of that infomation in the newspaper. Especially the info about where she may be headed. I would think they would figure it euwould put her in danger, right?

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28 2015

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Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78667
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Old Bait and Switch

Hmmm. I smell big trouble and drama lurking!!! Luv it!!! 😍



Author's Response:

Trust your nose.  Thanks Musicluva!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Fallen Angels

Oh yes, I forgot to mention, Tyler really deserved to get that @$$ whipped with those 'colored' and 'pay her' comments 🤔. Sounds like Brandon may be dealing with some separatists in his family as well. What's Tyler's deal?  Why does it seem like he's always trying to pop up and instigate conflict/fights?  His @$$ could use some therapy too!!



Author's Response:

Lol.  Yes he does.  Brandon's family is everything you think and then some.  More on that to come.  Thanks Musicluva! 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.