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Real name: Monica

Member Since: March 09 2013

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Save Me From Myself by Missus James
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 433]
Summary:

 

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 301709
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021

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Title: Chapter 14: Punishment

Oh my goodness!  Juliette is on some crazy ish 😈!!!  This chapter gives some insight of why Bas/Nathaniel is the way he is. My question is what is his fathers involvement in all of this?  I am so loving this story 😍!  I want more!  Please, please, please update soon!  

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Date: October 11 2015
Title: Chapter 1: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

Missing this story ... An update coming soon?

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Date: December 04 2015
Title: Chapter 16: Show and Tell

😄😍😏😋 ... I can't stop cheesin'!  So happy to see this update. A bit worried abt what's in store for Willow's future. Seems Bas/Nate has put her and himself in a potentially dangerous predicament. I wonder how he plans to try to keep her safe this time? 👀😯

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Date: February 07 2016
Title: Chapter 19: Self Destruct

Wow!  You can really feel Willow's pain. I feel so bad for her. I hope she can find some way to deal with this before she does self destruct. 



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All she needs is some time and lots of persistence from Sebastian. :)

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Date: August 28 2016
Title: Chapter 25: Truth Be Told

Wow.  I can understand Willow’s reluctance to bringing a child into their situation (‘cause they’re into some serious ish!  And now, Willow is an accessory to all of this), but nothing good can come from not telling Bas about the pregnancy. I mean, they just went on vacation, and talked about how important full disclosure is with everything. Plus, given his occupation, she should know that eyes 👀 and ears 👂 are always on her in some form of fashion. Stay strong 💪🏾 Willow!

I loved this update.  Looking forward to more. Thanks! 

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Date: April 12 2018
Title: Chapter 20: Far, Far Away

Hot update!  I can't wait to see what Sebastian has in store for winning Willow over, but I  must say, he's off to a good start. But damn, he pulled a 1st degree ... I'm not quite sure what/ how he can redeem himself from that and earn her trust again. I so can't wait to see where this is going!  Love it!  Thanks for the update! d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;!!! 😁

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Date: April 23 2017
Title: Chapter 23: Tiny Punishments

What a way to redeem yourself! 😜 Cool points for Sebastian! 🤗😁



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It's always fun to write in Sebastian's perspective. 

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Date: July 13 2017
Title: Chapter 26: Battle Half-Won

The Authority will wish they never f@ck'ed with Will! 🤭🤫🤗

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Date: July 15 2018
Losing Control by AltheaWriter
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Zuma is a high level marketing executive. Intelligent, ambitious, and manipulative, she's powered her way up the corporate ladder and into a cozy corner office. Being the only black woman at her level at Shearing Wireless has its drawbacks, and Zuma's had to get her hands a little dirty to stay at the top. Suddenly, all of her hard work might now be in jeopardy, thanks to a company merger and a pesky intern named Iris Pena. Iris is just trying to satisfy her internship requirement - or at least that's what she keeps telling herself. Beautiful, young, and vivacious, Iris manages to charm Shearing Wireless in ways that the stunning, yet cold, Zuma Harris could never hope. Juggling corporate espionage, a blooming love life, and issues with her increasingly handsome best friend are becoming more than she can handle. Does Iris have what it takes to go toe-to-toe with her conniving mentor? And will she be able to do it without breaking a few hearts on the way?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 19456
Read Count: 6346
Published: October 11 2015
Updated: January 12 2016

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow. Zuma seems like a real b1@!tch. If she doesn't chech that, she's going to find herself alone or with a stroke ... whichever decides to come first. So far, Iris seems nice, and time enough for Zuma. Great start, and anxious to read more. 

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Date: November 03 2015
Scarred Hearts by Hawtgurl
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Once bitten, twice shy, Marrisa is one bitter lady after her husband cheats on her under her nose, with her sister. Bitter and broken heart Marrissa tells herself she is done with men, One little detail foils all of her plans and now she has to find out what happened to her on the night of her post break up drinking rampage.

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7204
Read Count: 6731
Published: October 31 2015
Updated: March 11 2016

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Title: Chapter 2: Feeding The pain

Interesting plot. Keep the updates coming. 

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Date: November 02 2015
Title: Chapter 3: How the great fall

Wow! I wonder what happened to her. Her little sister is a d@mn trip. What will she do now that she's pregnant?  

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Date: November 09 2015
His Mercy by Missus James
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 458]
Summary:

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(Chapter 19,  20, & Epilogue uploaded as of 12/19/2018)


Growing up in a southern town like Glenmount, Alabama was never easy for Mercy Stovall especially if your personal demon eventually grow up to be 6'4'' and over 200 lbs. Then one night at a Halloween party, everything changed. It all started with one spanking and spiraled downward from there.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73730
Read Count: 113690
Published: November 03 2015
Updated: December 19 2018

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Title: Chapter 11: Needs

So happy to see this update. Seems Mercy may be coming around a bit. Curious to see what Gage has in store. I loved the scene with Riley, (who seems so very thirsty right about now ... can't she take a hint?!?!)

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Date: May 09 2016
Title: Chapter 6: Open Seas and Olive Branches

I read the original, and enjoyed it. I love the revision!  💖  Looking forward to the changes you have in store!  Update soon!

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Date: November 03 2015
Title: Chapter 8: Pies & Lies

Wonder why she's denying what she knows she wants?

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Date: November 04 2015
Title: Chapter 17: Memory Lane

A pivotal point in their relationship for Gage. I hope it doesn't send Mercy running for the hills. Nice to see them reminisce about the good 'ol dayz.  Thanks for the update! d84;a039;😏

 

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Date: July 10 2017
Title: Chapter 13: Hell of a Night

I loved the update. I like that they didn't consummate their relationship on such a sad note. Though, I'm surprised Mercy believed anything that Riley would tell her knowing how manipulative she can be, and that she would do just about anything to get Gage. She's green with envy.  

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Date: January 10 2017
Title: Chapter 10: Sunrise

Loved this update. Their date was so sweet, and it gave them the opportunity to let their guard down a bit. Looking forward to more! 😍

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Date: February 22 2016
Title: His Mercy

Congratulations on the new chapters in your life!  So glad you could fit this update in because I've been trolling the site looking for it. 😊

I'm sorry to hear about Gage's mother's health challenges.  A bit surprised they chose this time to take the big step, bit I suppose they needed something to take their mind off of what happened. Thanks you for this update. 

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Date: December 29 2016
Title: Chapter 9: Want

Finally!  A truthful admission. Can't wait for their date! Thanks for the update!

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Date: December 25 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Heads, Beds, & Webs

D@mn great way to start a morning! 😉😊😌😃😏.  So glad to see this update!

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Date: August 29 2016
Title: Chapter 14: Yearn and Burn

Loved this update. Fun and drama free for a change, (though drama is what I live for in a good love story ... and you never disappoint in that area 😃). 

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Date: February 19 2017
Title: Chapter 15: Priorities

Interesting turn of events. I understand her mom's concern about Mercy's future, but to discourage her from a relationship because of someone who is a hard worker is a bit extreme. Seems it's time both Gage and Mercy had a serious heart to hear about where they want things to go. Thanks for the update!

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Date: April 10 2017
Title: Chapter 16: Run & Hide

Wow!  Gage is determined!  When he wants something, he goes after it. That has to speak for something, for sure. I can't imagine how he plans to approach Mercy's mother. I can't wait!!! 😁😁😁

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Date: April 15 2017
Title: Chapter 18: Three Little Words

Whew!  That was intense!  Yeah, Mercy is a college grad, and way too old for her mama to treat her like she's still in high school. I agree, she should encourage her to focus on her career, but it's a bit contradictory when she's treating her like a child.  Hopefully, they will find a way to come to that understanding between themselves.  Awesome that Gage had her back 😍👍🏾!  Great update. 



Author's Response:

Some parents are like that sometimes. They want their children to be adults, but still treat them like children, so they can't grow. But Gage'll always have Mercy's back. :)

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Date: August 06 2017
CARGO by Elizabeth Griffin
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

CARGO (White Chocolate Series Book 2) by [Griffin, E. F.]



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6547
Read Count: 1448
Published: November 06 2015
Updated: November 06 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is pretty intense. I've never read a story from the perspective of a human trafficking victim. My heart goes out to them all. Can't stop thinking about the little girl.  Very scary and suspenseful. Update soon! 

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Date: November 07 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.