Penname: Musicluva [Contact]

Real name: Monica

Member Since: March 09 2013

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Summary:

For Weston Brooks life is perfect. He's at the top of his game as a Pitcher for one of the best MLB teams in the country. He's also just happens to be one of  New York's most notrious bachelors. Wes lives the life every man dreams of. A different city every night, a different woman in his bed, and more money than he knows what to do with. 

But all of that comes to halt when his father has a heart attack and he must go back home. Back to the town he fought so hard to get out of, and the woman he had let slip away. 




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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6518
Read Count: 2218
Published: April 26 2017
Updated: May 05 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start. I can't wait to see where this goes. 

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Date: April 26 2017

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Summary:

Emily has never wanted a man so bad until Elijah Smith. An Illinois born and bred small town bad boy who grew up just down the road from her. The only problem is, he's her childhood and high school bully. So when he comes around with flowers, muscles, and tattoos she isn't so willing to forget his torturous ways so easily.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 20124
Read Count: 15210
Published: June 04 2017
Updated: May 26 2018


Title: Chapter 3: Make it Rain

Hmmm, I wonder who the text is from! ?🤔

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Date: June 21 2017

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Summary:

 

Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are.     




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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 36570
Read Count: 15097
Published: July 15 2017
Updated: September 30 2017


Title: Chapter 3: No Regrets, No More Subtlety

Wow!  Apparently Raeann really laid one on him. I hope he can recover before the other students arrive! 😁



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She did too much for poor Johnny. I think she almost killed him.

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Date: July 23 2017

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Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 284214
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 14: Sweet Satisfaction

LOL!  That ish was soooooo funny!  You have me up in here choking!  That was awesome!  Good for you Sug, and God bless Chef. Loved this!!



Author's Response:

I am glad you got a good laugh because I had a good laugh when I wrote it. 

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Date: December 17 2017

Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

Sugar seems passionate about her dream, and I wish her well in achieving it beyond her wildest. Who knows ... maybe this will inspire me to reach for one of my own. Great so far!



Author's Response:

Reach for your dreams! It's the journey to make the dream come true is what counts. :)

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Date: July 20 2017

Title: Chapter 2: Unsweet Beginnings

Yeah, I'm sure his @$$ thinks her deserves a piece of the 'pie'. I can see it coming! 🤔I hope she keeps her sister, Rochelle, on retainer at all times. She may have to take his @$$ to court if he tries to take it there. Watch ya back Shug!!!



Author's Response:

You know Rochelle would pounce, but Lance knows better than to go after Sugar's business. He just wanted to get under her skin.

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Date: July 20 2017

Title: Chapter 3: Bitter Treasure

Be careful Sugar!!!  Don't let your kindness get you got (even for a hotty)! 😉



Author's Response:

LMAO! 

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Date: July 22 2017

Title: Chapter 5: Salty Reunion

LOL!  Chef is a charmer (put a mile wide grin on my face) 😁!  Hopefully Sugar will loosen up some and give him a chance to state his peace. I would imagine after being in a bitter marriage for 18 years, the bitterness would 'have' to get old. Her business is thriving, and she seems to be on the come up.  It's been a year since the divorce. Juay breathe and let go a little. Everyone, (specifically her loved ones, who only want the best for her) ain't singing the same tune for norhin'. Great update!😁



Author's Response:

Sugar is definitely going to let go, but are her wants the same as Chef's? ;)

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Date: July 25 2017

Title: Chapter 6: Sweet Jasmine

😁😆😁😆😁!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

<3

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Date: July 26 2017

Title: Chapter 7: Hot Soup

LOL!  I'm loving the way Chef handled Lance!  Brilliant! =0)



Author's Response:

It was a fun scene to write, but their face-to-face meet-up will be hilarious! LOL

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Date: July 30 2017

Title: Chapter 8: Yummy Cake

LOL, busteeeed!!!!  Too funny!😂



Author's Response:

Sugar was standing in that kitchen with a sex toy box in her hand, looking like this:

shocked

And feeling attacked when she got busted! 

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Date: August 03 2017

Title: Chapter 9: Sweet Talk

Sugar keeps fighting it, but I can't wait to see what Xhef has in store for her an d their date. The boat ride would've been nice though. 😍



Author's Response:

Sugar will keep fighting, but she'll learn the hard way about Chef. He's got her figured out. He's a trickster who gets what he wants, LOL. And the boat ride will be coming up in a future update! I gotchu, boo!

WINK

 

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Date: August 06 2017

Title: Chapter 10: Hot Affair

Aaaahhhhh ... Lol!!! 😁😁😁  Mrs. James, thanks for this nice long update. But, you know you're wrong!!!! LOL !  I've got this mile wide grin on my face and can not wait for your next update, 'cause I know it's going to be juicy!  


Mariah straight up got caught, but I don't blame Sugar for turning that blind eye. Don't start none, won't be none!  Why should she look out for Lance?  I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next one. Don't make us wait too long! 😏



Author's Response:

Juicer than a medium rare steak! :D

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Date: August 13 2017

Title: Chapter 11: Sugary Sweet

So great to see this update. I think Chef is just the man to prove Sugar wrong about her insecurities!  Love him!



Author's Response:

So sorry for the wait, but I am so glad you enjoyed it! :D Chef has many things up his sleeve to help Sugar out, but there's gonna be unexpected curveballs as well...LOL

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Date: October 29 2017

Title: Chapter 15: Salty Scars

Love your updates ... Keep 'em coming. I'm glad Chef or 'Miles', (as Sugar now calls him), 😉 thought to follow Sugar home. I'm just waiting for Lance to try to pull some 💩 in retaliation. Can't wait for the get together.  Thanks so much for the multiple posts. A real sweet treat! 💖💖💖💖



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am so happy that you are enjoying the updates. LOL, I am glad that you catch the whole 'Miles' thing. Now that she's catching some feelings for him, she's starting to call him by his real name and Chef loves that, LOL. You know Lance is going to try and do something stupid, so keep an eye out. 

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Date: December 18 2017

Title: Chapter 18: Bitter Pretending

Glad to see this update!  Love Chef's strategy on showing Shug what she really wants!  Lobeakk the character development. Can't wait for more!d84;a039;d84;a039;



Author's Response:

You know, Chef always like to think outside of the box, LOL! 

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Date: April 03 2018

Title: Chapter 20: Sweet Compromise

Wow!  Talk about standing your ground. Good for you Chef!!!  😃



Author's Response:

You know he ain't gonna back down! Marines don't quit!

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Date: May 18 2018

Title: Chapter 25: Bitter Pill

Wow! That was pretty intense! 😱. Great update. 👏🏾. This is soooo good!  Thank you. 



Author's Response:

I am so happy that you were able to enjoy it. 

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Date: September 13 2018

Title: Chapter 27: Bland Departure

Now Sugar knew she was wrong. One lie won't do anything but spew another. She should also never forget what a snake Lance is. I just knew he was up to no good! 🤨. I wonder what the hell Chef/Miles has in store?! 😳



Author's Response:

Ya'll gonna love the next chapter! Promise!

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Date: December 08 2018

Title: Chapter 28: Sweet Escape

So glad they appear to be getting back on track!  But girl ... a nineteen hour drive is a long ride!!!  I would have been thinking he was taking me to the edge of the earth and kicking my @$$ off, never to been seen again. 👀😰. Glad to see I was way off base, and they are starting to talk things through! 🥰



Author's Response:

LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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Date: December 12 2018

Title: Chapter 31: Raw Conclusion

That was really intense. I feel for both Sugar and Miles. Can’t wait for the next part of their story. 

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Date: April 21 2019

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Summary:

Sometimes love is inevitable. Despite the obstacles of time, place, and other people, true love is just meant to be. This is an AU no ZA fic that follows the romantic and dramatic ups and downs of Michonne and Rick's journey from the beginning.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Michonne
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 164990
Read Count: 99638
Published: August 17 2017
Updated: September 19 2017


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Did I miss something?  It appears that chapter 6 is a repeat of chapter 5?  So far, so good. I'm loving this story. 👍🏾



Author's Response:

You were right, i must have copied it over incorrectly. Thank you so much for catching that! I fixed it. Happy reading!

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Date: August 19 2017

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 47]
Summary:

Nayely Polite and MJ Park have many things in common: dead parents and group homes.

When their stories converge, an indestructible connection tethers these two together in ways they'll never understand. Even when they spend years apart, trying their best to steer clear from one another, Nayely and MJ will soon realize that there's no escaping the hold life and death has on them.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 100841
Read Count: 50901
Published: September 07 2018
Updated: June 08 2021


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Given that MJ reached out subconsciously, and Nayley knows his history, she'll realize that MJ really needs her. Like this so far. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04 2018

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