Penname: RedMoon [Contact]

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Member Since: March 25 2013

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Reading and living in a world of my own making is my life




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[Reviews - 702]
Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - The Cruelties of Fate

Find him! He has to find him! He knows Rich loves him, they will b alright, I just know it ! But please have the baby they need it. Shit be twins women at the fond of their childbearing years are more likely to so why not! Find David , Anthony needs that love from his dad. Mercedes eat ass !!



Author's Response:

Lol!  I love this review.  Thanks RedMoon!

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Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Cougars

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! See, see I'm good for ideas man!  I was like whoop whoop!!!!!!!!!! Twins!!! I'm glad they're being blessed . But can we talk about extending for like two..no three more chapters? Can we meet the dad and family and the babies ??? Please I beg of you! Do you like cake ? I make great like great cakes ..and pies ..and cheesecakes ... Just tell me what you want girl! a86;a039; Im also  for disowning parental units that are unhealthy for you. Just poof be gone is how I feel. I can love and respect you as my parent from a distance...some people aren't healthy to be around



Author's Response:

Lol!  You sure picked the right currency.  I'm a sucker for anything sweet.  No worries.  You will get to meet the twins and see how the familial relationships have faired in the epilogue.  Delivering David and several more chapters is, unfortunately, a promise I can't make.  But the epilogue will be fairly long and there's a looming possibility of a story for Rich where you're likely see quite a bit of Anthony, Natalia, and the twins.  I hope that makes up for it.  Thanks for reviewing, RedMoon!

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Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Parent Trap

She's not ready ! (In my Kevin heart voice) while I do think Jamison is best for her she's not ready. It's not that I don't like Anthony but they are. In two different places in their life. And she needs someone to balance her and truely adore her not just privately but publicly too. But .... I know Anthony is coming back 



Author's Response:

No, Nat ain't ready.  Jamison is generally a good guy, but it remains to be seen if he's what Nat needs or they're merely what the other thinks they want.  I actually think Anthony provides a better balance than Jamison.  Anthony is daring and open (more so than her) where she's careful and guarded.  Jamison, on the other hand, is more like her; and maybe that's exactly what she needs.  We'll see.  And you're right--Anthony will eventually be back.  But for what purpose and how long remains to be seen.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Redmoon!

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Date: January 10 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - In His Shoes

😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫 my heart is crying out here!!! Ok, so I admit that Jamison at first glance looked to be the one ( same age bracket ,established, caring, wanted to start a family...blah bla blah) . Not blah but you know what I mean . But as I just read the updates(I like to wait until there's more than one,helps curb the beast) I found that he would be the worst possible person for her.  I was happy she finally told him. Anthony.... Idk . He's establishing himself and all that jazz but will he be strong enough to stand up to his family ,his father, and claim her? 

 

And can Barb get a damn beat down please 



Author's Response:

Jamison and Natalia were really too much alike in the worst possible way to work out.  But as you suggested, Anthony might not be who she needs either with all his concerns over how his family will react to the relationship.  We'll see. 

I'll add you to the very long list of people requesting Barbara beat down.  She's so deserving

Thanks for reading and reviewing, RedMoon!

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Date: January 19 2015

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[Reviews - 173]
Summary:

As Joss and Eshan prepare to wed, will the relationship survive long enough to see "for better" when their families become their "for worse"?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 45613
Read Count: 29760
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: July 09 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really tried not to read this until u decided to update again but I failed  now I'm hooked 



Author's Response:

Thanks Redmoon.  I have hit a wall with this story I just can't seem to get past.  I'll keep trying though.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: February 22 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Quick question ... Am I the only one who read Eshan's words and womb clenched... I mean swoon!!



Author's Response:

To quote Cassuis Noir's review, "Dying.  Dying."  Lol!  Thanks RedMoon!

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Date: July 06 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 52]
Summary:

The death of the Crane patriarch changes the town of Harmony.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, Passions
Characters: Eve Russell
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 50511
Read Count: 7287
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: April 17 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wtf! I have to re read chap one again 

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Date: February 20 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ok I just sat and read all the chapters! Don't let them die ppl are just coming together! But I feel like I'm reading a sequel without reading the first book 

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Date: February 21 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34241
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

OK! So I dont think Roxie is losing weight because shes insecure about herself I think that shes trying to releive stress and not stress Griffin out because shes stressed. Its a little self destructive. Griffin and Roxie both need to speak up. Shes harming herself by keeping her stress inward and hes allowing others to keep him away from his Fiance. I would think Griffin would have put the smack down on Rich and Micky after the stunt they pulled with Rose , but it seems hes becoming a push over. I dont like this .I just wish someone would be an adult and step to the responsibility plate



Author's Response:

Really like your throughts here! We're definitely going to see what's going one with Ms. Roxie very soon. ;)

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Date: January 27 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I really hope it doesn't go bad for them 

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed
Date: December 23 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Welp! I see a storm in the horizon! 



Author's Response:

Haha! Redmoon! You're too funny :-)

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Date: January 20 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I cant read anymore. Its annoying how passive she has gotten , how insecure , its crazy!. You could have talked to him about your concerns and had the sex. Idk . I know ill be back when the new update hits but its making my stomach flip just thinking about all the shit thats about to happen that could have been avoided if someone would act like they actually want to make this relationship work and communicate. 

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Date: January 28 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Taken down for publication!

Yeah ... I don't like how the characters are turning out either . Both Roxie and Griffin are becoming passive .. Too passive . Roxie could be putting in apps. Looking for a job teaching . Trying to find herself and make a life outside of Griffin. The communication between them is non existent nobody seems to be getting what they want but Rich. Roxie has turned into a woman whose entire life , health ,sanity is based on Griffin. He should do what his pops said and take care of home first and foremost . But they should be talking and they're not. I'm a military spouse so I understand the strain distance could put on a relationship, but this is just ridiculous ...... Thank Goodness Griffins dad spoke up or we'd be going through this for idk how long  oh and thanks Troy!

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Date: February 05 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

 

He knew the day would come, he just didnt know it would be so soon 



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Serendipity
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 741
Read Count: 1383
Published: January 30 2014
Updated: January 30 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Was that was cute

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed
Date: January 31 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Centuries ago vampires and other assorted beings co-existed in relative peace on the same plane as humanity. As their powers and numbers grew the majority of humanity became more dangerously superstitious. Eventually the humans began to believe that all vampires were evil and begin their relentless pursuit of them. During this time many of the younger weaker vampires were lost. In order to save their numbers and families both vampire and human, one faction of the vampires created a gateway to another realm. However some vampires stayed behind as they awaited the time to reclaim their rightful place on the earthly plane making sure to keep the truth shrouded in myth.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3170
Read Count: 1388
Published: February 13 2014
Updated: February 15 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lol I was laughing towards the end but I loved the story !! Can't wait foe chap 2

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Date: February 13 2014

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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Haunted by her former life, Kattia seeks solace in another.  But there is one who pursues her—a ruthless hunter whose existence is dedicated to the ruination of hers.  One who will never give up the chase.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7076
Read Count: 852
Published: February 16 2014
Updated: March 08 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Ashes to Ashes

Wow! What is she ! I loved it 



Author's Response:

Thanks Redmoon.  More on who and what Kattia is to come.

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Date: February 22 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

He's tall. He's handsome. He's funny and charming and sweet. He's everything that you could want in a man. But, he has a sweet tooth... and it might just be for you.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Horror, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13191
Read Count: 5352
Published: February 19 2014
Updated: March 22 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Mind of a Killer

Wow!!!! I like it ... Scary but I like it 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read!

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Date: February 19 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Every family has problems we just know how to get rid of ours.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Horror, Psychological, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence
Challenges: 3 Random Things
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 745
Read Count: 2874
Published: February 22 2014
Updated: February 22 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Done

I'm not into horror but I liked this 

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 22 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 

Every wife wants her husbands undivided attention, most definitely on their anniversary. Kara couldn't be more furious when her plans go to hell while her husband is nose deep with directing a new blockbuster movie, and as such she does what any red blooded woman would in her situation; go out and have a hell of a good time without him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Challenges: Beyonce
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5795
Read Count: 5325
Published: February 22 2014
Updated: February 24 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yay!



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2014

Retired
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[Reviews - 338]
Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 83552
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Four

Please update

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11 2014

Title: Chapter 1: One

Man this seems good!

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Date: February 23 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Illyana is a young wolf during an age of lone wolves and fewer females...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 15180
Read Count: 10907
Published: March 19 2014
Updated: January 20 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like it lots!!!!!

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20 2014

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

I was saved by him. Saved by a ghost. A Specter. And while I lived my life in his debt, hoping to one day do right the wrong that was done to me, I became just like him. A Ghost. A Specter.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 20504
Read Count: 2330
Published: March 26 2014
Updated: April 29 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was an intense chapter. Being made a puppet by the ppl who saved you.... Damn ... Update soon!

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Date: March 26 2014

Title: Rush: Specter

Same chap for 2&3

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed
Date: April 01 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 52]
Summary:

 

Warrick Mungo was a senior in college at Wolfpax University. Son of the Alpha Rex, or Alpha King, he enjoyed all of the benefits of his position as Royal Enforcer and Captain of the Claw Ball team. He was the youngest of fourteen sons. Why did he have to be the one to receive the Alpha Rex gene, anyway? It was always the eldest son of the Alpha Rex and his true mate. Everybody knew that. Warrick just didn't understand how his parents expected for him to put any effort into locating his mate so that he could settle down, when there were so many interesting flavors still left to sample. Then there was The Problem. The one that seemed to unnerve even his father. Everyone thought that if he just found his Regina, his balance, The Problem would be automatically under control. He isn't so sure that just meeting his Regina will make everything right. What if she fears him, too? What if his responsibilities put her in danger? All he knows for sure is that he's not ready to meet her...yet.

 

     Thandie was in a category all her own. A certified genius of geniuses, she had come to the university on a mission to find her purpose in life. You'd think that four PhD's would have done that already, but no. She was bored again, and a bored Thandie was a terror that her Alpha simply could not allow. So when she turned eighteen, he sent her to the territory of the Alpha Rex while she attended Wolfpax U. Socially awkward, overweight and haphazardly dressed, and then there's The Other Part that shall not be named outside of the pack house. Let's just say that she had always stood out. Her pack, and her Alpha, always loved and protected her tender and loving heart. The Alpha even sent fifty Enforcers to University with her just for her protection from...well her own clumsiness for starters. They were also in place to stop others from discovering...well, The Other Part. How will she cope with leaving home to go away to school for the first time ever, without her beloved brother, Theo? How will she cope with the path she must walk to get there? Moreover, is she ready for the possibility that she will finally meet her mate?

 

*Note: When I finish it, This Book Will Be Published. If someone offers me a contract, I will not finish posting it online. I'm sorry for any disappointment this may cause, but I really believe in this story. I hope you guys will support me, anyway, and help me to polish it until it shines.



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: A Scientific Rejection
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19523
Read Count: 9897
Published: March 31 2014
Updated: May 09 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A History Lesson for Little Pup

Yes!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.