Penname: bookbutterfly [Contact]

Real name: Melanie

Member Since: April 07 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I live and work in Germany, teaching English and taking care of my family.


Like most writers here, I love to read. Writing is awfully hard, but so worth doing. My goal is to get better, bit by bit.




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Summary:

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Stop fighting about the same old thing, Let's start over, We can't let our good love die, Maybe we can start over, Give love another life,

 

I know that this will hurt you, I know you'll cry, I know I called you selfish, but that's a lie, I feel I know that's the best for us,

 

Let's start over 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 31466
Read Count: 10916
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: September 19 2016


Title: Chapter 5: She Can't Love You

No. She needs to be calm, go over, introduce herself to the girlfriend and stun Ethan. He's such a jerk.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 20 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Characters

Oh, and someone needs to call the MIL on her petty jealousy.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 20 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Characters

I think Caroline isn't as clever as she thinks. Does she assume that Katherine will quit her job, stay home and pop out the grandbabies? I need to have a ringside seat when Caroline learns she's been betting on the wrong horse! Bwahahaha!

but more importantly, what did Aurora DO to him, that has mother and son so up in arms? Was she unfaithful? Or did she just leave? 

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Date: September 20 2016

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[Reviews - 277]
Summary:

Lance was a man who had it all and lost it all. He was down and out and was ready to give up because he had nothing to live for. Nina was a woman who had enough of being used and was trying to start her life over in a new city. When these two meet will Lance have something to live for? Or will he continue to live in misery. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 40637
Read Count: 72036
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: July 06 2015


Title: Chapter 11: Give Me Time

My hand just shot up: Of course she should wait.

She can't understand it, because she never had a real man tell her what is what before. She only had some punk*ss boys before. So totally new experience for her.

Man just up and stated his interest in no uncertain terms. How will they ever get to sleep?!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: February 03 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Unexpected Meetings

Did she walk or run? 

Just pulling your leg. Great to have you back.



Author's Response:

Lol Thank you!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 20 2014

Title: Chapter 15: No Secrets

No. She is an adult. He could've told her.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: August 15 2014

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - In His Shoes

I think it's safe to say you pulled this story out of the fire and did a spectacular turnaround. Just wow.



Author's Response:

Thanks Bookbutterfly! 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: January 20 2015

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Summary:

She's a mess he can't help wanting to fix.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Southern Gentlemen
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 90
Read Count: 69510
Published: January 11 2014
Updated: October 19 2015


Title: Alexa and Brody

Aw. I hope they make up soon. He takes family for granted and she was ready to die for her family.



Author's Response:

Things will come in full circle never fear! :D

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: August 18 2015

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[Reviews - 47]
Summary:

Brody has been in love with his best friend Jordan for years. Technically she is bi sexual so he is hoping he has a shot. She's only dated women since forever so the shots in hell but he is willing to take it. Because he has 2 weeks to get her to give them a chance at being more than friends. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Homosexuality, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 11584
Read Count: 4563
Published: January 13 2014
Updated: June 11 2019


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Is she afraid of intercourse?



Author's Response:

That will be addressed shortly. Please keep reading to find out.

 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: January 19 2014

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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Freedom comes in many forms. In this case two sexy British men. But does that freedom come with a price?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 10238
Read Count: 7644
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: February 17 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Welcome to the Chamber!

It was a bit rushed, but hella hot!

You absolutely positively cannot leave this as a one shot, if you really want to make friends!

You have some splainin' to do! Like what'sgoing to happen in the morning when she wakes up and regains her senses? Are they some kind of Other beings? Were or Vampire, and she's feeling some sort of mating pull with them? How did they find her?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I know that it was a bit rushed, but believe me there is a reason for that. The plot that this story will eventually take has some major twists and turns. But don't worry I will tell how and why they found Stephanie so fast and what they are.

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Date: January 18 2014

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Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34242
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Taken down for publication!

I like your stories and your characters. On the one side I'm like, Yippee more Roxie and Griffin, on the other side, I'm thinking 'what more do these two sweethearts have to go through?' All the same, if you write it, I'll read it. You have a talent of writing real characters and real situations. So good for you that you are publishing. 

Now, as long as I can get me some more Brody, I'm all good.

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Date: January 18 2014

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Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 83578
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen

A very romantic chapter, still, isn't it a bit early to be able to feel the baby kick and hear his/her heartbeat? 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: February 11 2015

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Summary:

A story how even though you think you have your life planned out, cupid's arrow will hit you when you least expect it. Chris and Kat both attend Tulane University. This is Chris last year and after graduation he's leaving town. But, what happens when a beautiful African American woman catches his eye?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 55615
Read Count: 159187
Published: March 01 2014
Updated: August 20 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

The formatting would be easier on the eyes if you used paragraphs.

In Chapter one, you had a point where you were writing in 3rd person and then switched inexplicably to  1st person.

Apart from that, you've created an interesting story, and I'm curious to see where it goes.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. This is my first story. I did 3rd person as a physical description of the 2 main characters. I think I did better with the paragraphs in later chapters, once I figured out the formatting, but I'm always learning. Thank you for reading and feedback.

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Date: April 18 2014

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Summary:

What do you do when your best friend you've secretly loved pops up and tells you about his pending nuptials to another woman? Kerri DuBois keeps it moving as if her heart hadn't been ripped from her chest. She's loved her best friend and will need to get over him and soon. And there is someone who can help her do just that.

 

Black sheep, Brandon Wesely, returns home after a long absence to hear of "Saint Kerri" and is instantly enamored. When he looks at her, he can see her pain and wants to help her get over his little brother…and he selfishly wants to keep her for himself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13930
Read Count: 26194
Published: April 09 2014
Updated: April 13 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think pmgayles makes a good point. Maybe there is another story in there, about how Mark and Quen finally sort it all out, and Mark finally gives her all his love.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: April 13 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think you meant 'clutch' or 'handbag' instead of sheath (which I think is a dress) in the first paragraph.

On the one hand, I hate that you finished it so quickly. The pacing was a bit wonky, but it all worked out in the end. On the other hand, I'm glad that you DID finish it. I'm kinda glad for the happy ending, but I thought it was going to go a lot further with twists and turns before we got there.

 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: April 13 2014

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Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 54482
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Just perfect!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: August 09 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

You just turned my world upside down! Love it!

"what will the pack think?"

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Date: August 12 2014

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Summary:

Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.

Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19790
Read Count: 43932
Published: May 20 2014
Updated: September 13 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yeah. Breezy. 

Update soon, please.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 03 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

:-D



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Glad to know it made you smile. Stay tuned. More to come. 

Much Love

Yevette

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: September 14 2014

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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

What happens when fame and forturne enters your life? What happens when your whole world is turned upside down? Grace and Poppy Arber are in for a whirlwind after a run in with the world famous Porter Taylor. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 12678
Read Count: 5569
Published: June 01 2014
Updated: June 23 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So when will Grace fess up?

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 01 2014

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Summary:

In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks.  Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set.  Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear.  While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.

 Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect.  For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business.  Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of.  As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.   

 When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace?  Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise? 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 70686
Read Count: 14883
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, tough choice. She should go with Carter.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 08 2014

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Summary:

Morphine Jones isn't your average girl. She's a new member of the avengers named the Blue Inferno. She's what she likes to call, a "Super Pyrokinetic". She has pyrokinesis and she controls fire. Loki has escaped his prison cell in Asgard, and he is heading to Midgard to cause more damage.What happens when Blue Inferno meets Loki, the god of mischief and lies? Will fire and ice collide, or will everything fizzle out. (This takes place after the Avengers movie. I DO NOT own the Avengers or Loki, I only own Morphine and other original characters.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Laufeyson and Surturdottir
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 34425
Read Count: 12477
Published: June 09 2014
Updated: July 17 2014


Title: Chapter 18: Expecting

Oh Surtur, your daughter takes a little 'break' from childbirth and you possess her? Not cool! He really needs to work on his parenting skills. Oh, snap! He hasn't got any...



Author's Response:

I think Surtur and Odin took the same parenting class...and failed miserably!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: July 11 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Left Alone

I can't believe Morphine told him to stay put, so he did! ROFLMAO! More please!



Author's Response: LOL she has that kind of power!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 09 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Opposites Attract

Is she really what he needs to iron out the kinks in his "soul"? Or is this a trick?

 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 10 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Talk about it

Not pissed. Surprised that he is so willing to be changed. But love will do that to ya!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 11 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.