Penname: aDreamaFantasy [Contact]

Real name: Aisya

Member Since: April 24 2013

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[Reviews - 217]
Summary:

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49948
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Camille I hope she gets her self together she really deserves more in life. I'm happy she has tasha she's a great friend and she's stable so that makes it even better. Xavier is a godsend he's a true gentleman. I hope they get their chance the chemistry is way to strong to ignore. Dice is nuts I'm sure we all know that. I hope someone just takes him out of his misery because he's all the way crazy. I hate he had to hurt Camille like that for her to leave but some lessons are best learned the hard way. Can't leave Nick out he's just as good of a best friend. Paige and Kyle are fucked up. If you didn't love him you should of cut it off when you figured it out. Fuckin his best friend in his bed is unexcusable and I don't care how much you love Kyle. She should of loved Xavier enough to leave him before it got that far along. I'm really enjoying this story! I hope some happiness is coming Camille's way. :)



Author's Response:

I really, really love your comment. You are so right. You will see a lot of character growth in the upcoming chapters. That's something I truly want for Camille. The hurt and pain is what's going to shape her.

 

And I'm glad that I was able to betray a strong chemistry between Camille and Xavier. For a moment I thought I was lacking in that department but I'm happy that you've told me otherwise.

 

Yeah, you are right about Paige and Kyle. That was dirty how they did the person they claimed to love. These two will be back though.

 

Lastly, happiness is coming Camille's way very soon. I think she's been through even sadness. It's time for a recovery period.

 

Thank you soooooo much for reading and reviewing!!!!

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Date: July 09 2013

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108478
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

This story is really amazing. Dana is something to see. I believe her whole heartedly and I just hope Tam comes around because all that snappiness is going to mess up their relationship. Jayden is a sweetheart and so is his dad. Jay has a ton of spunk and Nancy needs to forgive her past so she can be happy again. I think Dana will be a big part in that.



Author's Response:

Nancy still has a lot of demons to come to grips with.  She still has to deal with her prejudice and her negative attitude.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: July 11 2013

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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 288928
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

You surprise me and I love that! This story isn't predictable and that makes it rare and wonderful for sure. I can feel her everything she describes is real and raw. I felt for her when Phillip ended up wanting her cousin. I've been there and it sucks. She handled it really well and I believe she's starting to have faith in herself which is amazing. The least he could of done was text her I mean I know he was confused but that doesn't mean scar her even more. He knowd how delicate she and he still chose that path. Well everyone's human and I know he's falling for her just as fast as she's falling for him. So that scene on the fence O_o amazing! Poor Valerie can't get away from Henry when he's determined. That was one hellava apology and one of the best frenzy type sex scenes I've ever read. I can't wait to see what happens!

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Date: October 02 2013

Title: Chapter 23: QUESTION

Henry is a wonderful diseaster if I ever seen one. He's too emotinally wrecked for Valerie or any woman for that matter. She doesn't deserve the dissapearing act or the constant apologies. We're all scared of something so him being scared of how he feels for her is no excuse. Like seriously he knows she's really fragile. I myself would love to read henrys pov. I think it'll help us really grasp why he runs everytime it gets too deep. I just hope valerie gets stronger and not weaker. She's gotta start depending on herself for hapiness. I have faith in her though so I think she'll work it out.

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Date: January 26 2014

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 FULL

I think Henry is perfect for her. He's so intune with her mind,body, and soul which is just what she needs. At first I was thinking give it a rest and enjoy. Then I thought about it and realized she's having normal doubts its sad but she' s really fucked up over George. I still think she's come along way and she's growing more confident without realizing it. Can't forget about the sex! That scene makes me want a Henry for myself lol. 

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Date: December 30 2013

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

Definitely publish! This story is amazing and way better than some of the ones I buy from Barnes and Noble. I can't wait to read the rest of this add! I love that Henry is so taken with her. They're so cute I love it! Valerie is even  being reasonable and trusting her heart. George is something that she needs to overcome. I think she needs closure but I don't know about her standing up to him and telling him how she feels. It might make her feel worse.

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Date: December 11 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

That was everything! I feel so bad for Valerie :( I'm happy she's opening herself up more and fighting back when the thoughts of George consume her. Henry is really good for her right now and vice versa. I can't wait to see what happens now. I need a Henry in my life lol.

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Date: October 11 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Aaah! They make so much sense then don't make any sense all at once. I think they have the power to make or break each other had I think it's going to happen both ways pain and pleasure. Henry's so alpha male it's sexy! Valerie's a rare gem and so is Henry. I can't wait till you update!

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Date: October 06 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I really just love this story! The characters are all so different and have personality. I really just want Valerie to be happy. Her mom's not shit in my book and neither is her dad. How could you tell your child that she should of been happy that her ex who obviously didn't really care about her was the best she could do with how she was at the time...Her dad's not shit because he didn't even remember her birthday. That's not ok.I'm glad Josephine was there to be in the middle when Ella jumped in on Valerie. They really need to let her live her life judgement free. They know how much their negative words mess with her. It's not right for them to just talk to her any kind of way. I'm glad Henry called. He always seems to be there when she needs him. I wonder why they haven't talked in a month...I'm anxious lol. Love love love your writing!

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Date: September 24 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I really really like this story! I can relate to Val. I'm not that extreme but I definitely have said or thought like her on several occasions and its crazy cuz you never think you're that bad until you see another side of it. I think Henry is good for her and vice versa. Their chemistry is off the charts I can't wait till they get to the prolouge part so we can see what happened before the sex. I can't wait for the next add!

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Date: July 08 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I think Savannah is using her experience with Henry to shape him. I'm glad he's at least honest so if he says he's not ready for a relationship thats what he means. I think he genuinely likes Valerie and if he continues to treat her like he is she's going to fall hard I just hope he's there to catch her. As cliche and corny as that sounds lol it would destroy her if he breaks her heart. I can't wait to see what happens when he gets back to valerie. s/n his brother sounds just as cute!

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Date: July 09 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I hope Savannah stops before she has an addiction. Henry is so honest and that's good. Valerie brings out the best in him. I think he really cares about her if he didn't he wouldn't of stopped her advances and explained himself. They have amazing chemistry I can't wait to see when their restraints break.

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Date: July 16 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Wow! That was like groundbreaking he broke through so many barriers and she got the best birthday gift that she's ever had lol. I'm happy he replaced her bad memories with good ones now she can be free and able to enjoy her day. Wow again for that birthday head lol Henry knows what he's doing! And how he described why she was beautiful was so sweet I would of cried too it was that beautiful! I'm on edge now waiting for the next part!

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Date: July 22 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

 

 

One night of passion. That all started with a grapefruit.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2527
Read Count: 1254
Published: September 25 2014
Updated: September 25 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Play

Grapefruit..hmmm interesting lol.  I don't like grapefruit but maybe oranges would work!  She definitely brought the spice back in their relationship.  Hopefully it stays like that for awhile.  Loved the writing!



Author's Response:

Yeah, she did suggest navel oranges in the video, so that's an options too. And I highly doubt she'll ever have a problem with "spicing it up" after that. Especially if she keeps a stash of grapefruits around. Thanks for reading and reviewing aDreamaFantasy.

CG

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Date: September 25 2014

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