Penname: SparkApCider [Contact]

Real name: Dronellar

Member Since: March 13 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Thanks for visiting.  I love reading and writing, but mostly reading.  My goal is to write one great story at a time but because I function better when I have multiple thoughts going on at once, I wonder if that will ever be achieved.  In the meantime, I stick with this--find the place that challenges me most and let it rip.   

All artwork has been created by me unless otherwise disclaimed and is licensed solely and in it's entirety by the SPAC, SparkApCider, creating1_c1999, and Beauty of Creating, Inc. 

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[Reviews - 201]
Summary:

 



Tragedy brings all the Mercer brothers back home, even Bobby who left town and abandoned his family for mysterious reasons. His return will shake up everyones world, including his ex girlfriend who is hiding a secrete of her own. Lives are changed forever when the truth behind their loved ones death comes to a head. Will the four brothers that are bonded by choice not blood pull together as a family, or will revenge tear them apart? Bobby/OC


Rated NC-17 : For extreme violence, language, and strong sexual content.


I want to thank idjunkie for a wonderful banner. Thank you chica!



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 70748
Read Count: 33816
Published: February 08 2009
Updated: July 30 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Gone Baby,Gone

There isn't much you have to do to get me to like...um...Detroit themed movies...a tight cast that includes BEY and Marky Mark!!! You could have spilled ink on the paper and I would have been shouting hot damn!

BTW...I love it...as a movie buff I strive to spin arcs myself and rewrite...that's the creative birdie in us. Reading right along... ;-) 

 



Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. I hope to update this soon. 

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 26 2009

Title: Chapter 5: Inadequate Truths

This chapter was the bambiggity...

1. It showed just how much Baby cared for the Mercers, Evelyn and Bobby--Terrance is on the outside looking in.

2. Though something still hangs in the wings 'cut off' by the visitor that interrupted Evelyn's speech, there's enough information in her videodiary to lay things out for Baby to follow her warnings.

3. It picks up right off from where you left things...long time ciming, but it was necessary really for us to see the connection that baby has to her past--even with the footnote of her 'abandonment issues'

This chapter was Baby's bow...she is the anchor now for the family, and the torch was officially passed.

I loved it! With Evelyn doling out careful instructions that she not trust the police and basically keep the truth away from Bobby, I only see Sofia as her ally. Now, does Sofia have a familia she can go to when her back is up?

Or, will Baby be forced to lay it all on Bobby's feet?

Right now, I think she wants to trust Tee, because of her nature to stand on the word of his disgust with poepoe corruption. But Sofia has a point in this that Tee has to either be suspicious of Fowler and keeping him close or he's up to his ears in this shit.

I have no clue where you will be taking this, but you are doing the damn thing. I'll be around to catch the update. I hope it won't be too long, but as a writer I know how you feel about wanting to post the best you have to offer.

With that said...great update!

Author's Response: Cider, I don't know where to even start. You're review was to good for words. I love that you gave real feedback. Girl, thank you so much. That means alot to me. I can tell that you really do like this story.

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13 2009

Title: Chapter 4: Debts, Lies & Video Tape

Oh this was good. I'm so sure now that Terrance still has a long way to go to compete for her heart. Bobby is back, and his presence creates a whole lot of drama for all involved with him or related to him, with Karina/Baby as no exception.

I can't wait to see how Terrance shakes her down about 'all night' with Bobby.

But more than anything this video...what does it mean. I want to say Victor is related to this somehow, but with the way you are writing...it's hard to be sure.

Great!

Author's Response: Read on chica! Read on! lol! Bobby is definitely shaking things up a bit.

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13 2009

Title: Chapter 3: Hate Me, Or Love Me

There was nothing wrong with it...take your time. I can hear them spatting at each other. Lovely. I miss this story. I really need to catch up! Thanks.

Author's Response: Thanks 4 the 5 stars chica. Let me know when u catchup.

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13 2009

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 95]
Summary:

 

Erika Johnson is a NYU student living with two guys in an apartment. Her best friend, Damien King, and his friend, Peter Morrison, a British transfer student are living with her. It is the weekend before midterm exams and all three have a study session. Erika can't reisist her favorite snack, peanut butter, and Peter can't resist his intrigue for her.

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2383
Read Count: 2792
Published: September 22 2009
Updated: September 22 2009


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow...peanut butter will never be the same with Peter. LOL. So glad Damien didn't forget something and have to run back home!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23 2009

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.