Penname: Michmom2 [Contact]

Real name: Krista

Member Since: June 30 2013

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Bio: Love to read and watch Sci-Fi, Paramormal and Romance stories.  


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Consequence by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015

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Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

Perfect as usual. Please let them be pregnant!! Twins :)



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Thanks Michmom!

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Date: April 10 2015
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Victim of Deja Vu

Wow!!! Awesome chapter. So heartbreaking, but she needed to do that.  Not that I don't want them together..I do.  It's just Anthony has to grow up at least a little and Nat has to make up her mind what she really wants.  He can't hide her, he should've known that. She knows he's young and their relationship started out totally wrong.  Will they date around for awhile then get back together or just realize they can't be?? I'm interested to see how this plays out.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

I have to agree with you on all accounts, Michmom2.  Natalia and Anthony's fate apart or together remains uncertain.  We've got a ways to go before the final curtain.  Happy to have you along for the ride.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: January 06 2015
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Parent Trap

OMG!!! She knew it and that damn sister is so stupid!! Natalia doesn't need to be married again yet. She's still recovering, confused, and not in love with Jamison yet! Doesn't he understand that?! Ugh. Now she feels trapped. Poor Natalia I mean how do you say no in front of all his family and hers? I can't wait until the next chapter.  I'm glad you pushed it out 7 months. I gives us a chance to see what's happened since the breakup and I'm glad you did that!!! Update soon!! :)



Author's Response:

I agree that Nat doesn't need to be married or engaged, and that she only agreed because she didn't want to embarrass Jamison in front of his family.  But now that the ring's on, will the marriage be on also?  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Michmom!  Glad you liked the flash forward.

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Date: January 10 2015
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Lamb of Sacrifice

Wow, I'm glad she told Jamison even though I have a feeling he still doesn't fully get it. Or should I say he may still try when Nat is totally done.  It was good to see Anthony and very telling that his house is down the street from hers.  They need to have a talk, soon.  Rich??!! Carp a younger version of his father and I know he'd get with Natalia if she allowed it. I think he'll cause some problems soon.  Where has daddy Richard been all these months? Does he still call Natalia? I can't see him just giving up unless he found another lover to occupy his time. Great update!  I was so excited for the party!!



Author's Response:

Jamison doesn't like putting himsellf in a position to be hurt, hence his careful avoidance of hot-button, hurtful topics.  So chances are, he won't continue to pursue Nat.  But you never know.

As of right now, that talk between Nat and Anthony won't be happening.  He's involved with someone else and she has said goodbye.  But you know how quickly that can change.

Rich is one to watch, especially now that he's planning to stay in the area.  Richard has been lurking in the background and, yes, he still calls Nat.  More on that later.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Michmom!

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Date: January 16 2015
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - In His Shoes

Wow, I wasn't expecting that.  He's still so hurt and angry.  If course Rich provokes him, but he needs closure or to really move on.  I have a feeling he's going to go to Natalia and want to talk. Great update, so telling.



Author's Response:

As harsh as it was, I think Rich did Anthony a favor.  But who knows where he'll go from here.  Well actually, I do.  But I'm not telling : )  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Michmom!

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Date: January 20 2015
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - "No Thanks" Giving

Wow that was so good. I don't know how you do it, but your storytelling ability is off the charts. I love it.  Everything flows so well and I swear I can see each character playing their part in my mind.  Anthony...God he's hurting and needs to realize what he really wants.  He knows, but he's scared...Nat hurt him deep but he caused most of it.  Nat...she was nice to Richard.  Did he deserve it? Aahh I must admit I felt sorry for him and I believe what he said (am I crazy??!)  Anyway, he held her and helped her that night.  She needed that cry and I'm glad he gave her that, but she loves Anthony.  There's no use leading Richard on unless she is going to let Anthony go forever and give Richard another chance!?  Ahh hell...well whatever your vision I'm here for the ride :)  now I need another update...like right now! jk...not really. :)



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks for the awesome review, Michmom!  It left me smiling : )

You're right, Anthony is scared and doesn't know the engagement is off, so he's just with Sabrina and miserable because she makes it easy for him to be. And I'm with you on believing Richard and feeling a little sorry for him.  He was being sincere, but it looks like a case of too litte too late.  Or is it?  Stay tuned...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Update posted.

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Date: January 30 2015
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - While the Cat's Away...

So happy about this update, but the cliffhanger is killing me!!! Drunk Rich on her doorstep!!!aah these Talerico men drive me crazy.  Ant made a small move to see her, but then chickened out and said nothing...dammit!  Nat was just waiting for him to say something...he failed.  And it's funny these two need to have a real conversation fir once, but they are both scared to death.  Maybe Nat will call Anthony to come pick up Rich from her house??!  Anyway Anthony needs to man up!!! No more baby steps! And please drop Sabrina, tell his family it's over between them and go get your woman!! And get her pregnant too! (And marry her of course)



Author's Response:

Poor Ant.  He tried, but couldn't quite go there.  You're right, they're both afraid, and Rich should be.  I don't know if Ant will ever get close enought to get Nat pregnant, but you know he's gone get up in Rich's ass for going to her house.  Stay tuned.  And thanks for reading and reviewing, Michmom!

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Date: February 01 2015
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Impatience is a Virtue

OMG!!! That damn Rich is my hero!!! Fake ass drunk helped get them back together!!! Yay!!! I swear JJ I almost passed out reading this chapter! So good...thank you thank you!! I hope the story isn't over yet??!  I mean we need a few amazing sex scenes for Ant and Natalia.  Daddy Rich and the family need to find out (in due time)  Sabrina has to get her wack ass outta Philly!! Oh there is so much, but as long as they stay strong and together, loving each other they will be fine!  You got me...I'm so damn happy for them and now Rich needs a nice, strong woman of color to pull his ads together!!!  Yay...love it!!  10!!!



Author's Response:

The story's not over just yet.  We have a ways to go (and a sex scene or two) before the curtain closes on these two.  Anthony's family is guaranteed to find out about this relationship.  How and when are the only questions.  And while Sabrina has no business being with them after she and Anthony broke up, she might be less trouble in Philly than right up the freeway.  You'll soon see how that plays out and whether Rich falls out of love with the bottle and his freedom and finds a woman of his own.  Thanks, Michmom!  So glad you enjoyed the update.

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Date: February 04 2015
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

I just live Richie Jr. Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks Michmom!

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Date: March 02 2015
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Friends and Foes

Damn! Forgot about Pop pop being sick. Now Anthony will go home, but will Nat go too?? Love the idea of Rich and Takara!! That could be the next series!! Barbara is still crazy as he'll and she's doing dirty work for Richard?! When will her embassy learn...she has to be the stupidest person in this story.  Plus she brings a little baby over, ugh! Carp is gonna hit the fan in Philly!!  Thanks for the quick update!!



Author's Response:

"Will Nat go home with Anthony" is a good question, one that will be answered next chapter.  Richard didn't know Nat's family knows about Anthony.  He thought that by telling Barbara about Nat and Ant living together, he could stir the pot and apply some pressure.  And Barbara was just dumb enough to side with him. 

I said I wouldn't start any new stories until I finish some of the old unfinished ones haunting my dreams.  But Rich and Takara may be too tempting to put on the back-burner.  We'll see.  Thanks Michmom!

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Date: March 03 2015
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Flight Plan

Rich just keeps surprising me.  He really is a good brother.  I'm glad Anthony let Talia meet the family, but we knew his mom's was gonna be a bitch.  Now she'll up to no good trying to destroy their relationship.

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Date: March 13 2015
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Damn!!! I knew Richard was going to do something like that...ass!  Poor Nat...she thought better of Richard still even after all the crap he did to hurt her. Now she'll never want to go back there again. And I bet Richard will still try to get her back, begging her forgiveness. He thinks Anthony will dump her because his family really gates her now.  Ok, those two chapters were so good!! So good!  Now I need more...I hanging on here wondering where Nat will go and how Anthony will react.  Crap I need a drink.

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Date: March 16 2015
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - The Cruelties of Fate

Oh wow I just want to cry.  Poor Anthony! How do you keep a father away from his son?! I hope they try to find him and please please let Tslia be pregnant!!  They would be wonderful parents! Loved the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks Michmom!  So glad you liked it.

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Date: April 03 2015
Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

I'm crying like a baby!  Perfect.  I hate to see it end, but it was so good!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

YW.  Thanks Michmom!!!

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Date: May 03 2015
Becoming Mrs. Kourosh (Sequel to B&B) by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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Summary:

As Joss and Eshan prepare to wed, will the relationship survive long enough to see "for better" when their families become their "for worse"?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 45613
Read Count: 29760
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: July 09 2014

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So good!!! That mama is terrible, but they will be fine. I know the last chapter is coming, but we need an epilogue with them happy with a child or two. Plus alittle romance to end it all. Love this story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Michmom2!  I don't plan to write an epilogue, but their story will continue in one form of another, be it one shots or a full-on sequel.

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Date: July 07 2014
A Place Called Home by GeorgiaP
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Porter had been gone for while, traveling and moving on with his life. His father’s illness brings him home, but what he didn’t expect was to be drawn back in by the reason why he left—her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14802
Read Count: 11210
Published: December 28 2013
Updated: April 12 2016

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Love the photos of Hudson...perfect.  So i'm guessing Porter is Travis's dad?  Maybe.  Wow, if so I see the drama that's coming.  Love this story.  Ok we need another update asap.  :)  Like how Porter has a twin.  I think Jess is going to really hate being down here and Porter is going to realize what he misses and what he really wants out of life.  Plus maybe a son!! Exciting!!



Author's Response:

Yes, lots of drama coming. I don't think any character is safe in this book from it. LOL. I didn't plan that. It just came out that way. I can't wait to get it all out!

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Date: April 08 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't remember this story, but I'm intrigued.  Good start, but then all of your stories are good.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Michmom! Happy to be back :)

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Date: April 08 2016
Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey by kwajeraspen
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40861
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

This is going to be good!!

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Date: July 17 2016
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Here comes the ex!!! Love this story!!

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Date: July 17 2016
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

10!!



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Thank you so much

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Date: July 17 2016
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I'm glad they are starting over. Hate that he has to tell Mila about her mom. So sad. 

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Date: September 01 2016
Retired
Alexa and Brody by GeorgiaP
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 292]
Summary:

She's a mess he can't help wanting to fix.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Southern Gentlemen
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 90
Read Count: 69509
Published: January 11 2014
Updated: October 19 2015

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Title: Alexa and Brody

Perfect...Brody is perfect!!!  Love how this story flows.  So glad he found Alex and now they can go save Aiden.  So good

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Date: March 28 2015
Title: Alexa and Brody

It's getting interesting. I swear I love your stories.

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Date: January 22 2014
Title: Alexa and Brody

Perfect...Brody is perfect!!!  Love how this story flows.  So glad he found Alex and now they can go save Aiden.  So good

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Date: March 28 2015
Title: Alexa and Brody

Wow....loving Brody and Alex's. He's protecting his woman. That Nathan is gonna be trouble though. Great update!

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Date: August 08 2015

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