Penname: Michmom2 [Contact]

Real name: Krista

Member Since: June 30 2013

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Bio: Love to read and watch Sci-Fi, Paramormal and Romance stories.  


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Love, Sister: A Short Romance by TheHistorian
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:


   Caleb Garrison has been in love with Grey ever since they were children. He even told his parents while a child that someday he would marry her. However, there was one problem...although adopted, she was legally his sister.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29115
Read Count: 36926
Published: October 07 2014
Updated: November 05 2017

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Title: Chapter 4: Erratic

I like the story. It flows well. Caleb is so torn because he loves Grey and I think deep down she feels the same way. Now I hope Jenna doesn't find out. Anyway I like the story and if Caleb looks like Kit Harrington then how can Grey resist him. He's hot!! Please update



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Lol RIGHT!

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Date: October 09 2014
Title: Chapter 10: Lovers

Finally they get together.  Wondering how this is gonna play out? I bet Jenna catches them together and tells their parents?! Great update. 

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Date: July 19 2016
Title: Chapter 11: Down Under

Great update.  How are they going to have a relationship with him if he's gone and Jenna!!  She's nuts and won't let go.  I understand how weird it is since she's Grey's best friend.  I like them together even though it's a little weird, but not really.  It just seems like it's going to end badly, but I hope it works out for them.  Ok I need another update!! :)

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Date: August 03 2016
Title: Chapter 12: Lockers

Great update. 

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Date: May 04 2017
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COLORLESS by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215322
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 34

Oh no!!! I'm feeling sick and you haven't even written the next part yet!!

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Date: March 29 2015
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 35

Oh God!!! I'm glad the babies are safe, but I'm scared for Hiram and Camille.  I hope Camille whoops Debbies ass. 

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Date: April 26 2015
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 30

Please let Hiram keep Steven. I can't stand child abuse...those parents will soon get what they deserve.  Glad Savvy is ok. Good chapter.

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Date: January 13 2015
Title: Chapter 51: Epilogue

So good!!  I loved all of it!!

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Date: October 25 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

He's so sweet. Great update

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Date: October 17 2014
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Good story. I'm interested to see how they handle this situation. Your writing is good and the story flows well.  Can't wait for another update!!

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Date: October 15 2014
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18

Good chapter.  I knew that daddy was sleeping with black women. Can't wait for the next update!!

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Date: November 16 2014
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

I like how you're incorporating other members of Hiram' s family into the story.  It's sad they are so racist and hateful and teaching the little kids this stuff too...it's sad. Hopefully some of these people will change, but I guess we'll see.  Live the relationship that's growing between Hiram, Camille and the baby...so sweet.

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Date: October 23 2014
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

So good! That Ms. Elaine was rude and nosy. Ugh

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Date: October 24 2014
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15

Glad that was a nightmare. They are making progress though!! Good chapter.

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Date: November 06 2014
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21

This was a nice chapter.  I love how the church is helping them. Now Debbie she just needs to go away.

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Date: November 25 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Those Baxters...ugh. the live scenes were good.

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Date: December 12 2014
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

So good!!! I'm glad you told Hiram' s back story.

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Date: December 14 2014
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 26

Loved this chapter. They are so happy and in love. :)

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Date: December 23 2014
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 27

Please get Steven out if that crazy house...ugh. I swear I was sick to my stomach just reading it and I know it's fake. I hope that granny, momma and daddy get their assets beat!!! Hate them

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Date: December 23 2014
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 28

I'm so intrigued.  I hate that Savvy is sick, but this definitely opens up some new family carp fir Hiram.  Loved the update.  Happy New year!!!

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Date: December 29 2014
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 31

I'm glad Stevie is with them!! Good chapter.

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Date: January 19 2015
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 32

I hate Hiram' s family.  I'm scared for them...

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Date: February 05 2015
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 33

Yes let them move away and take custody of Stevie!!!

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Date: March 02 2015
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 36

That was a great chapter.  Debbie deserved what she got and I'm glad Hiram and Camille are okay.

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Date: May 09 2015
Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 43

Please let Ethan go to Savvy's party.  That Chelsea girl needs a whoopin' by somebody and soon! Sweet Thirteen ???  Wth is that! Also, if Camille gets tested I hope she isn't a match.  That way she did what she felt was right, but she'll die anyway.  Also I wonder if all those kids really were tested? some seem selfish enough not to do it themselves and lie about it.  Just saying.

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Date: September 29 2015

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