Penname: jahchannah [Contact]

Real name: Carlotta

Member Since: January 25 2015

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I love to read and support aspiring authors!




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Accordance by DarkandLovely
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 129]
Summary:

There is such structure in life. But what happens when you break free? What exists beyond that prison?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Accordance is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2400
Read Count: 101582
Published: November 23 2014
Updated: June 24 2019

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Title: Accordance

That was an amazing chapter! I love this couple...both have scars and each is the balm for the other's healing... definitely an original story...love learning of Japanese culture...and I love that Rae is comfortable in her blackness...you rock...



Author's Response:

Thank you! <3

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Date: August 29 2015
Title: Accordance

So many authors fail to finish that I think writing and sharing yourself has to be difficult.  Only the best whose creative talents are truly meant to bless us actually finish.  If publishing is a long term goal then learning to complete works has to come first. Wishing you the best in your endeavors. Rae and Hirito have been hurt a lot so they have lots to learn in trying to have a relationship, especially with so much opposition...hopefully they learn they can be stronger together...good work...



Author's Response:

Aww yes thank you!

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Date: August 31 2015
Title: Accordance

So cute is right! Love this couple!



Author's Response:

hehe thank you my love!

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Date: September 01 2015
Title: Accordance

Emi is going bye bye!



Author's Response:

*n'synch voice* BYE  BYE BYEEEE

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 01 2015
Title: Accordance

Good story. I really like it. However your style of writing dialogue can be confusing to clearly know which person is speaking. 



Author's Response:

 Hi jahchannah! First let me thank you for the kind words you have hehe! I really appreciate them! Secondly, I thank you for the criticism! I respect you GREATLY for telling me! I will try to work on this in the future! <3 D&L

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Date: September 03 2015
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Dig by Madds
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 138]
Summary:

Dig

 

Avery "Hades" Jones is the number one producer in the metal and hardcore music game. She's more talented with any instrument she lays her hands on than most of the popular bands and every record she touches turns to gold.

Then why doesn't she have the respect she so rightfully deserves?

When her good friend Adam Nuro invites her to tour with his number one band to play with his band while featuring some of her songs, she hops at the chance.

But the opportunity presents more challenges than she was ready for, obstacles that threaten to break her.

Will Avery make her dreams come true? Will her adoptive band support her?

And what has been following them since day one?

 

Shout Out to Elizablu for the Banner



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 23829
Read Count: 18135
Published: November 30 2014
Updated: February 14 2016

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Title: Chapter 8: Old Black Crow

Okay, this story has turned into something completely different from what I expected and now I am even more hooked!  When Quin called Adam Falkor, I was wondering why the name Falkor?  Then I find that Tony and Smith have other names too...Well I did find more editing mistakes in this chapter but not enough to make me cringe and you are still light years above some stories in the correct use of language and grammar.  Now I am even more engrossed in this book and excited for the next update!  You rock!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the love! I try my hardest, but working two jobs and freelancing doesn't lend me the critical eye I wish I had before posting. Sometimes I just want to get it out there instead of pouring over every detail. But there are a few glaring mistakes that I've cleaned up in my offline version. Thanks so much for your honesty! It'll keep me on my toes!

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Date: February 27 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Ms. Self Destruct

Wow!  This chapter ending for me seemed pretty intense but you still have got me asking, why is Adam so set against following his feelings?  Since I want to know, I have no choice but to keep reading in hope of finding out.  You are an excellent author and I have to keep giving you kudos for the quality in editing your work.  Even a really good story is maligned by sloppy editing that is filled with grammatical errors.  Such detractions and distractions are not present in your work as I have read and I am in awe of you.  

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Date: February 27 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Only in Dreams

I really hope to learn more about the reasons for Adam's refusal to acknowledge his feelings for Avery.  I wish she didn't use CJ but that's what people do...Another excellent chapter!  And it's so awesome that your chapters are so well written and edited.  You rock!

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Date: February 27 2015
Title: Chapter 3: Road Rage

Such excellent work!  

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Date: February 27 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Butterflies of Steel

Best friends in love  who are scared to admit feelings seem to define Avery and Adam.  This book continues to be so good! 

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Date: February 27 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Rumours of War

Another good chapterr.  I hope at some point that we get to learn more of Avery and Adam's history together.

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Date: February 27 2015
Title: Chapter 2: Shut Up and Metal

So well written and I love the characters.  I also like that the story is about a black woman playing metal.  You rock!

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Date: February 27 2015
Title: Chapter 10: FKA

Glad you are back to this story but disappointed for no music...I was hoping to be introduced to more metal and/or alternative...I hope you will continue this story as I am really interested in actually what is Avery as she seems other than human as well as the rest of the band...looking forward to more...



Author's Response:

haha! scared me for a second there!

i'll have new music in the chapters to come, promise. this chapter pretty much just required Two Weeks on repeat.

so. good.

thanks for the love! i'll do my best to update more frequently.

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Date: February 14 2016
Title: Chapter 9: Descent

Love the music...got introduced to new songs and artists (except FKA Twigs, I listen to her music)... Good story...

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Date: February 14 2016
Title: Chapter 2: Shut Up and Metal

Avery is Afropunk!  You should check out the site if you haven't already!

 

I'm intrigued with her relationship to Adam.  

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Date: February 23 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Descent

Finally! I love it!

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Date: March 02 2015
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The devil wears leather by imbatman
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

He was a bad boy who was used to getting whatever he wanted.

She was the good girl who refused to bow down to his ways.

Together they clashed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9292
Read Count: 10872
Published: December 01 2014
Updated: March 16 2015

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The argument

I really like this story!  I look forward to reading more.

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Date: March 17 2015
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Heart of Lies by K Carr
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 239]
Summary:

Not everyone gets a happy ending...

Hey guys,

Heart of Lies Book 1&2 have now been published under one of my pennames Alma Muerte.

FB Author page: Alma Muerte.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2951
Read Count: 32558
Published: January 27 2015
Updated: September 10 2015

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Title: Heart of Lies

Such a good chapter!  I really like this book as it's different from the werewolf/vampire stories I have read in the past.  I especially like the connection between Arric and Lyssa.  Good work!

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Date: March 31 2015
Title: Heart of Lies

My feelings are so mixed. I am enjoying the interaction between Eros and Lyssa to almost wish love could bloom in such an unlikely space. Such would be a testament to the true power of love to transform.  Good job with this story.

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Date: August 07 2015
Title: Heart of Lies

Sooo good!  I'm glad that Arric can be saved and I guess that Lyssa would have to give her womb to do so.  But will she become a vampire baby making machine?  The depth of her love for Arric will lead her to do a repulsive thing...you are really telling a brilliant story!



Author's Response:

Vampire baby making machine :) I can see the production line tight now!

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Date: April 08 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good work!  I love the start of this story!

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: February 12 2015
Title: Heart of Lies

Arric betrayed her because he can't have two mates. Enjoying this story!

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: February 12 2015
Title: Heart of Lies

Such a beautifully painful story.

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: February 12 2015
Title: Heart of Lies

Heart wrenching and intense! Love it

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: February 12 2015
Title: Heart of Lies

Such a powerful story!

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: February 12 2015

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