Penname: jahchannah [Contact]

Real name: Carlotta

Member Since: January 25 2015

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Save Me From Myself by Missus James
Rated: Mature Content
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Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 301824
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021

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Title: Chapter 3: Silly Little Fool

That kiss was unexpected! We know so little about the character's especially Sebastian.



Author's Response:

Yes, there is. His background though will be slowly revealed over time.

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Date: October 05 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Slim Whims

Wow that went from 0 to 100 real quick...let's see what comes next...she still knows nothing about him and he knows little about her...



Author's Response:

The relationship between Sebastian and Willow goes really fast, but there are consequences to blindly entering a relationship with little knowledge of who you are with. The thrill and punishment of cat and mouse.

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Date: October 05 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Tipsy

Parker is an ass. He has a girlfriend but wants Willow to himself...she needs to be smart enough to pick better friends...



Author's Response:

Parker is one of those friends who is so used to be comfortable with a particular single friend that when someone actually comes into said friend's life, they don't like that change especially when he and Willow share an interesting history together, LOL.

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Date: October 05 2015
Title: Chapter 8: The Golden Pig

Simon is a jerk, but what else is new...like I wrote earlier, Willow needs better friends...



Author's Response:

She does need better friends. :{

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Date: October 05 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Clean, Bone, Destruction

We are learning more about Sebastian...he's dangerous with a true soft spot for Willow...so if anyone messes with his Willow...look out...



Author's Response:

The soft spot for Willow makes him even more dangerous. The things he will be willing to do will exceed imagination and may challenge morals.

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Date: October 05 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Creature of Habit

Oh no...Simon is a pig but humiliation would be a better end...but what Willow wants...



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If only she realized what she wished in the heat of the moment would be granted.

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Date: October 05 2015
Title: Chapter 11: When a Monster Becomes a Man

I like Sebastian though he was wrong to kill Simon...still I wonder what will happen to Willow as she gets caught in his web...



Author's Response:

Oh, yes. I think Sebastian doing what he did to Simon was very, very wrong from a moral standpoint. That is one of the reasons why I wrote a chapter in Simon's point of view for everyone to get a better understanding of how he thinks and the role he played in that twisted game. I think Sebastian doing what he did proved more to himself that he cared about Willow so much that he'd do anything to keep her happy even kill for her happiness.

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Date: October 05 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Guest of the Hour

Willow needs Sebastian and he needs her...but what will become of their romance if the truth is revealed?



Author's Response:

Every couple goes through their ups and downs. If or when Willow discovers the truth, she will most likely do the most sensible thing and run like a bat out of hell. However, she won't get far either from her own admission or Sebastian is in her way.

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Date: October 05 2015
Title: Chapter 13: Oh, Where; Oh, Where!

Sebastian killing Simon wasn't the answer though it shows the depth of his need to protect Willow...but what happens if Willow learns the truth...



Author's Response:

That was the true intentions of his actions. Sebastian killing Simon was terribly wrong. There are no if's, and's, or but's about it. However, it does show how far he is willing to go to protect Willow. His extreme response to the whole situation is influenced by his past, which will be revealed in due time.

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Date: October 07 2015
Title: Chapter 14: Punishment

If Sebastian could tell his father about Juliette, why does he let her threaten Willow?  Why not make Juliette suffer for her part in the death of his wife and daughter or is his guilt over his family placing him in an emotionally unbalanced state?  Now that I have learned more about Sebastian, this story just got so much better!



Author's Response:

Sebastian wants to be punished for his crimes, but not if it involves Willow getting hurt or killed in the process. At first, he assumes that Juliette wants to kill him. Then when she reveals that she is going to kill Willow and mentions the deaths of his wife and daughter, he is caught off-guard and overwhelmed with guilt. Sebastian knows that Juliette can dish out punishment, a type of punishment he thinks he deserves. He gives her two choices: punish him his way or she will be punished by his father if she decides go through with her plan of hurting Willow. Going to his father is an absolute last resort. Juliette doesn't want his father involved and honestly, nor does Sebastian because their relationship is very restrained and distant. Once his father gets involved, there is no turning back. When his father gets involved, bodies will surely pile up. Juliette did not take part in the death of his wife and daughter, but she played a role in shaping Nathaniel into Sebastian. I hope this helps and I apologize for any confusion.

 

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Date: October 10 2015
Title: Chapter 16: Show and Tell

 Bas has to dismantle the organization, including his father for Willow to be safe...good story...

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Date: February 07 2016
Title: Chapter 19: Self Destruct

Poor Willow...she loves her monster Sebastain...good update....



Author's Response:

She sure does, but they've got a lot of healing to do. Thank you, jahchannah! :)

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Date: August 28 2016
Title: Chapter 25: Truth Be Told

Why is Willow being so stupid about their baby...great story...

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Date: April 12 2018
Title: Chapter 20: Far, Far Away

Such a good story....

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Date: April 22 2017
Title: Chapter 23: Tiny Punishments

Poor Nathaniel...he needs Willow....sharing his story with her could go far in helping him...



Author's Response:

He is a very tortured soul, but Willow can save him. 

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Date: July 13 2017
Title: Chapter 23: Tiny Punishments

SSo twisted but well written...

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Date: November 28 2017
Title: Chapter 1: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

Poor Willow...an uncaring mother and spiked sister...

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Date: April 08 2019
Title: Chapter 3: Silly Little Fool

Sebastian is jealous...good for Willow...

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Date: April 08 2019
Title: Chapter 14: Punishment

I can’t wait for Juliette to reap as she sows...



Author's Response:

She needs to be destroyed.

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Date: April 08 2019
Title: Chapter 26: Battle Half-Won

I like this version a lot...needs editing for significant grammatical errors in some chapters...



Author's Response:

Oops, sorry about the errors.

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Date: April 08 2019
Title: Chapter 27: Crucial Hours (Part I)

Now I’m ready to read of Juliette’s reaping...I love this messy couple you’ve created...they were born out of hardship...two souls recognizing a similar need in each other...



Author's Response:

Juliette is going to get it!

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Date: April 08 2019
To have and to hold by misstease
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 Denise is marrying the man of her dreams. She is determined to be a perfect wife, mother, and homemaker. Even if she has to get her apron a little dirty along the way. 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2088
Read Count: 1546
Published: October 12 2015
Updated: October 15 2015

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Title: Chapter 2: Why couldn't you see?

Chica is clearly insane...

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Date: October 15 2015
His Mercy by Missus James
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 458]
Summary:

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COMPLETELY UPDATED


(Chapter 19,  20, & Epilogue uploaded as of 12/19/2018)


Growing up in a southern town like Glenmount, Alabama was never easy for Mercy Stovall especially if your personal demon eventually grow up to be 6'4'' and over 200 lbs. Then one night at a Halloween party, everything changed. It all started with one spanking and spiraled downward from there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73730
Read Count: 113708
Published: November 03 2015
Updated: December 19 2018

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Title: His Mercy

Congratulations on getting married!  May you and your loved ones be blessed!!!

 

Good story...though Gage's mother's health was the impetus (and that's sad), it's good to see Gage show Mercy how much he needs her...

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Date: December 29 2016
Title: Chapter 8: Pies & Lies

What has Gage done to earn Mercy's trust...a sexy man can still use and hurt you...why should she consider that he has real feelings and wants more than the physical...does he knows who she is...does she know him...what do they know of each other outside of a childhood rivalry...he spanks her and she likes it but what does he do for her heart...what does she do for his...true love is honestly beyond the physical but the physical seems like the only thing they really have...be vulnerable Gave and show Mercy love...

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Date: November 04 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Sunrise

I like this version of Gage and Mercy...

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Date: February 22 2016

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