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Rachel didn’t set out to be rescued. In fact, she didn’t think she needed to be rescued. But a chance meeting with a trucker after her car breaks down may offer her the new start she needs in more ways than one.
Bear shifters...definitely not typical...good start...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Paul and Miss, once a young and vibrant couple, are going through a storm. Can they make it out safe and together on the other side?
Loved this little short...and you know how to spell choke (unfortunately this word is misspelled about 90% of the time I read it)...excellent work...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Fourteen years after his twin brother's suicide Brian Callaghan has to face all the guilt and emotions that he's been carrying for years head on. An unlikely companion from high school Mahalia Evans is there to see him through.
Someone like Mahalia as written here isn't fit to be a counselor because she is still a little girl being bullied by her cousin...shows poor character development of the author...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Ethan West has never been one to control his wolf, he let his instincts rule and they never failed him. Until his wolf insisted on marking Mia Kane as his mate. Maybe it wouldn't have been so bad if Mia wasn't a human. Ethan despised humans and taking one as a mate was the last thing he wanted to do.
Mia Kane should be living her best life, her music career took off, she won a Grammy for best new artist and she was selling out arenas all over the world. Life was perfect except for the fact that she tragically lost her family in an accident the night of the awards show. When the whirlwind was over her best friend and manager Elizabeth Jones forces her to take some down time at her parent's bed and breakfast. When Ethan shifts and bites her, her life takes an unexpected turn for the worst.
Interesting start...looking forward to more...
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: jahchannah SignedYour 1st person pov is fine. Ethan is a worthless alpha. Hope he gets rejected ultimately...
Thanks for reading! Dang rejection might be harsh, where's your compassion?
Reviewer: jahchannah SignedEthan is an idiot. Mia has nothing to do with anything that happened to him and now she's no longer human, which ought to make him happy. This story is good but needs editing.
Eek! Let me go back through and read the chapters again! It’s so hard to catch my own mistakes! Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: jahchannah SignedAnd Ethan continues the idiocy...
Just stick with me. things will turn around soon! thanks for reading.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Why not just kill off the worthless Alpha Ethan and let Mia run the pack...good story but needs a good editor...
Oh ive got something planned for Ethan. dont worry. thanks for reading. I'll try to go back over it and see what i missed.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed I loved this chapter...Mia has given these wolves too much control of her life...it’s about time she took some back...great story...
Yes, was resistant but still a smidge too agreeable.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Juan couldn't live with the thought of another broken relationship, and after failing miserably upon his first attempt at love with Blue Raven, he was gun shy with his heart. Never did he anticipate falling in love again and especially not with the beautiful, supermodel sister of Kit Stone: Kat Ambre Stone. He recognized her as a force to be reckoned with, admitting that his resistance never stood a chance. But when her modeling agency transfers her to Europe on a five year contract, he does something that he would soon regret: he watched her go. Vowing to release her, Juan is in for a surprise upon her unexpected return. This time, however, he's playing for keeps and Kat has no objections to that.
Kat’s an idiot for bringing that douche home...loved the ass-whupping...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed About time...so many books start with characters in bed first so it’s great to read about characters starting out by developing a real relationship...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
The best revenge is living well or as well as you can when you’re a refugee living in the aftermath of a nuclear holocaust and pregnant by your cheating ass of an ex-husband.
Lee is a dick...I want him to suffer for hurting her...if that’s your goal, good going!....
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Sick Kara...sociopathi for sure...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.