Penname: GreenRoots [Contact]

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Member Since: April 29 2015

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Pretty smart. Pretty observant. Pretty opinionated. That's pretty much me in a nutshell. I like to read BWWM romances, which, in my opinion, is the most neglected genre in literature on this here floating rock. One of these days, I'll put up a story of my own, but for now, I'm just a kick ass Beta Reader, leaving the occasional well thought out critique and accolade.  


I'm cowriting a BWWM book named "The Good Girl & The Porn Star" with Jaye Sims on another account, Jaye N Green. So check it out if you haven't read it yet. It's a doozy!


P.S. I wished for Chris Hemsworth last year and found his beautiful, flawless face on the cover this year's People's Sexist Man Alive in my stocking hanging from my fireplace last Christmas, furthering my belief that the power of prayer is real y'all.



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Tragedy brings all the Mercer brothers back home, even Bobby who left town and abandoned his family for mysterious reasons. His return will shake up everyones world, including his ex girlfriend who is hiding a secrete of her own. Lives are changed forever when the truth behind their loved ones death comes to a head. Will the four brothers that are bonded by choice not blood pull together as a family, or will revenge tear them apart? Bobby/OC


Rated NC-17 : For extreme violence, language, and strong sexual content.


I want to thank idjunkie for a wonderful banner. Thank you chica!



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Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 70748
Read Count: 34405
Published: February 08 2009
Updated: July 30 2014


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

Guuuurrrrrrrllllllll, I don' tknow where you went, but you need to come back and finish this story...this chapter was THE BOMB!  On the edge of my seat, riveting!! Great job with the emotional scenes...really great!

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Date: June 11 2015

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[Reviews - 477]
Summary:

Meet the Nichetti Family: Dominick, Carmine, Chase, and Christopher.  The Nichetti Men are easy to fall for, but sometimes hard to love. Their "family" business tends to get in the way of their love lives and sometimes ruins them altogether. This is their story.

*Contains strong language, adult situations, extreme language, violence and strong sexual content*

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Thank you Minx for an incredible banner!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 93337
Read Count: 120121
Published: October 30 2009
Updated: July 28 2012


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Uhhh, you just got played. That's what happened Mia. SMH

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2015

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[Reviews - 478]
Summary:

TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

Gorgeous Banner by Valhalla



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 50743
Read Count: 78569
Published: March 27 2011
Updated: May 01 2016


Title: Chapter 5: Lay in My Bed

This. Is. Outstanding.

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01 2016

Title: To Last a Lifetime

Can't wait for the next installment! This story is bomb as hell!

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Date: May 02 2016

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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

[Updating Summary]



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 15877
Read Count: 12256
Published: December 04 2011
Updated: August 02 2015


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6

Please continue this story!! It's so intriguing!!!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11 2015

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"Give me your panties." What the hell was he thinking? "You do realize that I hate you right?" He shrugged his shoulders and I wanted to hit him. "I never said anything about making love...we're going to make intense hate." I threw my panties at his head....



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 60783
Read Count: 69223
Published: December 09 2011
Updated: January 20 2012


Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

Nice :)

Very very nice.

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Nyla Rogers is a 26 year old widow, she has just rrecently begun to live again when she meets handsome Dr. Gavin McKeough. She doesnt feel she'll ever love again. Gavin wants to pick up the peices of her shattered heart will she let him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 70273
Read Count: 195288
Published: August 23 2012
Updated: August 29 2014


Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Please oh please oh please oh please update this story soon!  It's amazing!!!  All your stories are freaking fantastic!!!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 30 2015

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Summary:

Matt was the love them and leave them type till he met Azalea. She turned the tables on him but not for the reasons he thinks. Will he forgive her when he learns the truth?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 45561
Read Count: 65495
Published: August 25 2012
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Daaaaammmmmnnnn!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 27 2015

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So good! Where did you go??

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Date: May 27 2015

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Summary:

What's a girl to do, when she doesn't listen to her head but instead throws caution to the wind for one night?

We've all had an encounter with that guy, right? The one who knows that he is sex on two legs. That guy who you know should be avoided, but still manages to reel you in easily. That guy who is still in your bed, even though he is long gone.

No? You don't know him. Well, Ambi does. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 30393
Read Count: 44597
Published: December 29 2012
Updated: February 06 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The Party

LOVE THIS STORY!!! So glad you moved it from Shades to Valent!!  I would love for you to start writing the sequel!! And if you need an editor, puhleeeeeaaaasssseeee let me know. I started out as an editor for Jaye Sims, and we are now co-writing on Wattpad. Anyway, BIG fan here. And no matter what you do...KEEP WRITING!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! That is very sweet to offer to help edit. I just may take you up in that. I am writing here and there but it is slow going. The story is oming together, but not at the pace that I'd like :).

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
Date: September 01 2015

Title: Chapter 1: The Party

Sweet baby jesus I love this book! You removed the other stories you had up, which were amazing as well. But when are you writing the sequel to this?



Author's Response:

Thanks, for the review and the love! I am working on the other stories, but it is just slow going :-(. You can still find them posted on The Vault. Thanks again for reading.

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05 2015

Title: Chapter 2: I want you to want me

I think everyone is so caught up in the Irish trance, we've forgotten all about Jaime and his warnings. He spoke as if he knew a lot about Irish and was truly concerned for her ending up as just another notch on his bedpost.  Curious about his role in this tale...

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Date: December 14 2015

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108362
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

really great chapter!!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 30 2015

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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

 

 

 

Professor Wilson is in the office late again grading papers. I wonder who'll stop by...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 19538
Read Count: 18666
Published: March 25 2013
Updated: November 24 2013


Title: Chapter 5: In the Woods

Oh WOWWW!  This is magnificent!  Why did you abandon this story?  It's so well written and the characters leap off the page! 

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25 2015

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Summary:

“A mighty pain to love it is,
And 'tis a pain that pain to miss;
But of all pains, the greatest pain
It is to love, but love in vain.”



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 24611
Read Count: 9433
Published: April 01 2013
Updated: March 02 2014


Title: Chapter 4: The Parting

This is amazing!  These characters are officially my favorite  on the planet. Can Lisa be my mom too?

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Date: June 09 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Instant Gratification

Gah!  This is soooo brilliant! I do hope you come back to your stories...you're a fantastic writer!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25 2015

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Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 260271
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24 pt 1

What the fuck! You have to update this story!!! Valerie is annoyng as fuck but damn this is good!!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07 2015

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 24 pt 2

Okay, let's cover the basics: Great writing, as always. Soooo happy you updated! It'd been so long I forgot what book this was when it popped up today, so thank you!!

But Jesus, this girl is always afraid of EVERYTHING. Just grow a pair and be happy. God dang.

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2015

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Summary:

 

Quitting love is never easy; no matter the situation. That saying seems to follow Jake Ryder in the once vibrant form of Sierra Lewis. The cycle doesn't seem to stop, or maybe he just doesn't want it to.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: Impossible to Kill
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43800
Read Count: 19877
Published: June 08 2013
Updated: May 27 2014


Title: Chapter 13: One Last Time.

I like ths!  I wasn't sure where it was going to go, but it turned out better than I imagined it would!  And you've set it up really nicely for a sequel if that's what you want to do, with Sierra starting a new life in Arizona, only to find out she was with child a month or so later.  Then deciding if she tells Jake or waits a few years for a chance meeting.  I can see it already, lol.

 

Anyway, good job!  Looking forward to reading your other books :)

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 29 2015

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[Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Shanna's car craps out on her in the middle of now where.  In all honesty her poor planning is what has got her into this predicament but the rude yet goregeous guy that  is helping her out of has something about him that she just can't shake.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14100
Read Count: 14151
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: January 05 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter. Really ready for these two to connect and move forward in their relationship, regardless of the hard times ahead...

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29 2015

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Summary:

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Stop fighting about the same old thing, Let's start over, We can't let our good love die, Maybe we can start over, Give love another life,

 

I know that this will hurt you, I know you'll cry, I know I called you selfish, but that's a lie, I feel I know that's the best for us,

 

Let's start over 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 31466
Read Count: 10898
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: September 19 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Greenlight

Update please!!!!!  This is great!  I want to know how they ended up in bed together adn how the two boys are going to handle their meddling mother...pussies.

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2015

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Summary:

While Riley waits for devastating news of one sort, she receives word of another.  Will she refuse to accept either, or surrender to the inconvenient miracle?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4378
Read Count: 1448
Published: October 07 2013
Updated: October 07 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wooooooowwwww!  Oh that was gooooood! I think Corey knows.  He's not stupid, he probably saw the little glances whle in the hospital, took note of the time they spent together.  He did what he had to do to get her away from his brother.  Wow!  Update soon please!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks GreentRoots!  Unfortunately, I don't currently have any plans to continue this one.  That could change at any minute.  Even as I'm writing this, I'm getting a few ideas.  I'll have to see where it goes.  But I'm so glad you enjoyed it so far.  Thanks for reviewing and getting the creative juices flowing again!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2015

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91832
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

This may very well be one of the finest books I've ever read!  I literally created an account just so I could reread it and leave notes in every chapter about my original reactions.  It's that good!!!  You should put this up on Wattpad, which is way more interactive with a younger audience. They would flip over this!  I am truly a #FanForLife with anything you decide to write about.  This was simply perfection on a stick!



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks GreenRoots!!!  What a fantastic compliment.  I've never posted to Wattpad, but I'll definitely look into it.  Thanks again for the wonderful review!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
Date: April 29 2015

Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

Oh my god. No words. Brilliant. absolutely brilliant.



Author's Response:

Thanks GreenRoots!!!

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Date: May 04 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Sexual Healing

Natalia is fucking gangster



Author's Response:

She's definitely something.  Thanks GreenRoots!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12 2015

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