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Real name: Victoria

Member Since: July 03 2008

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I am a Mississippi born and raised woman.  I am a joyful sometime sarcastic person as my sister would say i love my family and have a deep love for reading, working on computers and just being around my loved ones on first meeting i come off quiet but once i feel comfortable it is on and popping because i love to laugh and make people laugh!!!!!




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Good Things in a Small Package by Brenda1257
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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140137
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Damn another addictive story i am absolutly loving this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: August 22 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1 The Size of Things

OH MY FREAKING GOSH I ABSOLUTLY ADORE AND LOVE THIS STORY ALREADY WHOO YOU ARE ONE HELL OF AN WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: August 22 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 Learning You All Over Again

whoo amari and julian were setting the sheets on fire loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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Date: September 04 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21 Road to Recovery

Another wonderful chapter wow the church service was emotional especially when joseph sung and led seleah down th=o the pew to get prayed for and her and amaris both getting hand of prayer on them for past child abuse...Finally dem got talked to likea man that he is always tryin to be and all it took was tam to tell it like it is and call him on his attitude!!!!the shocks just keep coming now amaris father is in town for a visit just wow!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  (Hershey Kisses are one of my favorites, by the way!!)  LOL

Dem is going to get it together and yes, Daddy is in town!

More to come soon!

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Date: October 04 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

oh my damn that daniel is something else!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 08 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

DAMNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: August 25 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

DAMNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: August 25 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation

truly loved this emotional update whoo was in tears!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 13 2011
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 28 Reconciliation and Altercation

wow loved it damn amaris wedding recetion ended with a bang and pow whoo love how paula handle that deranged bitch francis whoo i absolutly love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL  Paula did handle her business and I think she came out of the fight better than Frances did!  More is coming soon!

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Date: December 03 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

DAMNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: August 25 2011
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 30 Honesty and Understanding

lovely update soo glad julian had a deep et it all out in the open talk it was just what was needed and some hott loving after whoo ok that sick digusting waste of flesh darrel needs to be put down quickly he is just scum lying to the police and saying that hes been with seleah and stuff ohhh that lays on my nerve but he will get his soon the slimely bastard ok seleah and joseph are just wow soo inlove are those two with each other i just love it especially with him have a room with double beds wow what a gentleman whoo i absolutly loveeeeeeeeeee this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: December 19 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

Another excellent update julian is such a loving and wonderful person!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 06 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

oh my damn what a terrible sick thing that happen to little seleah damnit that sicko piece of trash reverened forever scarred seleah against men wow just shocking loved the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 19 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

oh my damn i have been hoping and begging silently for an update and whoo i must say you delivered an spectacular one thank you soooooooo much!!!!!!!

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Date: August 31 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26 Ignorance and Abstinance

Another excellent update oh my when jamal finally met his dead beat sperm donor my heart went out to him but i do feel that he really needed to see for himself what kind of person darell really was without his mother.. damnit julian open your eyes if the woman own deceased daughter wanted nothing to do with her why in the hell would you agree to let the rascist bitch have any contact with your precious innocent justine please listen to amari she knows what she is talking about that sea witch coniving old wench is up to something bad.....ok on to the fantastic pleasure amaris soooo deserve and damn julian surley delivered!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: November 07 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Additional Cast Pictures

love the pics of amaris and julian family memebers!!!!!!!!!!!11

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Date: September 06 2011
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

Wow another lovely chapter. Joseph and seleah are just wonderful he is such a great role model for her and her sons he shows them that love and care does exist..oh my amaris and julian life together just became a little more complicated with a new baby waiting to see what happens next with those two!!! Thank you for update.......

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Date: October 28 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

another excellent update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 09 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

oh my he went home to a broken family i feel for him!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 01 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

Damn it i need much more of this budding fighting and loving going on between joseph and selah i absolutly adore this story!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 22 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17 The Truth Will Make You Free II

wow julian and joseph is such a great positive role models for seleah boys i just love it and when joseph asked GOD if seleah was for him drop her in his lap and as they say GOD answer prayers and seleah dropped right in joseph lap whoo i absolutly love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 24 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

damn joseph is such a wonderful, beautiful man for seleah, oh my gosh looks like seleah going to have some serious talk when dem come asking questions i hope seleah is strong enough to give the horrible truth about what happen to her as a child....... i absolutly love this story

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Date: September 25 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

snot running with tears from reading this chapter so heartbreaking!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Here's a tissue...

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Date: September 26 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20 Rebuilding After The Storm

dem is really battling with the horrific news his talk with gerald was so heartbreking  but like a true good man that gerald is he wanted to let dem know that he loved him and that he was still his farther....ok seleah and joseph are just wonderful i love how he is trying to build his loving relationship with seleah i am glad that she is going back to church with joseph by her side thank youuu for another fantastic update will be waiting for your return next week enjoy your son's wedding!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 28 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22 My Past, Your Past, Our Future

wow another excellent update but how dare this homewrecking gutter trash kayla show up knocked up with Gosh know who sperm and try to ruin julian and amaris road to marriage but i know julian and amaris strong love will see them through; amaria visit with her farther went beautiful.  Daniel meeting with his future mother in law was something i am glad tam got through to her mother about her love for daniel weather she accepted or not whoo absolutly love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Amaris will recover.  She just was hit with a lot in one day.  More to come soon!

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Date: October 10 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.