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Forever and a Day with You - The Sweeter the Berries by Kaleah
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Summary:

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Tyler could count on one hand the number of attempted, but failed relationships that he had; had. It was getting to the point that he just was ready to give up on finding love or the right person he could give his entire self to. Most of the women he had a relationship with didn't last long not because they didn't want it, they just couldn't handle his faults or flaws. Tyler Hollis had a secret an extremely large secret that over the years, he had learned how to control to an extent, but at some point in the relationship, it would become the topic of conversation and downhill the relationships would go. He was looking for that one special woman that wouldn't mind them; he wasn't sure if she was the one, but the way he was feeling about her he wanted to make her the one. It wasn't very many women he had wanted in his thirty-eight years, but her he felt he couldn't live without.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Kayla had only had two real relationships in her life, okay let's be honest one and she wasn't even sure that was the real thing. It had been over seven years ago. She had always focused on her career, she was what they called a workaholic, her best friends India and Traci would tell her she was sexually deprived, that she needed to started living before she woke up one morning and life had passed her bye. However, never in her right mind did she think she would be in a predicament like this, it was totally out of her character to let something like this happen, and to let it happen like this. It was overwhelming more like surreal an impulsive act, or so she thought. Could it have been a calculating move on his part or was it just something that happened to happen. But if they both were completely honest with themselves it had been building ever since that faithful snowy morning.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Disclaimer: There is no Copyright Infringement intended. The names and characters in this story are of my own creation, so any similarities to any person or person's in this story dead or alive fictional or non-fictional is purely coincidental. Any and all recognizable characters involved in the images are solely owned and the property of their respective owners or by an unknown developer THAT IS NOT ME!! I do not own it/them and will not make money on them. The author of this story is in no way associated with the franchise/franchises of any creators, producer, owner or any media that may be used along with this story.

© Kaleah, 2011.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:Yes
Word count: 218680
Read Count: 114536
Published: October 03 2011
Updated: January 01 2013

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Title: Chapter 19: Affliction, Reflection & Expectation

I don't like Catherine, and the ho needs to die with a quickness!!!  Please don't let her plan work, I like Alex and Wallace is okay in my book.  Thanks for the update!!!

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Date: January 03 2012
Title: Chapter 29: Home Sweet Home. Finally!!

Kayla is so stupid, why would she let Mike in dressed the way she was? ,Why didn't she ask Mike why he said that her baby was his when they hadn't slept together? All that damn crying and not answering Tyler's question. Kayla does not want to be happy. Please castratr Steve he should have minded his own business! Mike is too fine to be psycho, but he is, sweetie Kayla don't want you boo!

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Date: March 26 2012
Title: Chapter 9: For Once In My Life Almost Doesn’t Count

This is the most honest that Kayla has been and I am proud of her.  Tyler should have hit Aaron in his mouth for the mess in that bar.  Kayla let Tyler into your heart you know that you want to.  Tyler is your man and you are his woman!!!  Claim it, own it and love him!!!!

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Date: October 31 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Sweet Revenge and Bitter Romance

Yes, now that was some hot, butt, naked sex!!!!  I am hoping that Kayla is getting over stupidity!!!  Is Kayla pregnant?  She is really horny and very tired, I hope that she is.  I love this story!!!

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Date: December 20 2011
Title: Chapter 33: Misconception A Moment of Truth

Damn you got me, I thought Tyler had really shown up at her door to give her some good loving and it was only a dream.  Snap, crackle , pop that was sexy!!!  When is she going to put them both out of their misery?  Where is that damn Mike?  Is anyone going to kick his ass?  When is someone going to choke the suggaddy out of Lisa?  PLease tell me that those two situations will occur!!  I give this update two thumbs up and now I can a peaceful slumber!!!

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Date: May 01 2012
Title: Chapter 31: Crossing the Boundary Lines

I have to get this off of my chest, Kayla is working my last nerve and is making my teeth itch!!!  Grow up and talk to Tyler that loves you and he made a mistake.  Kayla you are making me ill!!

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Date: April 18 2012
Title: Chapter 14: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Kayla you had every right  react as you did,  but Tyler is  not is mother. This is an hard one becasue he won't believe her unless he hears his mother spewing that filth.  I hope that he does, so that he can put her in her place.  She was all kinds of wrong for coming at Kayla that way!!  I love this story!!!

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Date: December 01 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder

I have a bad feeling, something bad is going to happen to Kayla while Tyler is gone.  That is how he will find out that she is pregnant.  Why didn't she just tell?  I hope that he doesn't react stupidly when she tells that she is pregnant.

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Date: December 27 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Seasons Change My Love For You Wont

Skucky, sh  They are moving on in their relationship but why is Kayla still wanting to hide thier relationship?  This Lisa person, I really don't like her, she is an old bitter bidy.  The man didn't want you so get over it please!!  Aaron is an hoot, I love him.

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Date: November 05 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Sweet Revenge Lies & Deception

Catherine, I love it she told it all.  Admitted to being the mastermind and it was great.  I am so happy that that evil, vile ho is going to get what is coming  to her.  I am going to have to reread this story, she folded like a weak hand of poker!!  Fabulous!!!!

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Date: March 18 2012
Title: Chapter 32: Reflection, a moment in time

I don't trust that heifer Lisa, Tyler does not want you so why are you tripping?  He told that he had met the one and you that it wasn't you.  Tyler take off the blinders.  Kyla you are so stupid, I am glad that you had dinner with Tyler but did you have to be such a *itch?  Tyler loves you and you love Tyler so what is the deal?

Lisa is not finished!!  She makes my teeth itch!!!

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Date: April 26 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Forever and Always in Love with You

I am glad that Kayla told him about the pendant, why is she so closed off and secretive?  Kayla admit that you love Taylor and let him love you in return.



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles thanks for the feed back, and I dont think she's being secretive she just has a hard time talking about her parents.

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Date: November 18 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Behind Closed Doors

I so want that woman to die an horrible death, I am really disappointed that you killed Wallace.  I really liked Wallace but his wife Catherine makes my teeth itch.  Perry is so dumb, I can't wait for him to be Bubba's bitch!!!

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Date: January 12 2012
Title: Chapter 30: Frayed, But Not Totally Demolished

That wasn't as explosive as I was hoping that it would be, but I am glad that Kayla told her friends  what happened.  Kayla is really stubborn and it makes her stupid.  Tyler just lost his damn, when he noticed how Kayla was dressed while talking to her ex-boyfriend.  Great update!!!

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Date: April 04 2012
Title: Chapter 7: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

Kayla don't want Tyler to make up her mind for her!!  What is the womens problem?  What is she scared of?  There is an obvious attraction and the sex was hot!!  The man said I love you, she deserve you boo!!!  I will kiss it and  make it better Tyler.

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Date: October 23 2011
Title: Chapter 38: So Sorry Not a Chapter

Looking forward to the update.

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Date: October 28 2012
Title: Chapter 38: So Sorry Not a Chapter

Looking forward to the update.

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Date: October 28 2012
Title: Chapter 2: A Chance Meeting with you

This story is going to be hot and sexy, I can tell already.  I love Michael Vartin, so thank you for using him as the male lead in this story as well.

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Date: October 03 2011
Title: Chapter 3: If Loving you is Wrong

Kayla handle your business, Kayla is the shiznit!!!

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Date: October 11 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Pieces of my Heart

I love any story with Michael Vartin in it!!!

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Date: October 11 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Born To Give My Love To You

This as typed is very hard to read,  paragraphs are always appreciated.  I can't read this Kaleah!!!  Please get some help with formating.



Author's Response:

Sorry you cant read it but my formating is ok its not me putting it all together it the chambers set up not mine it even doing it on my pc when i look at it.

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Date: October 14 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Born To Give My Love To You

They must have corrected the how it appeared on the page, because I could read it.  Tyler kissed Kayla and it was smoking!!!  It was so good that Kayla freaked out.  Now Tyler has to break up with Lisa since it ain't feeling her anyway.  Thanks for the update!!!

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Date: October 14 2011
Title: Chapter 27: Harsh Realities Truths Unfold

You did very well with court procedings, I thought that you had done some research!!  I can't wait to read how Catherine imploded on the the witness stand. That scene will be funny as hell!!!   Great update!!!  More please!!

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Date: March 14 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Can’t Lose What You Never Had

Kayla is really working that last nerve, I just want to put my size ten boot on her neck.  Tyler loves you fool, just let.  That heifer is really scared of being in love.  I love this story and I can't to read about her meeting his parents.

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Date: November 26 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Love’s Misunderstanding The Choices We Make

Kayla makes my teeth itch, she is a dumb ho who will be a lonely ho if she don't get it together.  Tyler momma is a mess and she is willing to lose her son over her racist rantings.  I don't like that woman and Kayla is working my last nerve.

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Date: December 05 2011

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