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Forever and a Day with You - The Sweeter the Berries by Kaleah
Rated: 17 and older
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Tyler could count on one hand the number of attempted, but failed relationships that he had; had. It was getting to the point that he just was ready to give up on finding love or the right person he could give his entire self to. Most of the women he had a relationship with didn't last long not because they didn't want it, they just couldn't handle his faults or flaws. Tyler Hollis had a secret an extremely large secret that over the years, he had learned how to control to an extent, but at some point in the relationship, it would become the topic of conversation and downhill the relationships would go. He was looking for that one special woman that wouldn't mind them; he wasn't sure if she was the one, but the way he was feeling about her he wanted to make her the one. It wasn't very many women he had wanted in his thirty-eight years, but her he felt he couldn't live without.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Kayla had only had two real relationships in her life, okay let's be honest one and she wasn't even sure that was the real thing. It had been over seven years ago. She had always focused on her career, she was what they called a workaholic, her best friends India and Traci would tell her she was sexually deprived, that she needed to started living before she woke up one morning and life had passed her bye. However, never in her right mind did she think she would be in a predicament like this, it was totally out of her character to let something like this happen, and to let it happen like this. It was overwhelming more like surreal an impulsive act, or so she thought. Could it have been a calculating move on his part or was it just something that happened to happen. But if they both were completely honest with themselves it had been building ever since that faithful snowy morning.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Disclaimer: There is no Copyright Infringement intended. The names and characters in this story are of my own creation, so any similarities to any person or person's in this story dead or alive fictional or non-fictional is purely coincidental. Any and all recognizable characters involved in the images are solely owned and the property of their respective owners or by an unknown developer THAT IS NOT ME!! I do not own it/them and will not make money on them. The author of this story is in no way associated with the franchise/franchises of any creators, producer, owner or any media that may be used along with this story.

© Kaleah, 2011.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:Yes
Word count: 218680
Read Count: 114536
Published: October 03 2011
Updated: January 01 2013

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Title: Chapter 16: Bitter Sweet Love Far Beyond our Reach

Kayla is still a punk b*tch, but at least she opened up to Tyler.  Why is she so afraid of commitment?  If she continues to hold to the past she will move on and live her life and love fully.  Tyler deserves a woman that faces her fears, hear I am boo!!

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Date: December 11 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Murder, Justice, Dead Redemption

I am so disgusted right now, that was Perry. Maybe it's just me, but they know that she was at that resaurant so what ask the waite staff for adescription of the couple. That was Perry that did that, I know that it was.

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Date: January 16 2012
Title: Chapter 21: Murder, Justice, Dead Redemption

I am so disgusted right now, that was Perry. Maybe it's just me, but they know that she was at that resaurant so what ask the waite staff for adescription of the couple. That was Perry that did that, I know that it was.

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Date: January 16 2012
Title: Chapter 23: It’s not the price you pay but the gift you give

Kayla is such a pill, why does she treat Tyler that way,  That man loves you but you know that he didn't to California on a vacation.  Give the man a break, Kayla!!  Please don't that ho Constance win, I want to see in jail!!  Or dead after she's not shot by Perry!!  Both of scenarios work for me.

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Date: January 30 2012
Title: Chapter 24: The Sweetest Taboo

Kayla really annoys me at times, but Tyler loves her and it's at times like this when I wonder why?  The man is away working trying to save the life of a friend, her dumb ass should have talked to him before he left.  Lying to him about a friend being pregnant instead of being a woman and telling him that you are pregnant is stupid.  Kayla you are punk!!!  Steve is real wrong for what he's about to do.  Why is everyone assuming that Kayla slept with Mike?  I am looking forward to the next update!!1

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Date: February 10 2012
Title: Chapter 25: Places in the Heart & Ties that Bind us All

Kayla and Tyler need to get it together.  Kayla is in love with Tyler but has not faith in him.  She makes my teeth itch!!  Tyler is scared, but I can't wait to read about his mothers reaction.  That hiefer is a racist piece of work!!!

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Date: February 29 2012
Title: Chapter 26: Don't Let Me Be The Last To Know

I am glad that Tyler called her, because she was loosing her mind.  She had her ultasound, so awesome.  Thanks for the update!!!

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Date: March 08 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Meet The Cast

Please get rid of the Kevin fool, I really don't like him.  Kevin is making my spidey sense tingle!!   I am so glad that Kayla is finally coming to her damn senses but don't put a job above righting the problems of your relationship!!

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Date: May 28 2012
Title: Chapter 35: Love Has No Bounders

Kayla you are making my teeth itch, Tyler say stupid things in anger but hell that man loves your ass!!!  Give the man a break and being so stubborn.  All of that stupidity is not good for the baby that your carrying.  Your stupidity is causing you stress which in turn affects the baby.  Wake up Kayla if you don't you may loose Tyler.  Is that what you want Kayla?  Kaleah you have me so investesd in these characters,  I love this story!!!

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Date: June 10 2012
Title: Chapter 36: Finding My Way Back Home

Tyler is stuck on stupid!!  Does he not trust Kayla?  His constant bouts of jealous say that he doesn't trust.  Aaron is your voice of reason you need to listen to him before you blow it.  Kayla loves you but she won't put up  with how you are treating her.  What is it going to take for Tyler to act like he's got some sense?

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Date: June 20 2012
Title: Chapter 39: Why we do the things, we do

Traci is has got an attitude, Kayla doesn't you want you in her business leave the woman alone.  Traci is working my nerve and why do I get the feeling that Kayla and Tyler will run into each on thier night out.  Please don't make us wait too long for another update.

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Date: October 31 2012
Title: Chapter 40: Hide and Seek! Girl’s Just Wanna Have Fun

Shane is fine as hell, but damn he's made at Aaron when your girlfriend is the ho.    Tyler you need to get yourself together and quit messing up Kayla.  Sheesh you are both too stubborn and too stupid, which means you're perfect for each other.  Loving this story!!

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Date: November 05 2012
Title: Chapter 41: Simple Sweet Temptation

What is Traci's problem?  I think that she is really jealous of Kayla and her sharing the happenings of her life is making it worse.  Traci is the ho of the three of them, but is in denial.  So love this story, Tyler get your act together please!!

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Date: November 05 2012
Title: Chapter 44: Moments in Time

Ysy, Katla and Tyler are finally getting married! I have missed this story!!

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Date: December 31 2012
Lila's Thunder by Voices
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 65034
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chase is not going to be happy, Lila you really need to be careful in how you handle this.   Jack doesn't seem to care one way or other if Chase gets hurt!!!  Which doesn't surprise me, he is quite selhish!!!

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Date: January 05 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is a disaster waiting to happen, one of them needs to think of Chase.  Lilia knew that Chase had a crush on her and should have addressed it.  Now that little boy or should I say young man will get hurt.  Because two adults buried their heads in the sand.  Chase because he really couldn't face his new responsibilty and Lily because she refused see what was in front of her face.  This maybe the first time that I don't want there to be a HEA!!  Chase you need to date a girl your own age.  Lily is in love with James and no other man nor little stands a chance.



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Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Date: November 11 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Jack is fine. go head and break of him off a piece!!  Lila treat yourself to some good loving and put the both of you out of your mutual misery.  Although Jack needs to piss or get off the pot.  Jack if you want Lila quit insulting her and woo her.  I love this story!!!

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Date: November 03 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome, please continue!!!

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Date: October 08 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

All I can say is wow!!  I don't believe that Chase took those photos, I think that that ho Ashley had took his keys and paid someone to take those pictures.  Chase you deserve so much better than that little ho, Lila is not the woman for you  but there is a woman that is perfect for you.  I am glad that Lila took responsibility for her actions.  She needs to apologize to Chase for not  dealing with his feelings long ago.  Jack your little brother needed you but let Lila be his everything.    You both responsible for this situation and the price that each of you should pay is being apart!!  Excellent!!!



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Thank you for writing! :) 

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Date: March 24 2012
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was hot!!!!  I really hate that Chase got hurt, Lila din't handle that well at all.  Jack doesn't seem to care that their relationship  would hurt Chase.  Lila knew how Chase felt about her and she didn't say talk to him about his feelings and let him down easliy!!  I love this story!!



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Date: March 17 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I have missed this story so much so that thank you for this wonderful update.  Jack is in trouble!!!!  Why would he do that, he scared Lily to death she thought that she was being stalked.  Jack you are jealous of her relationship with your brother and you've known for years that Chase has a crush on her.  I was pulliing for your Jack, but you have messed up big time.  I can't wait to read what happens next.  Excellent!!!

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Date: August 07 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Lila tried to punk out and Jack would let her. Why is she running away? Please write a sequel, I would live to see if Jack wins her back? She is bring stupid and stubborn!



Author's Response:

There will be a sequel don't worry.  Lila leaves because both for workd and also because she knows she has to.  Jack and Chase will never be able to mend their relationship while she is there.

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Date: May 16 2014
Title: Chapter 12: Lila's Thunder Published!

I will add to this to my to be read list!

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Date: September 09 2014
Life in High School by NaeNae1495
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

Dijnae Anderson is a full-figured high school junior. She's dealing with crazy best friends, a protective brother, her insecurities, and her attraction to the Co-Captain of the Football team. No one said high school was easy and she's definitely being put to the test.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 15199
Read Count: 15496
Published: October 16 2011
Updated: February 02 2012

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Cool beans, I like this chapter,  Who is this Greg? and Why did he like he had the right to touch Dijane?  I don't like him and I want Austin to beat him down, then maybe Bryan would hate him so mcuh.  Why does Bryan hate Austin?

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Date: November 10 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow, I understand how Dijane feels but her brother is not helping the situation.  I want her to learn to love what she sees!!  Otherwise she will never believe that Austin really cares for her.  So sad!!!

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Date: January 07 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.