Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

Membership status: Member

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I just love to read.




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Summary:

Dijnae Anderson is a full-figured high school junior. She's dealing with crazy best friends, a protective brother, her insecurities, and her attraction to the Co-Captain of the Football team. No one said high school was easy and she's definitely being put to the test.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 15199
Read Count: 15497
Published: October 16 2011
Updated: February 02 2012


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Austin ain't playing Dijnae, go ahead and let the boy have you.    I liked reading Austin's thoughts it helps so know that he ain't playing with Dijnae.  Excellent!!

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Date: October 28 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Kayla needs to be beat down, and I wish that Dijane would tell her brother the things that Kayla said to about the winter formal.  So he can tell the ho that he don't want  her and that he never will. Dijane give that fine ass Austin a chance.

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Date: October 18 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bryan was wrong for that!!! Someone needs to whoop his ass.  Austin ain't playing around, he is making that move and Dijane don't know what to do.  I love this story.

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Date: December 05 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I know that it's hard to change the how you feel about yourself, but Dijanae has to try.  Austin is a good guy, just give him a chance.  Listen to your best friends, they have your back.  Dijanae work on you issues with yourself!!

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Date: February 02 2012

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Summary:

 

Sora is eighteen years old and already one of the top female artists in Japan, well known for creating orignal music that blends together both her black caribbean heritage with her japaenese. But the loss of her mother, being brought up in a culture that is not always accepting and a broken heart are holding her back from being the person she wants to be. What happens when she travels to London to work with a group called ICONIC and meets a guy called YungJi?

 

Disclaimer:All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43700
Read Count: 132414
Published: October 16 2011
Updated: October 19 2012


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Drunken Confessions......and the scent of oatmeal

That was cute and oh so sweet!!!



Author's Response:

thank you pmgayles!!! keep reading ;D

-PurpleChocolate

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Date: December 01 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Bonds

They are just so sweet together!!



Author's Response:

Thanks pmgayles i luv them as a couple too :)

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Date: January 07 2012

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 Surprises

Most excellent, so now Sora knows who he is.  I love this story!!!



Author's Response:

thanks pmgayles! glad ur enjoying it :D

-PurpleChocolate ^.^

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Date: December 29 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Just A Feeling

That was cute!!  I like how Sora took the bull by the horns and ask him to go phone shopping with him.  Fabulous!!!



Author's Response:

thnx pmgayles!! I'll update soon! :)

-PurpleChocolate

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Date: November 02 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Eternal Memories

Wow, that was deep.  Alicia was a strong woman.    So Shiro's family had didn't agree with his choice of a mate, but why they decided to separate.  Will you do flashbacks so that we can find out why?  Was ALicia runover by a car on accident or was it murder? This is so good, please continue!!



Author's Response:

Thnx for reading, im glad you enjoyed it ^^ Alicia was definitely a strong women, to answer your question, they decided to live separately because they didn’t want their child to be brought up in a hostile environment with a family that didn't except her. ~Naturally, they just wanted to protect her. And i might do some flashbacks later, also as to whether or not it was an accident you'll just have to keep reading ;D

-PurpleChocolate

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Date: October 16 2011

Title: Chapter 1: The Cast (...so far...)

I love the cast!!



Author's Response:

thanks!! :)

-PurpleChocolate

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Date: October 18 2011

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Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

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"Sex isn't good unless it means something. It doesn't necessarily need to mean "love" and it doesn't necessarily need to happen in a relationship, but it does need to mean intimacy and connection...There exists a very fine line between being sexually liberated and being sexually used."

    ---Laura Sessions

       The Family is a close knit group...Some may even consider it a cult. Its members unsuspectingly dedicate their entire beings to being one. They live a life under constant surveillence to ensure that they follow procedure and never break away from the group. To do so is unheard of and the consequences that follow are never questioned.

     Blaise Kincaid is a man who has grown up seeing the same faces of The Family without knowing their true intent. The time has come for their major plan to be put into motion, and Blaise has finally entered the stage in his life where they can entrust it to him. Once he enters his father's business, he'll be thrown into the doings of the group. He'll start to see everyone he has known all his life in a dfferent life...Even hisself.

     A young woman will entice Blaise and bring a new element to his life. She has admired a figurehead of The Family for as long as she can remember. When she gets a call telling of her life's dream becoming reality to work side by side with him, her only thoughts are to fufill herself and give her family a stable life that is well deserved.

     When these two meet, they ask nothing more than the physical from each other. They hope to provide an aspect to life that neither Blaise or Niamh have ever felt. What it is, they don't know.

     Once they start to realize it, The Family will war with their feelings, determined to never let it rise to its full potential and interrupt their agenda.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 79375
Read Count: 168392
Published: October 20 2011
Updated: August 17 2012


Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26

They are asking Niamh to risked her life, I can't wait to read about Daniel's demise!!!  I want tht a hole dead!!!

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Date: March 14 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

They were so wrong.  I am not surprised that Blaise was a little shit as a kid.  Why won't they tell Niamh the truth? It will set them free!!!

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Date: October 26 2011

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

Daniel is ahole of the highest order!! So Matthew knows that Niamha is their sister but Darla doesn't?  Thank you for this update!!!

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Date: December 24 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Blaise is fine, me likey!!!



Author's Response:

Isn't he though? =P

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Date: October 21 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Joseph feels guilty about about not keeping in contact with Lorraine and her children. But why, guilt implies that he had a role in making them leave.  I love this story.  Who is going break first Lorraine, Niall or Niamh?  Niamh is too angry at her family to break first, but Lorraine is to busy holding onto lies so that leaves Niall.   I can't wait to read more!!

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Date: October 30 2011

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Darla sees the connection between Blaise and Niamh, and so do I!!!  Darla is a hot mess.  I just hope that he can keep Niamh safe.  I don't trust Danny and I can't wait to read another update.



Author's Response:

I'm glad Darla won't be a psycho and let them do what needs to be done. 

  Soon Danny and Niamh will collide ...hard =)

 

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Date: November 08 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

What happened back then to make her momma leave with two small children and no place to say?  Did Daniel threaten her life?  Which is what I believe happened.  Poor Niamh she is cared to love and be loved.  Watching her mother love and loose really affected her so she behaves like slut.  Whether the ho is a male or female it is still disgusting.  There is no way that I would leave my home, those busters would be gone!!!

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Date: November 09 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I am glad that Blaise reached out to Niamh.  They are both having the same problem but to different degrees but it seems to be a product of the same situation.    Daniel is evil incarnate and should die accordingly.  Awesome!!!



Author's Response:

These two are going to need each other like crazy. Daniel is a very nasty man....just wait and see

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Date: November 07 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I can't wait to find out what happened between Lorraine and Joseph.  If Lorraine and Niall keep this up their relationship with Niamh will be destroyed.  Thank you for this update it was greatly appreciated!!



Author's Response:

Everything will be topsy turvy for the little family =)

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Date: November 07 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Justin is making my spidey sense tingle, and Niamh has the same feeling.  Joseph, I know that you are Niall father!!  I can feel it, so who is Niamh father.  Lorraine was a rolling stone!!  So is Justin attracting to Niamh or is he going to try to use her in whatever griff he has going on?  Such a wonderful story!!



Author's Response:

Justin ain't slick! Niamh's sees it!

 

Lorraine has  A LOT of explaining to do to her children. She just has to find the right moment to tell it to them herself, before the truth rears its ugly head. Justin is caught between the two, since he will not be completely clear on the dynamics of Niamh/Joseph's relationship(which will develp) he's going to start going by what he thinks without facts to back it up

 

 

Heck, I can't wait haha.

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Date: October 29 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I think now I know why Niall was so angry!!  Lucy has some plaining to do!!!  Fabulous!!!!

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Date: October 25 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Lorraine may have known Joseph in the biblical sense, is Joseph Niall and Niamh father?  I sure hope not, as they already did the nasty.  Lorraine was just plain rude to Joseph and Niall lost his damn mind.  Niamh is a grown woman, and she just had some mind numbing nookie!!!  Awesome!!!



Author's Response:

You are on the right track, but one of those names in your comment will be switched with another. ;)

 

  Niamh just wants to feel nice! I think everyone deserves to when they need it =)

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Date: October 24 2011

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Who was Carol?  Lorraine thinks that Joseph had something to do with der disapperance.  Niall is Joseph's son, but who is Niamh's father?  How did Lorraine and Joseph meet?  How does Daniel have so much power and why hasn't anyone eliminated him yet?  Daniel makes my teeth itch!!!  This is so good!!!



Author's Response:

Carol was Blaise's mother, the one who walked out in an earlier chapter

I don't know if you caught it, but when it was speaking of Daniel cutting off his support for Niamh's hospital treatment, and Lorraine reffered to Niamh as their child.

So Niall's dad=Joseph

And Niamh's= Daniel

And Joseph and Lorraine dated in high school.

 

 

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Date: November 12 2011

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 27

I will be waiting patiently because that was certainly unsatisfying.  Niamh frustrates me so I do hope that the feeling like a I slap so hard that she lands back in her momma's womb alleviates with the sequel.

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Date: April 07 2012

Title: Chapter 30: Note

Yay!!!



Author's Response:

=D

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Date: April 07 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.