Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

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This is all we need, right? by Inthenykoftime
Rated: Mature Content
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"Sex isn't good unless it means something. It doesn't necessarily need to mean "love" and it doesn't necessarily need to happen in a relationship, but it does need to mean intimacy and connection...There exists a very fine line between being sexually liberated and being sexually used."

    ---Laura Sessions

       The Family is a close knit group...Some may even consider it a cult. Its members unsuspectingly dedicate their entire beings to being one. They live a life under constant surveillence to ensure that they follow procedure and never break away from the group. To do so is unheard of and the consequences that follow are never questioned.

     Blaise Kincaid is a man who has grown up seeing the same faces of The Family without knowing their true intent. The time has come for their major plan to be put into motion, and Blaise has finally entered the stage in his life where they can entrust it to him. Once he enters his father's business, he'll be thrown into the doings of the group. He'll start to see everyone he has known all his life in a dfferent life...Even hisself.

     A young woman will entice Blaise and bring a new element to his life. She has admired a figurehead of The Family for as long as she can remember. When she gets a call telling of her life's dream becoming reality to work side by side with him, her only thoughts are to fufill herself and give her family a stable life that is well deserved.

     When these two meet, they ask nothing more than the physical from each other. They hope to provide an aspect to life that neither Blaise or Niamh have ever felt. What it is, they don't know.

     Once they start to realize it, The Family will war with their feelings, determined to never let it rise to its full potential and interrupt their agenda.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 79375
Read Count: 168376
Published: October 20 2011
Updated: August 17 2012

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

 Blaise's mother left him as a little boy, why?  What kind of disfunction does this family have?  I am happy that Blaise has a close relationship with his father.  I am so glad that they will run into each so soon, I thought that you were going to torture us some!!! What happened to Niamah and Niall's father?  I can't to wait read about their meeting I know that it will explosive!!  Niall is going to have a conniption  when he sees those sparks between his little sister and Blaise.  I know that the connection will be palpable when they meet again.  I can't wait!!!!

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Date: October 23 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15.2

That scence with Daniel, Matt and Niamh makes me think that ahole knows that she is his daughter.  Each time I read about Daniel and the things that he does and says I want him dead.  If Daniel was on fire I wouldnd't spit on him!!!!  How did Joseph get mixed up with that ahole and why?  Didn't he know that he was crazy?  This just keeps on getting better!!!



Author's Response:

Daniel definitely knows exactly who Niamh is. Daniel took Joseph under his wing, and after so many years of trusting him, Joseph is going to have a hard time taking him out of his life.

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Date: November 15 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15.1

Wow, that slap came out of nowhere and was completely uncalled for, why not just tell the girl instead of keeping secrets.   Tell her so that she can make an informed decision.  Lorrain and Niall both make my teeth itch.  Daniel is crazy, when is someone going to kill him?  I wander is Justin a mole for the FBI, I hope so.  I want Daniel dead PDQ and ASAP!!!

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Date: November 15 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

The sex was so hot, but does Blaise think that once would be enough.  You will regret not knowing her name when she leaves.  I can't wait to read more!!

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Date: October 22 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Who is this Justin person, and why is trying to destroy Blaise and his father?  Why would he have to prove Niamh wrong?  I am not happy with her mother and brother either.  Who was his father talking to and what were they talking about?  So many questions and it's only chapter 6!!!  SO awesome!!!

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Date: October 28 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

Damn, so Niall didn't know that Joseph was father.  So why does he hate him if he didn't know he true parentage?  Lorraine you are really stupid!!  Both of your children need to know the truth.  Lorraine were you raped by that ahole Daniel?  If that was the case I can understand you not telling Niamh about her father.  This is so good!!

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Date: November 21 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Wow, that was deep!!  Lorraine that was so wrong, what you did to Niamh.  Whatever happened to you with Daniel isn't Niamh fault you to tell her something.  This chapter was powerful you are such an amazing writer.

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Date: November 23 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

I hate Daniel and can't wait for him to die, is Daniel mobster?  How did Joseph get mixed up in so much evil?  I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Daniel is a big wannabe gangster guy. He think he's the stuff but he ain't haha. Joseph got around the wrong crowd. It's taken him more than half his life to even realize it, or for it to truly smack him in the face...

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Date: December 22 2011
Title: This is all we need, right?

This is a fictional story, and terrorism is a fact of life.  So go ahead and tell the story like you had orignally planned.  Just as long as they pain in the end, it's all good!!



Author's Response:

It's a go =)

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Date: January 13 2012
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

How could Joseph involve his family in with mess?  Is there a way for Blaise and Niamh to come out of this situation unscaved?  Daniel is still making my teeth itch and I can't wait for him to die.  I want him to be blown up with one of the devices that they plant.  It would be poetic justice for him to die in the manner in which he's killed others.  It would be even cooler if Niamh planted the device.

Which government agencies does Justin work for?  I am sure that he is plant for the goverment.  Thank you for posting the update, it rocked!!!

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Date: January 14 2012
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22.1

Daniel is an evil a hole and should die a horrible death!!!  Okay, so he know that Niamh is his daughter what an jackass.  Why did Joseph get caught up in Daniel's madness?  I am on pins and needles awaiting another update.  This story rocks!!!



Author's Response:

Joseph's naivety when he was younger will be shown soon. =)

 

Silly kid he was.....

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Date: January 23 2012
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

This is going to be bad, Daniel makes my teeth itch.  But Joseph punk ass makes me want to chew on some rusty nails and spit then at him.  What does Joseph have planned?  It seems that that he has rediscovered his balls, it's about time now that you son involved in this craziness.

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Date: January 29 2012
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

Wow, I am glad someone told Niamha that Daniel the asshole was her father!!  What more are they going to hit her with?  Was her mother Lorraine raped, becasue I hope that she didn't willing give herself to that asshole? I am still not liking Lorraine too much.  Thanks for the update!!!

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Date: February 12 2012
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

So why is Justin following Niamha and Blaise?  I really don't understand the lackadasical attitude that Joseph seems to have about this situation.  Why is it necessary to use Niamh to get rid of Daniel?  Why can't Joseph just kill him or have him killed?  Joseph is punk and it's his punkness that has destoryed his family.  Love it!!

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Date: February 20 2012
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 27

Niamh, I see that my  opinion of you much too soon.  I thought that you were growing in to a much stronger adult but you are only growing more stupid!!  I truly hope that Blaise doesn't take her crazy back, her momma the more I read about her the more my teeth start to itch.  Niamh, one can never have enough people to love you.  Really your brother turned his back on you and your mother has lied to you your whole lie so tell me whose love is detrimental to your existence.  Your families or Blaise and his father Joseph.  Niamh is just as stupid as Lorraine, they both deserve to grow old alone!!

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Date: August 17 2012
Title: Chapter 32: For Nikki

Both Niall and Blaise are too fine!!

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Date: August 17 2012
Return To Me by chocolate470
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

For long as she can remember, Mika's life revolved around work and home until her research into the Ozuno clan changed her world forever. A ninja assassin named Raizo unexpectedly entered her life then quickly disappeared. Could a new assignment bring about his return?

Disclaimer:

All publicly recognized characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The plot is the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 38881
Read Count: 25752
Published: October 26 2011
Updated: October 01 2013

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yes, they will meet again at Mr. Kim's party!!  I wonder how will Raizo react when he's Mika again?  You have made my day writing this story!!!



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles,

Sorry to tell you this but she won't be going to the party. One of Europol's informants is on the guest list of the party and Ryan has requested that he get some information. Don't worry they will meet in the next chapter but it won't be at the party. Thanks for the awesome review!

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Date: October 31 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am a fan of this movie as well as that fine ass Bi RAIN.  i Love what you have started so please continue.



Author's Response:

Thanks pmgayles,

When that movie first came out I was so thrilled and excited to see them pair black and asian together but they sort of let me down you know where :-) Since then I've watched it countless times and thought about a story to continue the saga on terms I would like. Still undecided on whether to make it a short fic or otherwise but we'll see. Thanks for such a great review! 

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Date: October 26 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ryan is a punk and Mika shouldn't trust him.  Love Raizo that man is so hot!!!



Author's Response:

Yay pmgayles! Raizo is one hot dude! There is certainly reasons why Mika trusts Ryan. For now it will be hard for Raizo to talk to her about Ryan and why she shouldn't trust him. You are so sweet for leaving such an awesome review! 

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Date: February 10 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am so excited, you updated one of my favorite stories!!!  Raizo is still hot as ever and they were about to get their groove on and he ruined it.    Raizo sex first, confession later!!!  Mika is going to love you no matter what!!!  I am looking forward to the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles,

LOL!...I was truly laughing at your sex first, confession later statement. I felt that Raizo is an honest type who wouldn't want to lead Mika on. Of course he's a MAN with all his sexual appetites...lol but he also really cares about her. Thanks for the awesome review!

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Date: November 20 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

They did the do and it was good. Good, golly Miss Molly I love me some Rain!!!



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles,

Yep! You took the words right out of my mouth. Everytime I see a pic of this guy I'm like blown away with the way he takes great care of his body and I hope he's keeping up with it...lol! Thanks for such an awesome review!

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Date: December 05 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

My brain is mush from reading this story starring Rain, he don't know it but he's my husband!!!  I love me some Rain!!!



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles,

LNAO!!! All I can say is maybe he is aware of it subconsciously since he may be starring in quite a few of your dreams...wifey...LOLLLL!!! Happy you are enjoying the fanfic and thanks for the awesome review!!!

 

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Date: January 14 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Can I just say that I love Rain?  I love Rain that man is twelve kinds of fine!!!  I am so glad that Raizo made up his minds to stick around for Mika.  I am so happy that Raizo saved all of those babies.  Ecxellent update!!



Author's Response:

Pmgayles does Bi Rain know all your thoughts about him...LOL!! Still I do enjoy reading them...LMAO!!! Although I have to mention that you are very low in the rating of his finest...LOLLLLL!!! 

In the beginning it was easy for him to take a step back from Mika but not now - she has captured a major part of his heart. I felt Rai had to be the one to find them and this chapter proved to be the perfect opportunity. Thanks for your awesome review!

 

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Date: February 02 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Raizo admitted that he loves him Mika, alrighty then!!!  More please!!!



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles,

Yes and that professing of his love showed a lot to Mika even though there was some hesitation on her part. Thanks very much for your awesome review! 

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Date: March 05 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Is Ryan going to tell Mika the truth? Will Mika agree to meet Ryan? Will Raizo agree to let her meet him?  That scene between Mika and Raizo was so sweet rhey admitted how they felt about one another.   I want Raizo to kill every single Khangpae!  I love this story, that man Rain is fine as hell just makes me want to sop him up with a biscuit! 



Author's Response:

Well pmgayles you really have thrown out some questions for me which may be answered in the upcoming update. You are so sweet too but I must confess that I should have made that conversation longer but I was sort of pushing myself to get this story back out there. I already felt that I let ppl down the way I left this story hanging. I knew I was going to return to it someday and it turned into weeks and months until I said you know what I need to get back to this story bc it deserves to get finished.

Yeah you're so right about Bi how many of us wants to get up close and personal with that bod. I love it when he says Mika...but I digress humph :) Definitely enjoyed your awesome review and I'm also have that update formulating in my head.  

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Date: January 25 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.