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Real name: Latrina

Member Since: July 04 2008

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Bio: Hi my name is latrina but every one calls me trina. I'm 26 AA from ohio . Beside reading fan fics i'm a wrestling fan. my fav is john cena bastia stone cold undertaker and many more.


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Alien Of Our Own by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

 

Conceived on one planet. Raised on another. Who would have ever thought an alien of our own would be the one to help save planet Earth?

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Inspirational, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 35
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54355
Read Count: 10345
Published: July 31 2010
Updated: August 01 2010

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Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

well heck he found his soul mate. she human she speak a different lanauge and she a V wow  wtg xander. i thougth he wouldnt' find a V woman they so little her on earth mars jupiter any where lol. thanks for the updated story getting good.

Author's Response: I didn't say Afua was a V, so you might want to re-read that chapter. lol. But she is a holy woman. Thanks again for commenting!

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Date: August 10 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

wow good thing they didnt' get arrested and that xander is safe and so is his best friend. glad they finaly meet and he can help him understand his birth mom and dad more and may be brdru name can be clear from the lies been told on him. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: No worries. Xander and Badru are gonna help each other in more ways than one. Thanks for commenting!

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Date: August 10 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

well glad badru didnt faint when he seen xander lol but glad they finaly meeting and he getting the answer he been looking for. i think his best friend right lasko maybe they one for him i know he wanted a V woman good luck with that one lol. to find a vigian like trying to find a neeld in a hay stack lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Badru was stronger than me. I probably would have fainted. lol. And you're right, it's very hard to find a virgin in this day and age. No telling WHAT things will be like in the future. Sad, but true fact.

Thanks for commenting and following the story so steadily!

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Date: August 10 2010
Crossing the Finish Line by wisedec4u
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214765
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014

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Title: Crossing the Finish Line

well i will pray for your husband health that he be fine and glad to see you back writting. now ryan is suck a dork a big one lol but you got to love him for it. glad she made a new friend it not easy making friends in new school and new town.  Now as for tha Queen B i wanted to  run her over a car over and over agian because that bitch has alot of guts to talked to someone like they are her slave.  Please tell me she going to get hurt real soon lol that be the best gift ever lol.  now  i wonder what going to happen when everyone at the dine together? thanks for the update.

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Date: January 13 2011
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Wow Ithink it so nice these two were able to sit and chat about her brother and how it effect her. I think ryan is good for her he is her bestfriend/soulmate too and I think they could work out. It want be easy but as long they have each other everything will be fine. thank for the update.

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Date: August 27 2011
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

no that bitch didnt' get in her face she better watch out because it looks like charlene can go hood on that hefa and her friends. now i like ryan holding her and letting her know that he realy wanted her to get to know him and that hope she take a change. now his friend wes lol the dick btween your pants lol to funny i like him. love the story and hope is all well in your life. thanks for the update.

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Date: February 06 2011
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

OH snap yeah today hasn't been a good day for Ryan.  I think that  Charlene mother was raped by Ryan's father  and had another child  and ran away that my thoughts. Thank for the update.

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Date: October 25 2013
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I say keep it to herself for this reason she doesn't have strong proof that he might be mia baby daddy. It could be something else and if she tells him things going to get really crazy so I say wait . I have to say this chapter kept me on the edge of my seat and looked foward to reading the next one. I really like this story and each charcter. Thank for the update great work



Author's Response:

Good point! I'm half way through the next chapter and hope to have posted soon once my beta looks it over.  I glad you're enjoying the story so far.  I hope you will continue to read and review.

 

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Date: December 03 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Cast of Characters

nice pic of the cast look foward to reading the story.

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Date: November 11 2010
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

wow charlene been thu alot lost mother then brother and can't even show emotions for her lost. i proably lose my mind too growing up in the city only go down to a small country town lol. the story is good and look foward to read more thanks for the updated.

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Date: November 11 2010
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

wow i only can image when she tutor him thing going to be more crazy lol. don't blame her for thinking the worst of him someone being nice to me i wonder what they wanted from me too. like the story thanks for the updated.

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Date: November 11 2010
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

wow if she got hot and bother whisper in his ear image when they kiss  if they do lol. I hope she tutor ryan help him with his grade and maybe some more lol. thanks for the updated. it sad but alot black folks and other race belive stick to your kind but i say  love have no color and it nothing wrong if you date outside your race.

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Date: November 11 2010
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

well ryan boy you need to get it together befor you lose that scholship you need. oooooooooo his friend i wanted to kick his rasict ass for his comments i hope someone kick his butt for what he says about people. realy like the story and hope to see you updated soon. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I appreciate your taking the time to read.  I just posted the next chapter and hope you get a chance to read and review.

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Date: November 11 2010
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Wow I hope Karen get over that jerk and relize there is  a guy who like her for her like this cutie pie Eric. Where did Ryan go? I hope he doesn't think that  Charlene like that ass whole.  So  glad you update love this story and thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and your continued support!

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Date: April 28 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

omg i like how he push danny but i wanted him to get  his ass kick because he just a very very big jerk. ooooooooooo ryan look like he wanted to kill that guy for looking at cay lol. now that ugly ex of his there is going to be dram dram. thanks for the update. like the story and look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review.  Hopefully, I'll have new chapter for you by tonight.

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Date: January 25 2011
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Wow talk about crazy things going on in that town lol. So Ryan boss is Charlene grandad but then the cop who pull them over knows her father and mother wow. I don't like that cop something is off about him and all the things he want to know about Charlene. I like Ryan and Carlene they will make a cute couple and if she thinks she going to able to stop thinking about that not going to happen lol. Love the chapter and thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Actually Ryan's boss is just a friend of the family.  Mr. Jacobson died a long time ago.  Ryan definitely not the type to take no for an answer, but we'll see how this all plays out.  Even I don't know yet.  I working on the next chapter now so I hope you'll keep reading and reviewing.

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Date: April 13 2011
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

oh wow talk about  some passion going on with her and Ryan. I thought he was about to kick James ass for talking to her lol.  I'm telling you  no way  charlena going to able to stay away from ryan. The way he kiss her I don't think if nana called for dinner they been getting it on bigtime lol.

I wonder what going to happen next? thanks for the update love it.

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Date: April 28 2011
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Wow well Ryan make a point I know it be hard to be together and alot people will try to tear them apart but it like he said you can't have it both ways. You can't tell him I don't want to be with you but went all crazy when he was talking to his ex lol. I hope they be together because they would make a great couple and make  each other happy big time.  Glad you update realy like this story alot. Thank for the update.

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Date: May 28 2011
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Girl I don't even know what to say about this chapter beside wow. I can't belive this so Alexis and the mayor son is getting it on didnt' see that coming lol. Charlene and Ryan are so cute togehter and so in love with each other. Now  Felica is having a baby wow. I see this little town have alot of things people don't want to be found out. Loving it and love the update. Thank for the update and update soon.

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Date: October 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Wow no wonder Danny such a big jerk look how his father and mother is. But I agree with Ryan just because he had a mess up child hood he shouldn't take it out on all black folks it just not right. But we do that by the things we our taught as a  child. Now Ryan see a baby picture I think I know what going on and if i'm right all hell going to break lose and look foward to reading it. Thanks for the update have a smile on my face when i seen this story update love it.

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Date: January 27 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Wow can't seem to catch a break lol. He find out daddy cheat on mom and has a love child, then gives the woman a ride to her job lol but boy when find out that his girlfriend kind new what was going on he going to flip his mind. But something tells me it more to this secert just don't know it yet. Thanks for the update.

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Date: November 21 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Wow talk about hot hot hot. Those two set that bed on fire. I feel so bad for ryan finding out his father cheat on his mother and he has a baby sister smh. I love this couple and this story keep up good work. thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review.  I tried to make their first more than just about the sex. I hope came across as not just sensual, but how they're developing as couple and learning to trust each other more and more. They are learning to lean on each other for support and strenghthening their bond.  They'll need to be strong for the obstacle they will be facing in upcoming chapters.

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Date: December 12 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I think Charlene should kick that bitch ass that what she should do. But she can all ways play Christi game on Christi find some dirt and black mail her see if she likes it. Ryan is a naughty naughty boy and love it lol. Thank for the update love the story

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Date: March 24 2013
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Boy that christi is such a huge bitch I'm just waiting for the day someone put her down and her family. I wonder who the girl his friend is in love with? I wonder what going to happen at dinner tonight will ryan let the cat out the bag that his father has another child out there? Thanks for the update.

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Date: April 17 2013
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I think Ryan should hear him out first then decide if he going to forgive him or keep it moving. It does hurt when people you thought you can trust and you can't. Thanks for the update.

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Date: January 10 2014

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