Penname: wwefanforlife [Contact]

Real name: Latrina

Member Since: July 04 2008

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Bio: Hi my name is latrina but every one calls me trina. I'm 26 AA from ohio . Beside reading fan fics i'm a wrestling fan. my fav is john cena bastia stone cold undertaker and many more.


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Crossing the Finish Line by wisedec4u
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214769
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014

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Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Dam talked about drama his dad was tripping big time.  What happen btween him  and charlene parent's?  Ryan brother is a little jerk but not suprise look how his father treats him. Thank for the update.

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Date: June 13 2013
A Love Worth Learning by NubianBoriquaPrincess
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 90]
Summary:
 

Aurora Dupree walked into Port Charles for one reason only:  To find her biological father.  But what she got in return was something that she in a million years would have never suspected.



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Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: La Bella Mafia
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 22539
Read Count: 16255
Published: November 09 2010
Updated: May 06 2012

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Title: Chapter 14: Business Proposition

I see Carly is still Carly lol don't blame her don't like liz my self either lol. Oh jason you know you feel that girl big time and it scares the crap out of him because she sonny daughter.  Glad to see the story was update and it understand able about the updates. Life happens you get busy or have writers block and when it update I looked foward to reading it. thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06 2012
Title: Chapter 8: And The Results...

wow carly meet her match lol. i like rory standing up to her and that she prove to all sonny is her father now take that lol. so liz the you know what been seeing lucky mmmmmmmmm. yeah she fucked and not in the good way either lol. glad you post like this story alot. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Acceptance

i like lulu telling that faker then weave liz off. she thinks she all good and she never did anything wrong and then bam she been sluting up every where lol. glad rory decide to say and something tells me jason and her going to get  close. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Me too.  This is the Lulu that I would LOVE in GH.  Oh yeah, Miss Lizzie is the biggest HYPOCRITE in town.  What did Lulu say, she looks her nose down at other people, when she's done far worse.

Thanks so much for the review!

-Rina

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14 2010
Title: Chapter 13: You Look Just Like Her...

How cute was taht Rory Jason and Jake all sitting down eating lunch together like a little family. I love that she put liz in her place she such a bitch lol. thank for the update.

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Date: October 04 2011
Title: Chapter 3: I'm Your Daughter...

oh crap lol she his daughter well wow lol. i wonder why her mom wanted so long to tell her about her dad? what sonny going to say is he going to be happy or upset? look foward to reading more and thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

like pic of cast looking forward to reading story.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!  -Rina

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
Date: November 09 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Intro

wonder why she wanted to see sonny? rory seems like a nice girl and wonder what she going  to do next and what she going to say to sonny? thanks for the updated.

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Date: November 09 2010
Title: Chapter 4: No Way In Hell...

oh lord carly lol. i know it hard to belive that he can be her father but everyone at one point had taste of chocolate lol. i like how rory stood up agianst  carly i like her alot. jason is my fav charcter on gh and so sexy it should be a crime lol. like the story and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Oh Lord is right!  LOL!  Carly, Carly, Carly...SMH.  She think she knows everything.  Someone needs to stand up against her.  Because we all know that Sonny and Jason won't...LOL.  So trust me Rory doesn't back down from anything.  So, she and Carly are going to be bumping heads...A LOT.  And I SO agree with you about Jason...YUMMY!  I should be arrested for the dirty thoughts I have of him in my head... :P

 

I'm really glad that you liked the story.  And an update is just around the corner.  Thanks so much for the review, hun!  -Rina

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09 2010
Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bribery...Maybe?

wow i dont' blame  her for being mad. like she said she doesn't wanted money she just wanted to know who she comes from and who her father is instead of being treated like she some money grubbing chick. it nice that jason has a close bond with his son very happy for him but dont like liz lol. jason married to you so he wanted to be with you who knows why lol. i hope him and sonny daughter get close wink wink lol. thanks for the updated story is getting good.

Author's Response:

I don't blame Rory either.  Rory has way more patience than me.  Because I would have taken my shoe off and did damage.  LOL!  I wanted Jason to have some kind of relationship with Jake, even if he has to be married to Lizzy (YUCK...LOL).  But that won't last long.  I have a feeling little Lizzy is going to lose everything she cares about...tee-hee.

Thanks for the review.

I see that you're a wrestling fan.  So am I.  Who's your favorite wrestler?

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Appointement

oh crap oooooooooo liz so not going to like that one bit at all lol. roy staying at the penthouse with jason and his wife and kids mmmmmmmmmm this to funny. wonder how sonny going to reacted when he find out if he they father of roy? i hope they able to bulid a father daughter bond together. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

to answer your question my favs are stone cold steven austin the rock undertaker and sexy have naughty thought about john cena mmmmmmmmm. who are yours? and cool you wrestling fan



Author's Response:

I love all the ones that you mentioned, especially John Cena.  But my absolute favorite is Jeff Hardy.  But I also love Edge, Randy Orton, and John Morrison (I just want to lick chocolate off his abs...LOL).  I have been a wrestling fan for over ten years now.  I met John Cena three years ago.  I was such a dork.  I knew exactly what I wanted to say to him, but I just blurted out I LOVE YOU.  And he gave me a smirk and told me he LOVED ME TOO.  I nearly melted.  But my mom had to come and ruin my day by flirting with him and getting him to shake her hand twice...LOL.

 

-Rina

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
Date: November 10 2010
Title: Chapter 7: New Living Arrangements

wow i think rory thinking what the hell i got myself into lol. liz something wrong with her lol and it seems that her jason having huge problem but what is it? mmmmm. by they way i wouldnt' mind licking choclate of john morrios abs too lol. i tell you he has the most sexy abs i every seen on a man. wow you meet cena cool i probly pass out if i got close to him lol but i caught his shirt a a wwe event in my home town best night of my life.  and if you wanted to talked more about this  you can send me e mail i give to you if you wanted. thanks for the updated.

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Date: November 11 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Boredom & Threats

oh crap that not good at all. I hope sonny does something soon and fast that nut case came and threat his daughter  he messing with the wrong person. glad jason was there and help her calm her down and she has a friend lulu. thanks for the updated.

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Date: November 17 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Close Encouter

trust me when jason find her i dont think he wanted to talked wink wink lol. glad they are getting close and hope liz get run over by a bus lol. thanks for the updated and gl with both you jobs and hope you had great thanksgiving.

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Date: November 29 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Manny Ruiz

omg he wanted her well he messing with the wrong people i hope jason finds him and kill him on the spot for messing with her. glad they told her the truth she needs to know that. thanks for the updated.

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Date: November 24 2010
Like A Bee To Honey:The Immortals by Junebug66
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

 

 

Like A Bee To Honey

 

Ares, The Greek God of War meets Irene Hart a woman who brings fire and her own brand of peace to his life. Can he win this battle and convince Irene that he's more than a fighter and a lover but a man to keep for all eternity?

Disclaimer:All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 141131
Read Count: 14563
Published: November 29 2010
Updated: January 21 2012

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Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I understand why he freaking out these women can change so many things for Percy and Irene and not good way. I mean they will get answer about their mother and why she had to give them up but something tells me that these women have other things in store for the sisters. I wonder how she going to respond when Arres tells her why he not happy and the truth about him and Damon? Nice pic and I like the one with the garden alot. Thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Hi WWEFanForLife, Ares is freaking out because these other Immortals have not made themselves known to him or his family and that is very suspicious to him and Damon both. The answers may not be worth what the Harts have to endure to get them but for better or worse they are going to be making that journey. Ares will either get on board or he will be left behind we already know how Damon feels but the choice may be taken out of his hands as well. Glad you enjoyed the pics, the garden is in Minneapolis and they use it for weddings among other things.

Thanks for reading, rating and reviewing I do appreciate it.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

wow  I see Irene can play the games to even better then ares lol. I like that alot give him little taste of his own medican lol. I"m glad that damon and ares these two women are special and that they going to need to make sure that their first time is something they never forget.  Thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Hey WWEFanForLife, Irene isn't really playing games but she can be playful. She will always keep him on his toes. The Pappas men will be up to the challenge presented to them.

Thank you for reading, enjoying and commenting. You know I really appreciate it.

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Date: December 19 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow  ares is a bad bad boy and i like it lol so does irene. I"m glad that he got stop before anything with futher yet but we know that irene is wanting some ares big time.  But if ares looking to come in some one else dream i don't mind if he stop in mind lol. thanks for the update

Author's Response:

WWEFanForLife you know you wish that fine, 'bad' man was haunting you and who knows I might send him to you. Ares stopped because he would have been tampering with something he shouldn't be messing with and it was good that he could show some restraint in the situation.

Thanks for reading, enjoying and reviewing. I appreciate your continued support.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i'm glad that she put him in his place let him know she not some little puppy that need to be taken care of all the time and he understand that. Now stone being bad boy for follow them he need to get spank by me lol. I wonder if the pappa boys know they getting follow by the pitts men? thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Hey WWEFanForLife, Irene may be falling for Ares but he is not going to run her show and she will let him know that every time. Stone is doing surveillance that is going to take the Pitts more fully into the world of the Pappas men and Hart sisters. They may not have been aware before but after this they will be on the Pappas radar and not in a good way either.

(Since you have your own now you can spank him anytime you like lady. So keep that hand warm, because I somehow think your hand may get tired before you wear out that ass. Enjoy it cause I know you've been dying to.)

Thanks for reading and commenting, I appreciate it as usual.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I think drama is going to come with breakfast with a order of no you didn't and some one getting slap lol. So Ireas is having dirty thoughts about Areas don't blame the girl that man is fine fine and he has this sweet side about him but also a side where he do anything to make sure the people he love our safe.  I wonder did areas come into Ireas dreams last night? mmm. I like the room pic very nice love the story and thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

Hi WWEFanForLife, drama and breakfast oh joy. Not sure how Gloria would feel about someone getting slapped at the table. Ares is fine like one of Dion's wines and when he goes into protective mode he is no joke.

Ares is using those dreams sparingly or he is going to be in debted to Morpheus and it is never good to be in debt to another God.

Glad you like the pics and you are welcome.

Thank you for reading, enjoying, commenting and rating I appreciate it.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think Irene willl go for it because you can tell they way she lights up when he around. She make him a better person and they just fit so well together. But it also show it going to be a battle going on as well because of what going on with her wanting to find out info about her mother. I understand he worried he should be but she and Percy didn't know their mother and these women can give them answers. Damon and Ares are going to be there for them big time and support them  no matter what. Good chapter and good pics in the chapter as well and thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Hey WWEFanForLife, just as Irene brings a feeling of peace to Ares' life she can also get him hot under the collar in ways no one else can. They will never have an easy time of it but they respect each other.

Having someone care about her besides Percy is new for Irene and she's not sure how to take it, for Ares having a woman who doesn't fall in line with what he wants is new and not something he will easily get used to.

Glad you enjoyed the chapter and pics.

Thanks for reading, enjoying, reviewing and rating it is appreciated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow I can see why she upset he didn't let her know about the basement and went behind her back but it was so sweet of him to think about his lady and wanted to make sure everything was going well. I think it hard for Percy to receive things from people because she use to her and her sister taking care of each other. But sometimes in life you need to reach out for that helping hand and know he truly ment for it to be a nice thing not a control thing.  I hope Ares listen to Athena advice because he going to need it. by the way love you have taker in the story too. Thank for the update



Author's Response:

Hey WWEFanForLife, wrong can be placed on both sides in this situation. Irene is very much about being independent and Ares thinks nothing of taking care of anything that might be considered a problem for the lady in his life and Irene is not just any lady but His Fated Female.

They are two strong individuals who need to learn the art of compromise, balance is the key and Ares is an all or nothing guy while Irene has difficulty believing in other people except Percy being there for her.  And now she has not only the Ares and his family but also Ebony, Trinity and Asia in her life.

I couldn't resist adding Undertaker to the roster. Wonder who else might show up?

Thanks for reading, commenting, reviewing and appreciating because it is appreciated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i think ares may get little upsest with her but relize that the hart honesty is a good thing for the both of them. no point to fake it or sugar coat it when it comes to love and they both are in love with each other i think. i hope she does get the rug burn  and sweat out perm love too with him lol. i hope the girl that mess with them when they were kids hope ares finds her and that she fat bald has gingivits and that her man left her for another man lol. i hated mean girls. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Hey WWEFanForLife, Ares is a big boy and he can take a little honesty. I agree with you, start as you mean to go on. I don't know about rug burn but someone will definitely be sweating in a little bit. That girl is probably all of that and more, you know ugly eventually shows on your face. Her man left her for another man hahaha. I hate mean girls too karma is a bitch and they eventually get theirs.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

wow love how she blush when he smile at her i do the same thing and proably little more lol. love the place they took her it very nice. those women can stare all they wanted that Irene man and no one else.  can't wait to read more and thanks for the updated. you not give up on taste of honey are you?

Author's Response:

Hey WWEfanforlife, don't be silly give up on ATOH, never! I just needed to kick Irene and Ares out of the nest, which I should have done a lot sooner truth be told.

I agree, Ares is Irene's man if she's woman enough to take him on. The girls are going to have to develop a little thicker skin if they are gonna hang with the big dogs.

Thanks for enjoying, and inputting. I appreciate you hanging in there with me.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30 2010

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.