Penname: Happy2bNappy [Contact]

Real name: Shay

Member Since: December 18 2009

Membership status: Member

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Okay, my stories weren't gone for long. The muse came a knockin' plus, I feel happy again. :-D




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Having chosen modeling over ministry, Jeremy Ferguson had often felt his father's scorn and disapproval.  Now he was coming home to visit and bringing the love of his life, Aura Vanderleigh who happens to be black.  Growing up in South Carolina, Jeremy knows what his father's reaction will be even if he is a minister!

 

The Preacher's Son is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2681
Read Count: 128922
Published: July 31 2011
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Family

Any help you need Brenda, let me know. I had a difficult time getting the hang out of posting stories and now its a piece of cake. I usually just paste through word and that works great. Shoot me an email if you need assistance.

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Date: August 01 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80850
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012


Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Loved the update. So glad the nevus could be removed but I unfortunately have to agree with that turd Ronald. Micah's looks won't last forever so he should probably consider his future beyond modeling. Maybe after he buys his mother the house and puts his brothers through school, he should go to school himself. Wouldn't it be cool if he decided to go to med school and perhaps become a pediatric dermatologist to work with kids like him. He and Lei could have their own practice. LOL, I'm getting way ahead of myself. I love Lei and Micah together and really nervous that they'll be away from each other for a while. But I know these two will remain true blue. I love Lei's relationship with Joe Bob. He's more of a father to her than Ronald can ever hope to be. Ronald is just the turd that refuses to be flushed. Grrrr. He'll never learn and if he does it just might be too late. As always you've offered another fantastic update. I bow down to your excellent writing.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Teddy laid it down, lol. I hope Sabrina stops tripping now, although I understand her insecurities. Teddy Lee is so funny. Oh no!!! Poor Micah. I really really hope the nevus isn't coming back or at the very least he can do something about it considering he's helping out his family by modeling. He's young and this is an industry that worships youth. He's stayed so grounded after his operation, I hope it's nothing and if it is, I hope he realized that Lei will love him no matter what. I'm so worried for him. As far as Ronald goes, there's something not right the way he's obsessing over Lei. It's kind of creepy actually. I think he see her as more than a daughter and that's just plain unnatural. Loved the update as usual. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!!!



Author's Response:

Teddy Lee is funny.  As for Ronald, he didn't think twice about Lei until he realized that she would be his only child!  Plus he's mad about her calling Joe Bob 'Papa'.  He's burned so many bridges and he wants a relationship by bullying her and it's not going to work.  He is one sad human being.

There is nothing "sexual" in his feelings, but he is obsessing about Lei since he's now sterile.

Thanks for the review.  MOre to come soon.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Another awesome update!! So happy Lei and Micah finally got to get it on. It was so pefect. I just wish someone would go ahead and flush that turd named Jessica down the toilet already but somehow she keeps floating to the surface. She's going to get a rude awakening in college. There will be tons of girl way prettier than her and guys in college don't have time for cattiness. It's no longer highschool. People like Jessica end up losing in life anyway. But back to Micah and Lei. I love how Lei has finally found her confidence but I'm a tad bit concerned that Micah is getting a little too jealous. His jealousy may become to Lei what her insecurity was to him. I hope he doesn't go overboard with that temper of his because these two belong together. I really really really want a happy ending for them....with each other. :-D  Thanks for sharing your gift with us Brenda. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Happy.  Micah is adjusting to the new and confident Lei.  (that's what he wanted wasn't it?)

I think he will calm down a bit now that his hormones have been stroked some.  LOL

More is coming...

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Love the update!!! You've done it again. Micah and Lei are so adorable together and that chapter was fire! I think it was very mature of Lei to sugggest they see other people to be certain. They are all they've known and if they date other people at least they will know for sure that they are meant for each other although it will break my heart to see them dating other people, I can live with that as long as Micah and Lei are the end game. I hope his model friend's mom doesn't try anything with her racist behind. I have a feeling though that Micah will not let Lei get too close to any other man. LOL, love his possessiveness. These two deserve their happy ending. Together. *hint hint* lol. Great update. As far as what you should do for the next update, I know it will be wonderful whatever you decide. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Love this story!! Please update soon!! please please please! Did I mention I love this story?!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

You are officially one of my favorite Chamber Authors. I love this story so far. I feel so bad for Lorelie, she has a beautiful spirit but her dad is such an asswipe and no one sees how beautiful she really is except Micah. Jessica and her minions along with Lorelei's father should burn in the fieriest of hells. You are a very talented writer and I can't wait to read more of this story.



Author's Response:

Happy: Thank you for your kind words.  They mean a lot to me.  I am glad you are enjoying this story.  I'm enjoying writing it.  More is coming.  I'm working on two stories at once, so I'll be going back and forth.  More is coming real soon.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Die Jessica! Die!!! I can't stand that skank. Please tell me she eventually gets hers. She sucks so bad. I love that Micah has remained loyal to Lei even though he's now a hottie. Please please please update soon. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Loved the update. I like Sabrina and Teddy Lee and glad Sabrina is finally giving in, but I'd love to see more Lei and Micah in the next chapters. I love those two. They are so cute together. Seems like Micah can't control himself around his girl, lol. Please update soon!!



Author's Response:

Well Micah's hormones are raging.  After all he is a 15 year old teen.  LOL!!  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Hahaha, you used Samnuel L Jackson for Ronald. I can totally see him in that role. I love me some Micah. I love the fact that despite the fact that he's beautiful now it hasn't gone to his head and I love the way he is trying to help Emily. Meredith is a nice girl but her mother is a witch with a b. What the heck is her problem. I can tell she is racist by the comment she made about Lei's picture. I hope he puts her in her place. I can't wait for Lei and Micah to reunite. I can't wait until they're 18 and they can get it on. LOL Great Chapter. This by far is one of my favorite stories on the chamber. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Happy:  I've been trying to get them to 18 and they are almost there.  Senior year is up and coming.  Micah's hormones are raging and he wants him so Lei.  LOL.  More is coming.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I love this story so much that I check everyday for updates. I was so glad to see and entire chapter of Lei and Micah, loved loved loved it. I felt so bad for Lei though. I see both sides of the argument. Micah loves Lei unconditionally and I'm glad he told her that she needs to trust him if they're relationship is going to work, however I think he was way harsh on her. Considering how he used to feel with that birthmark, I'd think he'd be a little bit more compassionate in his approach on dealing with Lei's insecurities. Lei on the other hand needs to get out of her own head, but I can understand why she feels that way, she's constantly being told that she's not good enough for him by outsiders and most people have seemed to have forgotten she's a teenage girl. Teenagers are full of insecurities. Its takes a little growing up sometime to be comfortable in one's skin. I really hope this isn't the end of Lei and Micah and that he'll be just a little more patient with her and she at least learns to not talk down about herself around Micah cause that will push him away. I hope she doesn't so something stupid like dump him because she thinks he could do better.  Looking forward to them finally getting it on. As alway, what a great update Brenda. Thanks for making my morning. 



Author's Response:

Micah was just frustrated with her.  Lei has received her wakeup call.  More is up and ready!

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Date: October 16 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 245]
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Maximillian Peterson was a man who appeared to have everything...looks, money and good health.  There was just one little problem...he was lacking where he thought it mattered most.  Selma Bloomfield was a widow who hadn't had sex in five years. She and Maxie had hit it off, but he was hesitant in taking their relationship to consummation.  How would Selma take it when she discovers Maxie's "little" secret?

A Perfect Fit is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57110
Read Count: 39384
Published: November 10 2011
Updated: April 20 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh wow, Russell is a total douche. He's so jealous of his brother's woman and his sucess. Hopefully he'll be man enough to apologize later. As for Selma's sons if I was their mama and they talked to me like that, my foot would be so far up their assses they wouldn't crap right for weeks. What the heck do they expect their mom to do with the rest of her life. They're being ridiculous. But its very realistic how kids sometimes act when a parent is remarrying. Hope they'll see sense soon. Brenda you are really spoiling us. Loved the update!!!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I never realized I could like a story featuring a hero with a small Johnson. I love your outside of the box characters. Another winner here. I'd love to see another one shot of these two sometime down the line. Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks Happy!  That means a lot coming from you.  Yes, most stories have the hero packing a mighty big...uh...er...you know!  (hee hee).  What about the guys that are born with less?  Can they get some love?  Hmmm  so the thought was born.  Men really do obsess over size (and some women too).   I've gotten good reviews on Maxie and Selma.  I'm sure they are going to pop up again (soon perhaps) because I've been trying to move on, but the muse is fighting me hard!

 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I didn't realize I didn't review the last couple chapters. So sorry. So glad Kelly laid it on Russell and Russell stopped being a jealous prick. Haha, Maxi laid it on Selma, loved it! Go Maxi! Go Maxi! And  that damn Stanely is trouble. I think Maxi is going to have to kick his ass. Loved this updates. As always wonderful. Thanks for updating so often. You make me smile everytime I see an update.



Author's Response:

Russell has a new attitude!  LOL.  

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Date: November 22 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Taught to see the worst in people so he lived life semi- emotionless, that is until he met her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1643
Read Count: 10511
Published: December 26 2011
Updated: August 23 2015


Title: Heat

Please update!! Can't wait for these two to meet. I love the model you chose for the lead guy. Those tats are so sexy. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19 2013

Title: Heat

So glad you're back!! Please don't make us wait too long for the next update. Looking forward to seeing Dominic and Ailayanna finally meet



Author's Response:

You are just one to talk missy I have been waiting for you to work on "The Game" I know there is magic waiting to happen.

 

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Date: February 25 2014

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[Reviews - 252]
Summary:

Matt was the love them and leave them type till he met Azalea. She turned the tables on him but not for the reasons he thinks. Will he forgive her when he learns the truth?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 45561
Read Count: 65817
Published: August 25 2012
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Glad to see this story back but Matt is really getting on my nerves. I love that they had their moment and I hope Zee is pregnant so Matt has a chance to be there the the entire pregnancy this time around. And he's just so nasty to her. How many times does the woman have to apologize? She's sorry. She didn't even do it for selfish reasons. She believed that she was doing it for his own good, not that its an excuse. But still Matt give the woman a break. What she did was wrong but I think she's paid. Her father disowned her, she struggled to raise her daughter alone and Matt keeps calling her all kinds of foul names. And why hasn't he confronted his mother for her part. Natalie still seems to hold Zee in contempt. She owes Zee and her son and apology. I do not like Natalie and she should pay for what she did. At the very least she should realize what she's done and atone. I wouldn't be surprised if she was behind the threats to Zee.

Please hurry up and update!!!! Love this story.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2014

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Doesn't Matt live in a gated community? How was someone able to get on their doorstep like that? And I still think Natalie got off way too lightly for her part in keeping Z and Matt apart. Not saying Matt should cut her out of his life but he needs to tell her off one good time. I don't trust her and wouldn't be surprised if she's involved in this to get Z out of the picture again. Matt needs to stop with the snide remarks to Z, there's only so many times she can say she's sorry. She can't take back what she did. Really enjoying this story. Can't wait for more. 

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Date: June 04 2014

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[Reviews - 217]
Summary:

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49948
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

I missed this story so much. I'm so glad you decided to continue it. I can't wait for a little time to pass and for Camille and Xavier to get to know each other. I already know the sex is going to be scorching. I'm so scared for when Dice comes back. Hopefully Xavier will be able to handle his business. Will be waiting anxiously for the next update!!



Author's Response:

Omg! I'm shock to know you read my story Happy2bNappy! I'm fan girling right now because I love all your stories lol.

 

Yeah, with time these two will be great together and so will the sex lol. When it comes to Dice you never know what to expect, but Xavier is a force to be reckon with lol.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2013

Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Yay!! I've been waiting for this update forever!! It's good to see Camille laying low but she may need to get the heck out of dodge before Dice catches up with her. Hopefully we can see more Camille and Xavier together soon. When those two finally knock boots, it will be explosive. As for Dice, he's so gross. It's funny how he's afraid to touch Marianna because he's scared of reprecussions. Dice is a sh*t stain on white underwear. I can't wait for him and Greg to finally get theirs. Either go to jail or maybe cross the wrong one and end up sleeping with the fishes. 

As promised I'm working on my update so look out for that in a few days. Thanks for the update. Hope to see another one soon!!

 



Author's Response:

LOL I know!!! I'm try my best to get them out as soon as possible.

 

Camille is a lot smarter then it seems. She knows that Dice is after her but its just the timing that is throwing her off. She don't know when he's coming. And yes, when Camille and Xavier finally "get together" it will be heaven lol.

 

Dice is very dangerous. He's a man who is use to getting what he wants and when he is denied.... smh.

 

LOL !!! "sh*t stain on white underwear" girl, you are silly!!!

 

Yeah, Dice have a little sense when it comes to who he should cross and who not to cross. He just haven't realize Xavier is one of the people he shouldn't cross.

 

Can't wait for your update Happy!!!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

Dr. Tyler Elijah Lenz Solomon Weber is a psychologist who works as the head of Human resources at a law firm. His life seems to be perfect. Not only he has the perfect job but he also is a visiting professor in many Universities for his innovitaive research in developmental psychology. He has a fiancée, Alexandra, who loves him unconditionatly.
However, under the surface lays a man that has been affected by his life experiences and cannot fully trust others. This is his story, and that of Alexandra, and Lucas, the man Tyler fears will take his woman away from him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 49503
Read Count: 16672
Published: December 26 2012
Updated: February 21 2014


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15: Everything Goes My Way

Tyler and Alex are both equally to blame for the break down of their relationship. I don't get the people getting on her case because this guy was emotionally abusive always accusing her of cheating, and making her feel bad all the time. And Alex should have left Lucas alone knowing that it agitated Tyler although he probably would have found someone else to gripe about. I think Alex needs to be by herself a while and then give Lucas a chance. If it works out great, if it doesn't at least she doesn't have to wonder what if anymore. As for Tyler he needs to deal with his issues before he even tries to get into another relationship, let alone getting back with Alex. Looking forward to see where you take this story.

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Date: September 21 2013

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Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108478
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

Glad to see an update for this story. It's been missed. Dana is something special. It must be a huge weight on her shoulders to know things about people and speaking up at the risk of people not belivng her. I felt so bad for her. It's nice to see Jayden taking charge of his family and standing up for his daughter. It was so cute to see Jay sticking up for his sister. As for Tam. *sigh* She's seend the signs sthat Dana is special since she was a baby but has denied it all this time. While I understand she might have been scared of this gift and even frightened a bit of how to discipline an intercessor of God when its needed but the way she treated Dana and made her feel that something was wrong with her, I think she owes Dana a bigger apology than sorry for being snippy. That kid was all kinds of tore up. It almost seemed as if she resented Dana. Maybe she should have a sit down with her daughter to reassure her that she will support and nurture this gift but let her know that she's still the boss applesauce.  Looking forward to the next update. 



Author's Response:

You are right Happy.  Tam has been in denial for a long time.  Now that she's faced her fear so to speak, she has to nurture Dana and let her know that it's alright to be different.  Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53958
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Deception

I can't tell you how happy I was to see this update. What a treat. I am so glad Ophelia ia alive. It broke my heart when she "died". The poor woman has been through so much. that Bob is crazier than a gay man at a Beyoncé concert. I hope Raymond has the body exhumed. Loved this chapter. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Out in the Open

Me again, lol. I could never hate you. I'm just feeling a little sad and scared for Ophelia. She's been through so much. (sad face). I just feel bad for her because I think picture her as all those little girls who have been sexually abused and just end up gettig screwed and used for the rest of their lives. I was just watching that movie Woman Thou Art Loose with Kimberley Elise the other day and it made me think of Ophelia.

But you're the author and you know what's best for your characters. You have to go where the muse takes you and I'm sure everything will work out for the best. Can't wait to read the next update, I know it will be great whatever direction you decided to go. I'll always be a fan. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Happy.  I still go back and read that review and laugh every time.  LOL.  That was so....on point.   Thanks for your support.  I have a feeling I'm going to need it.  Stay tuned.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 A Method to the Madness II

This chapter is one of the many reasons you're one of my favorite authors on the Chamber. Yes, Ophelia screwed up big time with Bennie. She betrayed his trust, but I like that you've underlined that she's mentally unwell. I kind of got that in the very beginning when she talked about the rape. With that pervert Raymond and crackhead Margie for a mother, Ophelia never stood a chance. I still believe there's hope for her if she opts for therapy. I really hope that's in her future because this thing with Raymond kind of turns my stomach. This man is a pedophile and she has some kind of warped Stokholm Syndrome. I say good riddance to Margie. She sucks as a human being anyway. How dare she call an eleven year old a whore. Maybe if she had put the pipe down, Ophelia never would have been in that position. It just goes to show, some people aren't meant to be parents. Twelve year old Ophelia was a better mother to Bennie than Margie was all her life.

Loving Jason and Keisha together. I can understand where Keisha's Dad is coming from but not all white guys think that way. Glad to see he is willing to give Bennie a shot. 

I don't feel a bit sorry for Raymond. I hope Ophelia takes all his money and divorces his ass leaving him dependant on Abby. 

Ophelia, please abandon this idea of having that perfect family. It just ain't gonna happen with Raymond. I hope Ophelia can find someone who will cherish her in a healthy adult relationship and will love little Justice as well and she and Bennie can reunite and he'll be her Teddy again. I know I'm probably asking for a lot but sheesh, she's been through so much, I'm rooting for her happy ending as well as Benny's and Kiesha's.

Margie and Raymond can rot in hell. 

 



Author's Response:

Happy I loved your review so much I read it four times and laughed every time.  Your comments about Margie were on point.  LOL  Bennie isn't going to tell Opehlia about Margie, but she will find out.  How you ask?  Yup.  Raymond will spill his guts in a desperate moment.  More is coming!

LOL  "Maybe if she had put the pipe down, Ophelia would never have been in that position."  LOL Happy!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.