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Summary:

 A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

 One night in Vegas changes the luck of two strangers.

Grace is a good girl to the bone, though she loves her job as a teacher she wants some excitement and for her twenty-fifth birthday she wants to shed that good girl image. Not be predictable Grace but a sexy wanton vixen,so her friends take her to Las Vegas, where her life is changed forever.

Kevin is an NFL all star and all around player. He is in Vegas because he was told to lay low after sleeping with the wife of one of his team mates, he has to figure out a way to change his image and quick.

 Sometimes what happens in Vegas shouldn't stay in Vegas and in Kevin and Grace's case it wont.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 14996
Read Count: 61679
Published: June 07 2009
Updated: April 27 2013


Title: Chapter 1: What happens in Vegas!

What, should you continue.  Talk about a dumb question.  I'm new to this story, but damnnnnnn.

A



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you like it.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 01 2010

Title: Chapter 7: S.O.B

Well dang, I hope that's not the only reason you wrote this chapter, you're very talented and definitely need to keep this story going.

A



Author's Response: Awes thanks, its the reviewers that keep me writing. Im glad you like the story. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 01 2010

Title: Chapter 7: S.O.B

Okay, I have to say after reading this, please write Kevin to go postal on that bitch after pulling this stunt. I love how you write.



Author's Response: lol, I'll see what I can do. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: January 01 2010

Title: Chapter 8: Oh no she didn't...

Doing my happy dance at seeing this story updated, one of my favorites.  Okay I see no Kevin is really gonna have to hand this biotch, Sara her ass before all is said and done.  Hey, I don't mean to be critical, oh hell yeah I do, don't take so long to update next time.

A



Author's Response: LOL thanks for the review.Sorry for being a horrible updater. :(

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: January 24 2010

Title: Chapter 10: Grace and Rina...Enchange words.

Sade, thanks for the update.  But I feel a little bit cheated on, it was kind of short.  But you can make it up to me with a nice long  update, posted very soon.

A



Author's Response: LOl sorry for the short update. thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: April 11 2010

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 496]
Summary:

Meet the Nichetti Family: Dominick, Carmine, Chase, and Christopher.  The Nichetti Men are easy to fall for, but sometimes hard to love. Their "family" business tends to get in the way of their love lives and sometimes ruins them altogether. This is their story.

*Contains strong language, adult situations, extreme language, violence and strong sexual content*

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Thank you Minx for an incredible banner!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 93337
Read Count: 123132
Published: October 30 2009
Updated: July 28 2012


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am so happy to see this story back, and I loved the new installations.  Please post again soon.  Wow, Taya and Christopher are hot.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: January 28 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chaynetv, I love this story.  What's not to love 4 strong, gorgeous men.  The only thing could make it better is if there is a way to post the pictures so that I can keep the visuals up as I read.  Your talent is shining through.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 20 2009

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, you rock. I loved reading your latest installment of this story, and can hardly wait for the next one.   There si no way you could have written those daggone Nichetti's as any more yummy than you did.  Please keep up the good work.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2010

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Hi Chaynetv,

So glad to see an update to this story, this is my second time trying to post a review.  Don't know why I'm having trouble, but I thought I would be persistent.  Loved the update, talk about freakin awesome.  You continue without missing a beat.  Now for my critical review, what the hell took so long, try to update sooner.  lol.  Have a good day, cause, mine is certainly better after reading this update.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 22 2012

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[Reviews - 452]
Summary:

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banner by minx 


Danielle Roberts affectionately known as Dani to everyone, has what everyone else seems to want, money, power and respect.  But she doesn't have the one thing that she wants, love.Chad Collins is everybody's All-American. He's got the career, the money and the chicks throwing themselves at him, but he doesn't have the one he wants, Dani.


They've both signed the contract with "the clause".  Will they be able to overcome it and find the true love they've both been waiting on?


Another Installment of Kerrington & Associates


All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43047
Read Count: 76819
Published: March 17 2010
Updated: April 02 2012


Title: Chapter 7: Uh-Oh...

Excellent way to bring the drams, can hardly wait for it.

A



Author's Response:

Thanks Ms. A... glad you approved.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: March 28 2010

Title: Chapter 1: The Introductions

So excited about your new story.  Can hardly wait to read Dani and Chad's story.  Good start. Happy posting.

A



Author's Response: Thanks A.  I'm excited about this one too...

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: March 18 2010

Title: Chapter 12: Nashville, TN

Well Dsmoothone, you got your wish, cause I enjoyed the hell out of that.  Thanks for taking us along for the ride.

A



Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: April 24 2010

Title: Chapter 6: Karaoke Night!!!!

Yay Chad......and Yay Dsmoothone

A



Author's Response: Thanks A!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: March 27 2010

Title: Chapter 8: Easy like Sunday Morning

I can write my update for this chapter in 2 words, "loved it"  So glad David was such a friend, and backed off.  Now we get all the yummy goodness of the brothers.  I know there will be more angst for Chad and Danielle, and your story will definitely need some male solidarity and support for Chad when he and Dani are not exactly clicking.

Thanks for posting

A



Author's Response: Yep, more angst is down the road....

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: March 30 2010

Title: Chapter 14: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

Dsmooth, I still say you are doing this story.  The funniest line ever was Cathy telling Ben he sounded all "red-necky", is that even a word?  lol.  Please update soon.  I feel compelled to offer some constructive critisism.  You know what will make your story even better, longer chapters.  Thanks for the update.

A



Author's Response: Okay I am trying to get better about writing longer. Thank you for reading

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: April 29 2010

Title: Chapter 9: Meet My Brothers

Okay Dsmooth, that chapter was a hoot.  I can hardly wait for the next Dani/Heather encounter.  What's up with Ben, he doesn't seem to receptive to the mingling of the races here.  Eagerly awaiting your next update.  Thanks for posting.

A



Author's Response: Ben is the problem.  Dani and Heather Rd. 2 coming soon.  Thanks for reading

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: March 31 2010

Title: Chapter 2: Monday Mornings are Monday Mornings

And you're warming them up very nicely, but feel free to hold them to the fire a little longer.  My advice for improving this story, "make these chapters longer", I'm diggin your story.

A



Author's Response: Aye Aye Captain!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 20 2010

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved it, Dani got to bitch slap the ho. lol

Hopefully next chapter up soon, pretty please.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I may update later this weekend

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: July 02 2011

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 60]
Summary:

 

A'isha is a fashion designer by trade. Though she is in a business filled with superficial spoiled brats and air heads she is different. At 5’3 tall and what most would call a plus size girl she is far from the norm in her line of business, a tulip amongst roses. She shy’s away from the spot light and always has a kind word for everyone she meets her beauty shines from an inner light that refuses to be extinguished.

Elton is a prominent plastic surgeon. Making money from the insecurities of women and men alike in A’ishas line of business has been his way of life for many years. In every person he meets he can spot their flaws in an instant, but meeting A’isha changes his life. Opening his eyes to the possibility of someone who didn’t need to be changed in any way, someone dare he say it perfect.

When the two meet sparks fly and lives are changed forever.

 (The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4484
Read Count: 18877
Published: June 14 2010
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hello Sade,

Delightful start.  Looking forward to more of Elton and A'isha's story.

A



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: June 14 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 287]
Summary:

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"Power is the ultimate aphrodisiac.”- Henry Kissinger

 

In the game of social politics not everyone has power and some don’t understand the power they wield. The power to make and break lives rest in the hands of one man but be careful, he is always watching.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 36415
Read Count: 69897
Published: December 14 2010
Updated: November 09 2012


Title: Chapter 11: A Mother's Woe

So happy to see you back updating. So Mrs. Astor is interesting, I'm looking forward to seeing how lunch goes.  Thanks for giving us some insight into Harrison.  Although you still have aways to go in his redemption, following that stunt at the dinner party, lol. Overall I am enjoying your story and looking forward going whereever you take us.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: February 16 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Consequences of the Obvious and Oblivious

First of all, congratulations on your first long fic, and thank you for posting this story.  I hope you continue because I am interested in seeing where this story tskes us.  I have several questions that I would love to have answered, the first being whom of these people are we supposed to find "root worthy" other than Sienna. Will Amelle develop some balls at some point, and finally who is the male lead in this story, because obviously cluesless David is not it, and the loathsome and disgusting Eddy leave a lot to be desired currently.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: December 19 2010

Title: Chapter 13: Building Bridges

"Cliffhangers are brutal", but that was something totally different, that was just downright mean, mean and cruel. Can a girl get an update, like now?

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: April 09 2011

Title: Chapter 16: The Bargain

That was very good, I can't wait to read more, including Harrison's perspective on what took place.  It's obvious he has feelings for Amelle, and I look forward to seeing how this plays out.  Come back soon.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: February 28 2012

Title: Chapter 17: Climax

Glad to see you back Drogheda, and updating this story.  Wow, 6 months later.  So glad Harrison's true feelings have been revealed, but I would love to know how they got to this point, what's been happening in the interim, I would be ever so grateful for the gift of a few flashbacks at some point, maybe we can see the point at which Harrison starts to feel so possesive of Amelle, and his almost hatred of the situation that he himself created, also some insight as to how Amelle reconcile's this bargain with the devil, with belief's about fidelity.  I know, I am asking alot but this is actually a credit to how much I love your story and these characters, flaws and all.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 10 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:  banner

In the left corner is Tanya Rodriguez, a woman that has it all. A great business, the best friend in the world and a mother and father who love their baby girl. But the one thing she's always wanted but never had is love. True love.

In the right corner is Jaycee Cristoforo. He's at the top of his profession as a sports entertainer. He's sexy and with millions of adoring female fans Jaycee knows he can have nearly any woman in the world but feels he is still missing something.

When these two meet will they find what they are looking for?

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 47718
Read Count: 19329
Published: February 09 2011
Updated: January 01 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Some how I managed to delete my first review.  So I'll try again.  I am really enjoying your story.  Very entertaining.  Looking forward to the introductions. 

A



Author's Response: Thank you arabelle for leaving your review agian. I hate when that happen you leaving a review and it end up getting delete lol. Agian thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: February 09 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.