Penname: sweetlooking218 [Contact]

Real name: Chanel

Member Since: June 25 2010

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For Her Pleasure by Alexandria Glass
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 165]
Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 57821
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015

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Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

NOO!!! You ending this chapter too soon, damn it. LOL!! Great job, I can't wait for more. Please post again soon.

 

I'm loving this story :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2015
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Wonderful!! You slayed this chapter... Great job! I love the new connection between Rich and Cam. I am so happy they put the BS aside and moving forward in their relationship. 

I can't wait for the next chapter and for BABIES, lol!! I'm siding with Richard on making the baby ASAP.

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed
Date: May 20 2015
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Aw.... I love this story! You did a wonderful job with this story and I can't wait for more of your work. I really hope you turn this in for publishing, I would buy each one of your work do to the great quality. However, keep your work here too, LOL!! 

I hope you are doing good and my heart goes out to you and your family. Please keep writing, you have a wonderful talent. 

Great job, once more :D

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Date: May 25 2015
Sugar Baby Love by Jonara2010
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111872
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017

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Title: Chapter 11: Dinner and Dancing

Get it, Elise!!! LOL!! Wow, I didn't know she had it in her. I love the chemistry between them and finally something really passionate happend without being force on either end. I can't wait for more, so much damn teasing.. URGE!

 

Please post again soon. GREAT JOB :D



Author's Response:

Thank you. Elise will be full of surprises. Glad you enjoyed!

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Date: October 11 2014
Title: Chapter 7: Friends? Pt 1

Hmm, I don't know if they can be friends. I think they would need to know more about each other. Right now they seem to be at defense stance with one another, so being friends seem really unlikely. LOL!! 

 

Good job, I can't wait for the next chapter :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 24 2014
Title: Chapter 15: Love me forever

Wow! I love it!! LOL! You did wonderful for feeling awkward. The passion and heat that came off in this chapter was amazing. I haven't read one so good in a long time on this site. The wait for those two to FINALLY get to the next step couldn't have been at a better time.

I can't wait for more and PLEASE keep the love scenes going. Great Job :D

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Date: January 13 2015
Title: Chapter 8: Compromise

Well, that went well. LOL!! I have to say I was very proud of Elise in this chapter. She put on her grown ass woman panties on in this chapter. Jameson held himself surprisingly more human, for a second I thought he was all robot. But he really opened up. So, if I had a team at this point it's Team Jameson, he is open and honest, I hope him and Elise take this good start and go passionate and sexy very soon. *Wink*

 

Great update and please post soon. Happy Labor Day :D

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Date: September 01 2014
Title: Chapter 9: Special Places

Yes, another great post. I can't wait for ore. I hope this time they both move forward with one another, I hope they move just a little bit faster in their relationship. Lol, I want to see passion with those two. They are so close to being truly together.

 

Great job, please post soon.

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Date: September 27 2014
Title: Chapter 9: Special Places

Yes, another great post. I can't wait for ore. I hope this time they both move forward with one another, I hope they move just a little bit faster in their relationship. Lol, I want to see passion with those two. They are so close to being truly together.

 

Great job, please post soon.

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Date: September 27 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Clause

Ohhhh.... I love this story. And Mr. Jameson is very mysterious and sexy, I can't wait to see how this all plays out. Please post soon, I was not expecting the clause to be what it is. 

Great job :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13 2014
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh, man.... This is getting really real for Ms. Elise. I'm just shock and curious about who is Jameson really is. He is so intense and different. I can't wait to see what happens next, now that the rules of the game is set. I hope they have hot and passionate... 'relationship' *wink wink* for these two, LOL!! This story is hella good. I can't wait for more.

Great job, please post more soon :D

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Date: August 14 2014
Title: Chapter 17: Movers and Antics

EEYYY!! Jameson is in big trouble, smh. I don't want to be him at all right now. LOL! Great job, please post soon. I can't wait for more :D

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Date: February 23 2015
Title: Chapter 18: Before the Ball

Great post, I can't wait for more. I am so happy Jameson and Elise are take the next big step and making their love offical. I hope it all works out.

 

Please post soon :D

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Date: May 22 2015
Coming Back by shadow
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Forget about everything the Marvel X-Men movies have lead you to believe about Sabertooth, Victor Creed. He is not a lowly servant who is easily manipulated by whatever organization is using him for his mutant powers. True comic book Sabertooth: Besides having superhuman strength, sense, a healing factor, razor sharp claws and canines, is extremely smart and cunning. Victor Creed along with Mystique and Lord Deathstrike are the new "invisible" rulers of East Asia. He also has The Hand, an order of evil mystical ninjas involved in organized crime and mercenary activities at his disposal.

In this story, Victor Creed uses his position to acquire and develop partnerships with legitimate companies in order to enhance his influence and power in the organized crime world.

Jazz Madison is my original character. He mutant power is telekinesis: the power to move objects with your mind. She is also an expertly trained ninja assasin.

Jazz Madison has finally put her life back together after Victor Creed abandoned her 3 years ago. Now, he shows up at her front door saying he wants her. Will she forgive him or will she refuse to risk her stable life for him again?



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Categories: Books
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4933
Read Count: 8053
Published: June 27 2014
Updated: July 04 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great job, I am hooked already. LOL!! I can't wait to see where this leads, this is a very orginial plot and character. The comic verison of characters are rarely done and this hot!! 

 

Please post again soon :D



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetlooking218. I'm glad you liked it, I'm working on the next chapter right now so hopefully post by next week. Thanks for reviewing.

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 27 2014
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Damnnnn!! Back with a vengence on this chapter. This was well worth the wait so great job. Please post soon, I can't wait for more.

 

Ps. I love the hot flashback, very unique to give the past and present so detailed and well placed. Also, love the dress :D



Author's Response:

Thank you :-) for your comlpiments. I felt like we needed to understand their steamy past to know why Jazz gets so hot and bothered around Victor. I really enjoy writing this and appreciate you reading and reviewing it. Thank you.

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Date: July 04 2014
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Memories Lost by CrimsonBlaze
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 573]
Summary:

Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103525
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018

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Title: Memories Lost

Love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the new twist and I can't wait to find out how this all plays out. Great job, please post soon :D



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it!

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Date: July 29 2014
Title: Memories Lost

Awww.. 'Kelly' and Mr. Green Eyes are soooo adorable together. I really can't wait to see how they connect and get to know each other in more chapters to come. They already have a friendship and I hope love soon follows for them.

 I like these two and I hope Macy is soon out of the picture. She is a golddigger and evil for continuosly trying to hurt and chain Brian to her. I hope she shows her true colors to Brian and get kicked to the curb. LOL!!!

Great Job! Please post again soon :D

 

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 15 2014
Title: Memories Lost

Oh Macy is a piece of something, alright! LOL! Please post again soon :D

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Date: December 04 2014
Title: Memories Lost

Damn it, so close!!! Urgh!!! I wish those two would stop pretending and get to know each other. For real! LOL!!

 

Great job and please post again soon. I can't wait for more :D



Author's Response:

Its inevitable...they will start spending much more time together now that they work at the same lace. Thanks for reading.

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Date: January 11 2015
Out of Bounds by littlemisspurplewriter
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 149]
Summary:

 

 

Neymar Jr was used to getting everything he wanted and he had everything...except Jourdan Morris



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Femdom, Femslash, Fluff, Gimp, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Incest , Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Teacher/Student, Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 34990
Read Count: 30343
Published: July 27 2014
Updated: October 13 2014

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Wow, this is a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please post soon :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2014
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Aww, poor things!! I can't imagine the hurt and fear going through everyone. I hope something good can come out of this.. Great update and please post more soon!! I can't wait for more :) 

 

Oh, and I love the clips You posted to cute! ;)

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Date: September 29 2014
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Uh-oh! Girlie is on blast and live on the air for the world to see and judge. SMH, damn I would hate, hmmm... Wait I would LOVE to be her, two hot, professional and grown ass men. OH! LOL!!! 

I say take the risk and be real, Team Neymar for SHO!!! LOL!! I am about taking a chance and explore the unknown, never settle or you will alway wonder what if. But for her job and friendship/relationship safety, I would say for the record I have make many close relationship to these guys. It's correct and safe. BAMM! Lol :)

 

Great Job, I'm lovin this story. Please post again soon :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14 2014
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Wow! This chapter blow up like 4th of July. LOL!!!! Oh damn, Neymar did a bitch ass move in this chapter. I am so disgusted by what he did, a true man would have moved on and keep going. I really hope Jourdan get happiness in the end, I hate to see how this goes.. SMH. 

 

Your doing a great job with this story. I like each of the characters are not all fluffy and cliche, keep going and post soon as possible. I can't wait for more :D



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support. I think you're the first one who actually wants something good to happen to Jourdan, lol!

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Date: August 15 2014
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

WTF? That is not right, I agree that it's messy but she had did a lot of great work for the team and to not even give her a chance to fix it is not cool. She is not marriaged and only working for the team.

I hope going forward she grows and realize she is a great person and truely a special person. I was hoping she found love with at least one of the them, but they BOTH are jerks, arrogant and judgemental- immature children!! She deserves much better and I wish she gets a KICK ASS job that makes them cry at how studip they were for letting her girl. *Wink Wink*

Good job with this story, it was too damn short. LOL! 

 

Please post again soon :D



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Lol, I'm pretty sure that you're the only person who actually likes Jourdan. I thought it would be unrealistic if Jourdan kept her job after the conflict. The story isn't done yet so we'll see who she ends up with.

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 17 2014
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Woah, I can't believe that happend. I hope things work out for those two. 

 

Great Job, please update soon :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 20 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.