Penname: sweetlooking218 [Contact]

Real name: Chanel

Member Since: June 25 2010

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The Big Kahuna by SleepEasy
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

tbk


Camille Jones accepted society's problem with her body long ago. Yet, she can't help the insecurity felt when approached by gym owner Ryan Kahuna, he was most women's wet dream. He could have any woman he wanted. 


Including her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11368
Read Count: 16318
Published: July 30 2014
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 2: Gym Rat

LOL!!! I love the list by the way and I would like to add to the list of not being able to lose 10 lbs., no matter how many low fat and walks I take each day. 

I really like this story and I can't wait to see what happends. Please post soon. Great Job :D



Author's Response:

Yes sweetlooking218! I've been trying to lose 10 lbs since I was 10! It's nearly impossible to get started on a weightloss journey even if it's not a real major change. I admire these women out here who do it everyday!!! Thank you for the review and I'm ecstatic that you like it! 

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2014
Title: Chapter 3: Fat Chance

I'm loving the new post and even better are your own notes at the end (which I love even more, LOL). Please post again soon I can't wait, oh and I have one more to add to the list again. It's Beyonce and Jay-Z's business. I am SICK of the continuous media obession with those two. Can they find something else more important to talk about, really? SMH, I am sooo over it already. LMAO!

Great Job, please keep going. I can't to see how the first meeting goes :D



Author's Response:

LOL I'm considering working on Chapter 3 tonight, but I know it won't be up. I'm so tired! I'm also tired of the Bey and Jay news. Even though I am a faithful member of the Beyhive, I hate celebrity media obsession. Like, I know they're famous and talented...but this war between Israel and Palestine though....

I think as a generation we need to get our priorities right, I don't care about Kim K and Adrienne Bailon...tell me something that will uplift and better me. Otherwise, let's not talk about it!

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Date: August 05 2014
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His Turn: Chase's Story by shadow
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 136]
Summary:

Chase James is Chris' older brother from Making It Hard For Me. Chase recently filed for divorce freeing himself from a woman he never loved. Although he would like to pursue a meaningful relationship with someone, now is not the time. With Chris starting his internship program, Chase is down a mechanic and in serious need of help. Maya has lived a sheltered life helping her father run his Auto Repair Shop until he passed away 6 months ago. Without enough customers to support the shop, Maya was forced to close it. After several months without work, she is in desperate need of a job.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19395
Read Count: 40430
Published: August 11 2014
Updated: December 22 2014

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- December Part 3

Aw.. What a kind of mother tries to kill her child.. SMH! I hope Maya learns to love her self and Chase makes Maya his. They are so wonderful together, I hope they both make a move.

 

Great update, I knew something terrifying had to happend for Maya to be so shy. And please get Kat to help her out with clothes, girlfriend need a Girlfriend Intervention, LOL!!!  Please post soon again :D



Author's Response:

Next chapter, Spoiler- you'll get what you're looking for. She definitely needs some kind of makeover but I wanted Chase to fall in love with her as she is first. I'm working on the next chapter and hopefully will post by next week. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: September 15 2014
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- December Part 4

Great update & Great Job! So happy Maya and Chase finally got together, I can't wait for more from those two. 

 

Please post soon, this chapter was well worth the wait :D



Author's Response:

Me too. I'm looking forward to writing more of them together. Thanks for still reading and the review.

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Date: October 06 2014
A Rose for Ms. Roberts by Vida Henley
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

"I want you to teach me everything you know about sex..."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Kink, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Teacher/Student, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4890
Read Count: 2581
Published: August 30 2014
Updated: October 14 2014

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Title: Chapter 2: Condoms, sex therapy, and impromptu lessons

Woah!! Shocked.. LOL!! I did not see this chapter turning the way it did. I wonder what is going to happend next. I mean, isn't Kate worried about losing her job and doing jail time? Is Jenson 18 years old? I sure hope so,

 

I can't wait for the next post. Good Job :D

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Date: October 15 2014
A Martini and A Beer by MsWorldSick
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A chance encounter turns into something more for a young black woman.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1255
Read Count: 2401
Published: September 17 2014
Updated: September 17 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Pretty crowded for a Thrusday

I love this story, it reminds me so much of Miguel's "How many drinks?" and from the looks of it I wish I could be Aiden, her night ended with a big bang. LOL!!!

 

Great job, can't wait for more stories from you :D

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Date: September 18 2014
The Ace of Spades by cinnamonsugar
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 50]
Summary:

Jonah Ace gets a bright idea and offers to tutor Chanel Birladeanu in AP Calculus one afternoon. But there's a catch; for two months, Chanel has to 'fake date'  Jonah. This deal will get Chanel the grade she needs and give Jonah the girl he yearns for and the popularity he can only dream about.

But this isn't so bad. A full school year of tutoring for only a two month relationship? Easy. Plus, Jonah Ace might just be a real hottie underneath his nerdy exterior.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Books
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 8215
Read Count: 8417
Published: October 04 2014
Updated: October 04 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: I

Very interesting start, I like the build up.. Please continue, I can't wait for the next post :D



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm currently polishing the next chapter. I appreaciate you reading and reviewing!

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 04 2014
Retired
Love, Sister: A Short Romance by TheHistorian
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 116]
Summary:


   Caleb Garrison has been in love with Grey ever since they were children. He even told his parents while a child that someday he would marry her. However, there was one problem...although adopted, she was legally his sister.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29115
Read Count: 36926
Published: October 07 2014
Updated: November 05 2017

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Title: Chapter 3: Anger * Shame

Caleb is a real piece of work. All he has to do is say how he feel instead of pushing the woman he 'claims' to love AND fuck her best friend! WTF?!! I don't get him at all.. SMH!

Great update, please post again and get Caleb's head out of his ass soon, LOL!!! :D



Author's Response:

Haha lol! Funny!

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Date: October 08 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Sister

Ohhh... I feel like this story is going to be very good. I really like the plot and this chapter has me wanting more. Please keep going and I hope you post again soon.

 

Good job!! :D



Author's Response:

Lol Thanks!

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Date: October 07 2014
Title: Chapter 2: Jealousy

Aww... That flashback was too cute. I do feel for Caleb, but he needs to stop being a jerk and tell her how he feels. I loved the new post, it was too short. Lol! Again, great job and keep going :)

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Date: October 07 2014
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COLORLESS by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 857]
Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215324
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Damn!!! How messed is that for a mother to be so heartlesss about another mother dying, giving birth to her first grandchild.. Wow! SMH, I feel for Hiram and I hope he finds his baby soon.  Hmm, though I am wondering since Priscilla and Hiram are white, how is the baby biracial? Or is that his baby? 

Please post again soon, can't wait to get more :)



Author's Response:

Hi thanks for reading I feel terrible for giving you a spoiler so early but I feel it's necessary. Yes Hiram and Priscilla are 

white however I was making thier baby would be what you call a throwback child. This means that either on Hiram or

Priscilla's side they have at least ancestor that was African American or at least to some degree. It skips a couple of 

generations if you want to read more about it you can check out the real life story of Sandra Laing. As for whose 

ancestor it was I haven't decided yet though it would be ironic if it were from Hiram's side of the family I'm leaning more

towards Priscilla's. Please stay tuned.

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 09 2014
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6

Aww!!! So cute!! I love this chapter and the pics are wonderful. I just love how much Hiram was checking out Camille, even Savannah could see the attraction he has for her. LOL!! Please post again soon. I can't get enough...

 

Great Job!! :)

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2014
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19

OMG !! That was too damn close, I was so afraid Hiram's nightmare was coming true. I love how he beat the shit out of those perverts and cursed out his sorry ass family. I agree with him, moving far away is the best way to protect his family, they deserve to have a safe and happy life together. I hope they get it and that dangerous, hateful group will be put in prison for their crimes. 

 

Great update, please post again soon :D

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Date: November 18 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Great update, so far everything seems fair. I am so happy Hiram loves his baby girl, she sounds like a little goddess. LOL! I can't wait to see what find of bond is formed for father and daughter. I can't wait to see what Camille and Hiram are like together, the attraction is there but is it love and passion? Hmm... I hope to find out soon, LOL!!

 

Thank you for the quick updates, I love this story. Post your next chapter soon.. Again :)

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Date: October 10 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh Okay! That's for the spoiler (which I love by the way. Lol!!) makes sense and this story just got even better now. I can't wait to see how everything plays out. Please post again soon. I really like this story and that's for answering me too. 


Great job and keep going :)

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Date: October 10 2014
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Poor Hiram, his whole family is crazy as hell. I hope he can get away from them and fast, with the way they are talking I hope he will be able to protect his family (including Camille, *wink*) and himself. 

Great job with the new post, I hope it's a lot more family with Savannah and Camille on the next update, they are so cute together :D

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Date: October 12 2014
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

So adorable! I love the father/daughter time they have together. They both really love each other and he is so amazing to his baby. I can't wait for them to have more time together, I hope Camille will be apart of the time together as well. 

I really want them to be a whole family, they seem to love Savannah so much. They make a perfect team. 

Great job, please keep going and post again soon. I can't get enough!! :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

So you started with the very end chapter for the first chapter or did you mean prologue? It's a great start but I'm not sure of the direction of the story.

 

Please post again soon :D

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Date: October 09 2014
Title: COLORLESS

I am loving this story, so I will be waiting on any new post you put up. Great job with this story and I hope the hosting site is up and running completley soon.

 

Thanks for keeping all us readers updated. My only wish is that we get some loving soon for the main characters, I can't wait for more of them and a happy ending *wink* :)

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Date: October 28 2014
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

Yes, they are getting closer. I hope they make plans to move away together. All of them deserve better and with each other, I can see that happening. I wonder how much closer will they get? *wink* LOL!

 

Great job!! I love this story, please post again soon :D



Author's Response:

They wil for sure. l'm sorry if it seems like I'm dragging the story out but I do need to cover the whole year as well as

develop the characters. Will be posting again soon.

 

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Date: October 20 2014
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

Wow, these people are something else. I hope baby Savannah and Camille are going to be safe. It would be so hard on Hiram, knowing his history I hope he doesn't have to go back to that life for any reason. SMH! 

 

Please post again soon! I miss the little family of three.

 

Great Job :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 22 2014
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Great update! I love the family outing with Hiram and Camille, but those Henderson Sisters' are something else. I can't believe they call themselves women of God, they obviously know nothing about being forgiving and loving their fellow men. SMH! 

 

Please post again soon, I can't wait for more. Please keep Hiram and Camille's moment going *wink* :D

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Date: October 24 2014
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16

Yes, please let everything work out fine for this litte family... I am getting very worried about what Hiram's family is up to. I only hope they are safe and far away before they try anything.

 

Great Job!! Please post again soon :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09 2014
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20

Yes!!! Thank you for this chapter. I wanted more to happen but it's great that they are moving closer. I love this story and I can't wait for more. Great job :)

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Date: November 20 2014
Jessa's Calling-Book 1 by shadow
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

My submission for the grindhouse challenge. Jessa has been living for a year in the Masion inherited to her by her now dead parents whom she never met. Finding her new gated community disturbing at first, it has grown to become her home. Jessa is about to discover how and why, herself and the two handsome brothers that live across the street, Ren and Garrett are bonded to each other. With their help, she will learn her true calling.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 6
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5380
Read Count: 8326
Published: October 15 2014
Updated: November 03 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Members of the Triquetra

I really like this story so far, very sexy and mysterious. I have so many questions: What is Jessa, how does that symbol connect them all together, does Ren love Jessa like Garrett and why the hell is Patrick a cock blocker? I need answers!!!  LOL!!

I can't wait for the next post. Great Job & Please post again soon :D



Author's Response:

I don't like dragging stuff out so most of your questions will be answered next chapter. Ren does have a strong attraction to Jessa but he fights it by being mean while Garrett embraces it. I'm soo glad you like it and hopefully can post by next week. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2014

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