Penname: sweetlooking218 [Contact]

Real name: Chanel

Member Since: June 25 2010

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 275]
Summary:

Laura MaCalister is an aspiring fashion designer. While on her way home from work her world collides with the dark life of Nicholi Gorbachev. Nicholi is the boss of the Mogilevich Family. He has plans for the young and inexperienced Laura. However she wants nothing to do with him. Her mind is telling her he is nothing but trouble but her body goes up in flames just from hearing his name. What will become of this couple? When all their secrets are exposed the only thing that can keep them together is love but love could also tear them apart.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 30777
Read Count: 41271
Published: March 31 2013
Updated: March 31 2014


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14-Promises

Woah, it just got very real for Nicholi and Laura. I was on the fence about their relationship but I officially Team Nicla, LOL!!! Great update, I can't wait for more of just the two of them (I hope it's naughty on the next chapter, *WINK*)

 

Please post soon :-)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary: "I don't want another pretty face. I don't want just anyone to hold. I don't want my love to go to waste; I want you and your beautiful soul..."

Table of Contents
Categories: Music
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 3803
Read Count: 12677
Published: April 01 2013
Updated: April 04 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 [part 2]

Great story, can't wait for more :-)



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 99]
Summary:

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Could she not comprehend that he had a reckoning to deliver?

The Fire Rises



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: General, Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 39404
Read Count: 34866
Published: April 09 2013
Updated: August 26 2016


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yes!! I loved the flashback. I can't wait for your next post. PLEASE update soon... I miss Bane and Nem together, it was too short.. *pouty face* LOL!!

 

Great job and this was HOTTTT!! :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love this story and I am trying to hang in there but I want more! LOL! I am just so addicted to the great plot and Bane/Nems romance. That flashback was such a tease, I hope they are reunited soon. 

 

Great job and PLEASE post soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yay, Nemesis and Bane made up!! Great update, I can't wait for the next post. LOVE IT!! :)



Author's Response:

:) Thanks!

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Date: June 11 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OH, SNAP!! Please post soon ;-)



Author's Response:

:-) My computer is giving me trouble but I should have it back soon.

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Please post more soon! I want more Nems and Bane together again, lol.  I really love this story :D



Author's Response:

I'm in the process of working on a ch now and I hope to have it up soon! :-) Thanks for hanging in there with me!

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Date: March 13 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yea!! Nems made it another day and Bane is on the way. GO BANE! Lol, I can't believe I'm cheering for the bad guy :D Please post soon!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

WOW! I am soo happy I waited and begged. LOL! Bane and Nems reunited and I hope they both make it. I can't wait for the next chapter, those two have been put through the ringer. 

 

Please post soon, this story is da bomb :D



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks! :-)

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Date: March 25 2014

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yah!! You're back. I can't wait for more. PLEASE post again soon :)

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Date: December 08 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Okaayy..Not what I thought would happend. The direction for Bane and Nems is not what I expected. I was hoping they would at least more on their attraction to each other. 

Hope you post soon. Happy New Year :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed
Date: December 30 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1]
Summary:

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Two online friends meet up unintentionally. (Justin Timberlake and Beyonce Knowles)



Table of Contents
Categories: Music
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2387
Read Count: 1329
Published: April 14 2013
Updated: April 14 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Just Your Average Girl

Yay!! I love your website and this story was great. I can't wait for more :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Glad you like the site! :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Nina has just started to live her life. She drops out of school and moves to L.A. At 23 she is essentially having a midlife crisis. So at this point she was not mentally or emotionally prepared for a relationship. Then she meets Alexander, the dark stranger with as many secrets as there were stars.

 

Nina wants a brief affair but Alexander has different plans he has waited years for her to walk into his life and he is not willing to let her walk out of it so easily. Even when shadows from his past reappear he will fight for a future for them. The question is will she fight for a future with him? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7365
Read Count: 6237
Published: April 15 2013
Updated: June 20 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Omg, that poor baby girl.. What kind of woman does that to her own child?! Wow, she just beat her and dropped her like a used car. SMH, if she was my cousin I would have called the police on her AFTER I beat her ass!! Urgh! Nina is a great woman, I love her and her baby cousin already LOL!! 

Anyways, great story. I was shocked at the major turn but this is so exciting. Very different then all the other stories. I can't wait for more, please post soon :-)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3-You again

Awwweee... I love the chapter, Nina is really wonderful with Selina, and Selina is a wonderful little girl. I can wait to see more of their bond. I hope nothing can break it. 

By the way, Mr. Alexander is very smooth. He appears and makes both the ladies happy. I love him already. LOL!

 

Great job, please post more soon :-)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 

Krystal was off limits for Andre.  Why was she off limits?  Well, she was his best friend's little sister...all grown up...

Andre was off limits for Krystal, but that doesn't stop her from pursuing him one night to fufill a fantasy/crush she's had for a while...

*Done for the Can I Tell You My Fantasy? Challenge*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6974
Read Count: 6478
Published: April 29 2013
Updated: May 01 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

MORE!!! Love it :-)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Sebastian and Sage want what they can't have.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4846
Read Count: 5679
Published: May 02 2013
Updated: May 04 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

MORE PLEASE!!! I like it :-)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

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No place for beginners or sensitive hearts
Sentiment is left to chance
No place to be ending but somewhere to start
No need to ask He's a smooth operator


A peek into the lives of three male escorts.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: Smooth Operator
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5674
Read Count: 6967
Published: May 11 2013
Updated: May 27 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Very sensual!! I like it a lot, I can't wait for more. Eden and Rick seem to be a very unique pair. I can't wait to have more :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: May 17 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Wow.. What a turnaround!!! LOL! I like it :-)



Author's Response:

:-) Thanks!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Masks

 

“We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.” 
 Patrick RothfussThe Name of the Wind

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: The Masquerade
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6636
Read Count: 8476
Published: May 14 2013
Updated: July 08 2013


Title: Chapter 2: When One Door Closes

WOW... I am.. just wow. I can't believe Thomas. How can you love someone and be ashamed to even be seen with them because of color? Really?! He is one dumbass.. Poor Ali and lil baby Ali. They deserve better, I want more.

 

Please post more soon :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 18 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

Sometimes things just don't go as planned.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Sexual Healing, Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3801
Read Count: 17997
Published: May 14 2013
Updated: May 18 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

VERY GOOD! I liked the story and found it really funny and great to read. The only bad part is was.... WAY TOO SHORT! I wanted more, LOL!

 

I hope you plan to make more stories. Good job :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed
Date: May 18 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

VERY GOOD! I liked the story and found it really funny and great to read. The only bad part is was.... WAY TOO SHORT! I wanted more, LOL!

 

I hope you plan to make more stories. Good job :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53961
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A Baby Named Justice

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Sobbing* Ophelia, I can't be believe it. I love that character she was finally going to have her family. OMG, WHY??!! You are so mean, Brenda1257 :(

It's a good thing I love your story, I won't stop reading. LOL!!! Please post soon, until then I am soo sad, lol!



Author's Response:

I know, I know.  I wrestled with this one.  I didn't want Raymond and Ophelia to ride off into the sunset.  If Raymond died, then who would be the evil one.  Sorry, but I want to play with him a little longer and make him suffer.  LOL  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 12 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Learning and Coping

OMG!!! This is so deep, I am at the edge of my seat every post you make. Amazing, please post soon :-)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 77]
Summary:

For Jamie Watson, raising Alex was supposed to be a short time gig, a means to an end before starting her new life. But with it brings a type of love she never could have imagined with Alex's father Mitch. While caring for him brings them together, will doing what's best for him tear them apart? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 20139
Read Count: 54933
Published: May 20 2013
Updated: October 25 2013


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Uh ohhhh! This is going to be one big ass bomb targeting Jamie. I hope for the best but honestly I don't know what this could do. How can a woman blame and dump a beautiful little girl in a world without her mama to guide her. I could sleep a wink knowing my baby was without me. SMH, Paola has SOO much to make up for, I only hope Jamie can get through it. Damn, just when the two love birds were breaking ground.

 

Please post soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yeaaaa!!! You posted a new chapter and I love it... I was really, really hoping that this would be the chapter that Mitch and Jamie got to 'the business' but maybe the next. I can't wait for more, so PLEASE post soon :D

 

Great job! And good luck on your exam :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.