Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

Real name: Sharon

Member Since: July 10 2008

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Crossing the Finish Line by wisedec4u
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214756
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014

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Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Just because Danny's life is messed up doesn't give him the right to act stupid. So now Ryan suspects that his dad has been cheatingon his mother and has a biracial baby. This aime messed up Ish. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Jay is a total idiot for the terrible things he said about Karen. I hope that Karen really starts to like Eric. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Thanks for a great update. I liked that Ryan slipped food and drink on James. Ryan and Charlene scare me I keep waiting fir something bad to happen. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I wonder why she confronted Ryan? Thanks

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Date: November 21 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Welcome back and thanks for a great update.

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Date: March 24 2013
Don't Forget To Smile by MissVee
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 111]
Summary:

Smiling got her through the deaths of her parents. Therefore smiling will get her through her guardian's wedding. Not that she loves him or anything...

 

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8390
Read Count: 18203
Published: December 20 2010
Updated: March 24 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: At First

Good cast.  Thanks

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Date: March 24 2012
Title: Chapter 2: The Runner

Good start.  Thanks

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Date: March 24 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Skinny Love

So she is in love with her guardian?  It seems that he feels the same way.  Thanks

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Date: March 24 2012
Title: Chapter 4: I just wanna be okay

Great update.  Thanks

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Date: March 24 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Until We Bleed Part 1

Thanks for a great update. I was surprised to read that Serena's father raped her mother and that is how she was conceived.  It seems that Tobias is falling in her dad's footsteps in being a brutal business man. 

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Date: March 24 2012
Title: Chapter 6: Until We Bleed Part 2

Wow, thanks

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Date: March 24 2012
Title: Chapter 7: Authors Note

Thanks V, good luck with school.

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Date: March 24 2012
Recipe for Love by tpeezy22
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

 

Lisa, a jilted magazine editor, must try to get over her two-year relationship with her adulterous ex-boyfriend Dante. One night she meets a cute Executive Chef of a Japanese Fusion restaurant. A relationship will evolve between Lisa and the Executive Chef, Vincent, but will Lisa’s manipulative ex drive a wedge between them?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 11931
Read Count: 10352
Published: December 24 2010
Updated: July 15 2011

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pics

Great cast.  Thanks

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Date: December 27 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great start to the story.  Thanks

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Date: December 27 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think that they will make a cute couple.  Thanks

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Date: December 27 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like the way Vincent gives back to the community by offering a free cooking class. I wonder who pays for the supplies. Thanks

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Date: July 29 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It seems that Jared and Gloria are off to a great start. I hope that Lisa will give Vincent a chance. He seems to be more humane than her ex. Thanks

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Date: July 29 2012
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That private cooking lesson was sexy to bad Lisa got cold feet. Vincent is persistent though. Good for him. Thanks

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Date: July 29 2012
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Lisa does need to loosen up some. At least she asked Vincent out. Thanks

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Date: July 29 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

The first time you see an exboyfriend after a break up can be Siward. Lisa and Vincent handled it well. Thanks

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Date: July 29 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Lovely just lovely. Your description of the food and their play and their making love was great. Thanks

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Date: July 29 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope that you will update the story soon. Thanks

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Date: July 29 2012
Retired
Possibly Maybe by a_muse_me
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

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Can a chance meeting at an airport, a wedding, family and friends bring about love lost? Possibly, Maybe?

a romantic comedy

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 33261
Read Count: 48288
Published: December 27 2010
Updated: May 03 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast of Characters

Great looking cast.  Thanks

Author's Response: Hi divisionred.  I think they're a pretty good looking cast myself.  Thanks for the review.

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Date: December 27 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Great start to the story.  I can't wait to read why Cameron is so mad at Philip.  Thanks



Author's Response: Hi divisionred.  You'll find out Cameron's hang up soon enough.  Thanks for reading the story and the feedback.  That's awesome of you.

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Date: December 27 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Cast of Characters

Great cast.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thanks Divisionred!  Casting is one of my favorite parts of the story writing process.

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Date: February 02 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.