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[Reviews - 489]
Summary:

 A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

 One night in Vegas changes the luck of two strangers.

Grace is a good girl to the bone, though she loves her job as a teacher she wants some excitement and for her twenty-fifth birthday she wants to shed that good girl image. Not be predictable Grace but a sexy wanton vixen,so her friends take her to Las Vegas, where her life is changed forever.

Kevin is an NFL all star and all around player. He is in Vegas because he was told to lay low after sleeping with the wife of one of his team mates, he has to figure out a way to change his image and quick.

 Sometimes what happens in Vegas shouldn't stay in Vegas and in Kevin and Grace's case it wont.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 14996
Read Count: 61679
Published: June 07 2009
Updated: April 27 2013


Title: Chapter 7: S.O.B

Sara needs to be fired. She is acing out too much and being completely disrespectful.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01 2010

Title: Chapter 8: Oh no she didn't...

sorry for my language, but someones a crazy ass biatch



Author's Response: lol Amen. Thanks for the review.

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Date: January 24 2010

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Summary:

It is a truth universally acknowledged that a Vulcan in the grip of Pon Farr must be in want of a mate.

---A Star Trek meets Pride and Prejudice Story---



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Film)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99273
Read Count: 212025
Published: July 12 2009
Updated: December 21 2015


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

good job amanda!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17 2011

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

oh my, spock is acting 'gangsta'. lol. love it! update again soon!

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Date: November 12 2011

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Summary:

Meet the Nichetti Family: Dominick, Carmine, Chase, and Christopher.  The Nichetti Men are easy to fall for, but sometimes hard to love. Their "family" business tends to get in the way of their love lives and sometimes ruins them altogether. This is their story.

*Contains strong language, adult situations, extreme language, violence and strong sexual content*

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Thank you Minx for an incredible banner!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 93337
Read Count: 123139
Published: October 30 2009
Updated: July 28 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

these cousins sound smokin' already. yumm

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Date: October 30 2009

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

did you have to stop? *cries* i want to read more!

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Date: December 02 2009

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Dorian Dorian Dorian....smh

Carmine is smexy. yes sir!

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Date: January 20 2010

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 305]
Summary:

Always the odd woman out, Keisha Barrett, for once wanted to be the woman on the arm of the man of every woman's dreams.  Who knew a lunch date with her girlfriends could hold the answer to her dreams.

Ethan Carrington, British international businessman and confirmed bachelor, was tired of the lifestyle he had been living. Expensive cars, trendy night clubs, leggy models/actresses, and gold diggers were the norm until the day her meet her...



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 22532
Read Count: 42348
Published: December 02 2009
Updated: September 26 2013


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

yumm

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 19 2010

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oohh i hope ms brandi has some redeeming qualities cuz i want to stomp her a$$ already.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2009

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

yay! i think i have a new favorite story.  I still feel like stomping brandi's face in though. And i have the feeling that that inclination is going to get stronger as the stories moves along.

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Date: December 04 2009

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

congrats to your daughter! and absolutely fabulous update!

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Date: December 07 2009

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Date

YUM!

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Date: December 27 2009

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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

 

Grace Bullock takes nothing from no one. A woman in her mid-thirties, Grace faces many battles. She must deal with being a single woman in an traditionally-based small town in Alabama. Living in a place that is behind the times, she is the co-owner of a flower shop along with her friend and mother figure Dorothy-Mae. She constantly deals with the town’s known racist sheriff, Holland. Her life seem to go nowhere until she received a phone call from her longtime friend Miriam, a foreign exchange student from France. This phone call leads Grace to visit Miriam in Paris, France which changes everything in her life.

Now with corrected French and translations!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46755
Read Count: 43693
Published: February 06 2010
Updated: February 26 2011


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

jeez what has his panties in a bunch?

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Date: March 03 2010

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 60]
Summary:

 

A'isha is a fashion designer by trade. Though she is in a business filled with superficial spoiled brats and air heads she is different. At 5’3 tall and what most would call a plus size girl she is far from the norm in her line of business, a tulip amongst roses. She shy’s away from the spot light and always has a kind word for everyone she meets her beauty shines from an inner light that refuses to be extinguished.

Elton is a prominent plastic surgeon. Making money from the insecurities of women and men alike in A’ishas line of business has been his way of life for many years. In every person he meets he can spot their flaws in an instant, but meeting A’isha changes his life. Opening his eyes to the possibility of someone who didn’t need to be changed in any way, someone dare he say it perfect.

When the two meet sparks fly and lives are changed forever.

 (The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4484
Read Count: 18878
Published: June 14 2010
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

uh oh now, mr. franco doesn't waste any time.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. lol yeah!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 14 2010

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Simone always tried to help people out when they were at their lowest. When her flat mate and friend, Charlie, was fired she did whatever she could financially until he got a job. Simone has to juggle her job at London’s top model agency, her non-existent love life, and dealing with Charlie’s unemployment. Charlie tries his best to pay Simone back for her gratitude. One argument about the rent changes their relationship forever.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 5297
Read Count: 4749
Published: September 19 2010
Updated: October 15 2010


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

imo if i were simone, my would be attraction would increase if a certain someone would help pay the rent...lol

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 24 2010

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Summary:

*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168992
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I can't choose btwn Deleon, dax, or prince. i really can't.

Author's Response: shit, me either and i'm writing the damn thing.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09 2010

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

aww poor prince. he's still in love with her and she's "moving on" making new memories.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed
Date: December 12 2010

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

New Banner

* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

FIVE STARS ON AMAZON

When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214713
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

sheriff quinn is creepy and i'm not liking pops too much. secrets are the devil.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2011

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Summary:

Hearing- to have the capacity of apprehending sound.

Deaf- partially or wholly lacking or deprived of the sense of hearing; unable to hear.

Angela is an accountant who falls in love with Patrick, a Deaf man who lives in her apartment. Can they find love together even if they are different?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Fluff, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 10692
Read Count: 14571
Published: March 17 2011
Updated: July 27 2012


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

welcome back!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed
Date: August 04 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

good start

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Date: March 18 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

finally, before he kissed her i was like "grow some balls, man!" lol

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Date: April 03 2011

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Summary:

TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

Gorgeous Banner by Valhalla



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 50743
Read Count: 78804
Published: March 27 2011
Updated: May 01 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Limit to Your Love

Moli is a punk! grrrr. there better be a good excuse for acting like this.

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Date: April 05 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Oops Upside Yo' Head

lol LOVE aunt mae and cooper! i want them for myself. i usually hate cheating, but mo and simon were clearly meant to be.

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Date: March 28 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Waking Dream

simon's acting like a little punk with with the cowardice. Moli had a case of this in the last chapter now i guess its simon's turn?

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17 2011

Title: Chapter 8: In Dreams

lol wow, mae. i'm trying to understand amber, but i can't. she hasn't contacted her fiance in who knows how long so what has she been up to? i mean she can't be all that surprised. as for moli and and simon, i'm glad he finally told amber who he's actually in love with, but this should have occurred ages ago. loved the chapter, was full of drama. hopefully, now amber will bow out and go diddle whoever she's been with for these last few weeks and we can have some more confessions, by mae and cooper. i really want to know what cooper's secret is.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.