Title: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

1.  Diya needs to drop Brandon immediately and never talk to him again(she asked him about Marisol and he lied).

2. Diya needs to find a new job out of town.

3.  Diya needs to move to another city.

4.  Diya needs to change her number and start a new life.  She should never talk to her family again that are abusive and selfish.

5.  Diya needs to take time to heal.



Author's Response:

I feel ya, especially #5.  Thanks, Harrie Holiday!

Reviewer: Harrie Holiday Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2019 02:53 am

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

At this point, I’m starting to think Brandon could very well be the father of those brats. He made Diya feel so guilty for the way her parents acted and this whole time he’s been keeping things from her, from their relationship. So disappointed in him. 



Author's Response:

You're in good company, AmmaWem.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: March 11 2019 09:13 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

*Me screaming at my phone right now* I KNEW IT!!! I FRICKIN KNEW IT!!!! Lawd I want them to work this out and be together so badly but this crazy train just keeps on chugging LOL can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Lol! That it does.  Thanks, Akira Jade!!!

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Date: March 11 2019 07:45 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

This is my 2nd review on this chapter...Brandon has been blaming Diya for her daddy issues, and she is all stressed out; trying to stand up to her family for this kucklehead.  Does Brandon even know what she had to go through with the cops and how close they were to coming after him for sexual assault?

I call DNA on all of Marisol's kids.   I also think Brandon likes being the hero for marisol and her kids.  Oscar should file charges against the brother and why does Marisol in all her sneakiness never stand up to him, unless her sister pushes her to?

Diya should go see Oscar...he wants to talk so badly and after that beat down he will talk...can't believe everythng he says but hey look at what Brandon did?

Walk away diya, hell, run from all the craziness.



Author's Response:

Lol!  That might be best for them all.

Brandon doesn't know why Diya stayed behind and what she had to go through; that may or may not come up in the next couple chapters.  It may take a DNA test to convince Diya not to drop him. 

What Rafe did was uncalled for.  But Oscar's way too on-the-fringe for filing charges.  Exacting his own revenge is another matter...

Thanks, Penelope!!!

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Date: March 11 2019 07:23 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

The way i have invested in this story is so ridiculous. I was late for work because i couldnt stop reading...why do you drop such catastrophic bombs like that. But... Thank you for sharing your brilliant writing skills. If i had been watching this on t.v. i would thrown the remote at Brandon. Better still if i were Diya, i would have backhanded Brandon into the middle of next week for pulling such nonsense.
What i dont get is how he is untruthful about his past, yet Diya has been nothing but an open book. How he is infuriated when Manny is mentioned yet Diya has to live with the fact that his first love is still in the picture. Now i am even questioning the paternity of the 3Ms.
I dont know how he is going to get out of this one but an apology wont suffice. Diya needs to get away and clear her head from all the family and Brandon drama. She deserves a whole better than this.
Anticipating the next update...please dont make us wait!

Author's Response:

Yeah, an apology ain't gone cut it.  The secret-keeping and Mannie double standard warrant an explanation.  Brandon has one; I just don't know how good it'll be as far as Diya's concerned (or you, the readers, for that matter).

Sorry I made you late for work with my foolishness, Marmus.  But I'm uber happy you're so invested.  It makes my little writing-addicted heart happy : )

Reviewer: Marmus Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2019 02:58 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

"Marisol IS my first love" - BRANDON I COULF FLY KICK YOU THROUGH THE PHONE! Does he understand how loyal and loving and beautifully caring Di is? Does he understand that she is one in a billion ?! Girl I love Brandon but right this moment, I would've walked and made him bury himself in his feelings. She is all for him and unfortunately until he stops hitting in to Marisol the hoes life and being her knight in shining armour, Di will leave him. I honestly hope she kicks off and runs- he'll lose his mind without her and quite frankly, he needs to. He loves her and all but she's right. He just drops everything and goes to Marisol's rescue! 

Shes a better woman than me lmao I wouldn't of gone home and let him panic and stay away going crazy. 

PLEASE YOU CANT LEAVE ME WITH THIS CLIFF HANGERRRR

 

LOVED IT THANK YOU



Author's Response:

LOL!!!  Not a fly kick through the phone XD  

You're right: Marisol and Brandon's weakness for is and always will be a problem. especially now.  Question is, can he cut her loose, and WILL Diya cut HIM loose?

I'm working on answering that ASAP.  Thanks Gordana!!!

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2019 12:26 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

Damn, Brandon that admission changes everything.  Marisol still has feelings for you,and keep riding to the ho's rescue. Diya may make the choice for and leave you because she will never be first in your mind. Ibwill be in pins and needles until the next update.



Author's Response:

I'll try not to keep you waiting too long.  Thanks, pmgayles!

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Date: March 11 2019 12:26 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

Ah-for-fuck-sake! Really BRANDON!!!  But u only kissed da bitch at 17-fuckin-teen!!! What-tha-hell..I mean-ok...it’s late- my head’s spinning and I’m too damn excited for another update and freakin pissed at my BRANDON!  Ugh

more later. Great job!



Author's Response:

LOL!!!  Looking forward to it.  Thanks JV4ME!!!

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Date: March 11 2019 04:25 am

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

I read that last sentence and got SICK TO MY STOMACH. Disgusted. Such a great story, that I always forget I can comment on, one of the reasons I still check this site. Thanks for the upload and for giving me a slow burn read hat grates my elves and has me in all my feels at the same time lol. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Lol!  My pleasure : )  Thanks, jael3205!!!

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Date: March 11 2019 12:54 am

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

Wow....I hope Diya knees him where it hurts, cuz that response knocked all the wind out me. I knew there was more to the relationship, but his response changes everything  including his reaction to Oscar. 




Author's Response:

That it does.  Thanks kuriouskale!!!

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Date: March 11 2019 12:40 am

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

I am sickkkkkkkkk! Oscar, although he shouldn't have been there did not deserve what happened to him, and I am sick and tired of Marisol. I don't know how Di continues to put up all of that. If I was her Brandon and I would not make it past bed partners. Yikes!



Author's Response:

Yeah, the Oscar ordeal was messed up, just like Brandon and Diya's relationship.  Thanks tawnymama!

Reviewer: tawnymama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 11:26 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

In the words of the hosts of my favorite podcast, BREAK UP WITH HIM.  Run Diya, because Brandon got her full circle f 'd up!



Author's Response:

Lol!  Thanks babygirl2cute4u!

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Date: March 10 2019 09:41 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

So wonderfully generous of you to update again so quickly...Your work is amazing...but, Author you are so cruel...this revelation is so much more than I could ever expect Diya to bear...though if I think about it, I’m not surprised with how clingy Marisol is to Bran and how he seems to always bail her out of jams...I wonder why he seems on some level to cling to Marisol...I don’t doubt his love for Diya is sincere and true...but like his mom says he is too giving when he cares...Marisol thus takes advantage...what does that mean for Diya...I am so excited for more...That you got me up in my feelings over this book is such a testament to the power of your talent, imo...be blessed...



Author's Response:

There's a deep-seated reason as to why Brandon caters to Marisol, and why his love for Diya, while sincere, might not be enough to keep these two together.  More on that in upcoming chapters; as always, I so appreciate your insight and support, jahchannah, and hope to see you there!  Be blessed, as well : )

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Date: March 10 2019 09:16 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

“Marisol IS my first love..” Woooow really Brandon??? You got me f**ked up.  SMFH! At this point, Diya needs to back all the way up from this “relationship” until ole dude figures out what he wants. 



Author's Response:

I concur.  Thanks, AmmaWem!

Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 08:58 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

WTF, Why did he hide the truth 



Author's Response:

You might be surprised.  Thanks fanaserie.

Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 08:26 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

Di needs to get away from Brandon until he gets rid of his baggage... looking at you, Marisol. I'm real pissed right now. How could he think that little tidbit wasn't important . Sonuva...

Buckle up is right.



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: March 10 2019 08:04 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

So Marisol the eternal victim is Brandon first love! What the hades and this will hurt or break Diya and Brandon apart. If Diya and Brandon are going to be together Marisol and the brats need to go, as for Diya family they also need to go. I truly believe Brandon love Diya but he allow his-self to be friend with this toxic person( Marisol), and Marisol is using her children to keep Brandon in the loop. Brandon never has a chance to move onl with his life because of being nice and instead of giving Marisol the finger. Brillant writing and thank you. Bain



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and your incredibly kind words, Bain!!!

Yeah, Marisol is a non-starter if Brandon hopes to preserve what he has with Diya.  But it's gonna be super difficult for him to cut off Marisol AND the girls.  Dare I say impossible?

Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 07:55 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

Girl, you are good!  I am so pissed right now.  I knew he was going to say Marisol was his first love.   It’s not lost on me that he said, Marisol is my first love and not was my first love.

 

Di needs to step back for a minute.  Now, she is going to question everything about their relationship.  The whole Marisol going away with him and the girls.

 

Great job!  Please don’t keep us waiting too long for the next update.  I offer any assistance I can do to get a another update today!!!



Author's Response:

Lol!  Pray I win the lotto.  Lords knows I am.  

Thanks, Love33!!!

Reviewer: Love33 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 07:44 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

Well I'lI be...  Hat's off to Diya for pushing. 

I hope she really heard Brandon '''Marisol IS my first live", not was my first love.  Now we know why Mariso is  so territorial with Brandon...he is hers.

I would take a big step back from this relationship, a big step. All this time these two have been keeping secrets and putting Diya through hell.  Diya needs to find a new job and think hard on joining up with even more dysfunctional people, including Brandon.

Dang Brandon, I'm just too through with you.  Got my right eye twitching. Knee jerk reaction...kick him out, and his tees, too.



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks, Penelope!

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Date: March 10 2019 06:57 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

 

Hell no. Nope. Nope. Nope.  I don’t give a damn about Brandon’s feelings anymore. So how is he going to redeem himself because there is no way Di shouldn’t look back at every situation between Brandon and marisol with her new found knowledge. 



Author's Response:

Good question, Teetime.  Very good question.

Thanks!

Reviewer: Teetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 06:25 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

Don't......nope nope!!! You know that usually I am all for your shenanigans....I cant handle it today. Diya needs to merc that hoe like yesterday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A small cap in Brand's fine meaty ass wouldn't hurt either!!!!! I need them both FUBAR asap!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!  Give it time.  You just might get your wish. 

Thanks, Artamiss Caine!!!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 05:01 pm

Title: Chapter 28 - Dark Days Ahead...

I also feel for Brandon. I can see why after the drama that went down at the De La Roy’s home, he would have doubts in his confidence in Diyas dedication to their relationship. In his eyes, he probably feels like she won’t take a stance against her family. He also may feel a built guilty of making her choose.  There may be something additional hidden in his past that’s making him feel like they won’t make it. Also, let’s face it, with daddy De La Roy messin’ with his money, that would make anyone wanna cut a mufcka! 😠🤨



Author's Response:

You hit the nail of the head on all accounts.  Diya and Brandon are both struggling, with Diya going it alone (Zeria has her own later-to-be-revealed drama).  Whether she's ready for it or not, being with Brandon means being without her family.  Unfortunately, that doesn't mean William is done messing with Brandon and his money.  So long as he and Diya are together, he's a target--a fact which will have a definite effect on their relationship.

Brandon and Diya both need to to put all their cards on the table.  Question is, are either of them ready for what the whole truth will mean for them going forward...if they can (dun-dun-dun : D).

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Musicluva!  Update posted.

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 04:57 am

Title: Chapter 28 - Dark Days Ahead...

So sad...so disconnected...yet deeply so together...Brandon blames himself as Diya blames herself...when it's outside forces they both allow to get in the way...I yet want them to find their way home...back to each other...so beautifully written...the feelings of hurt and self recrimination are palpable in both Bran and Diya...you are amazing in your talent...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, jahchannah!  As always, I'm so glad to see your name.  You are so right.  Brandon and Diya are languishing in self-loathing.  Unfortunately, that blame my be pointed at one another in the not so distant future...as in the next couple chapters ; )  Update posted.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2019 05:11 pm

Title: Chapter 28 - Dark Days Ahead...

I don't like her parents.nwhy is Brandon oushing her away? Why fud dhevdunjiect Brandonnto her family? Tgstvwsd just rude.



Author's Response:

Brandon's hurt and Diya's in love.  It's that simple.  Well, not really.  But the explanation behind Brandon's behavoir is soon to come.

Thanks, pmgayles!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2019 12:48 am

Title: Chapter 28 - Dark Days Ahead...

 Brandon doesn’t owe loyalty to anyone BUT Diya. He needs to comes off his high horse serving Marisol and her 3 kids. Like really dude? At this point I’m looking at Brandon the same way I view her family. With the side eye. 



Author's Response:

He's earned it, as the next chapter will prove.  Thanks, AmmaWem!

Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2019 11:31 pm



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