I hope you continue this. I had fun reading it. I too am a Daniel Henney fan. It was hard for me to picture him in this story since I know he is Korean but then Rain is Korean but he play a hot Japanese man in Ninja Assassin. LOL!
Reviewer: KimG Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 19 2012 05:08 am
I finally sorted out my browser issue to be able to post a review. Thanks for another great update. Yuki basically needs to bare his soul if he wants any chance with Sara after what he pulled.
Author's Response:
I agree with you on this. Just say it clearly and with conviction. That's what he needs to do. Thanks!
:)
Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2012 02:32 am
I think tha Kamir and Kaoru should be together, but I also feel like thier relaitionship would be kind of casual. And as for sara and yuki, I think they should become more like friends trying to get to know each other.
Reviewer: nikol Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 05 2012 08:14 pm
please, please UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON
iam dying for more
I have been re-reading the entire story and have some suggestions of Yuki should announce his feeling for Sara
1) DRAMATIC
Sara having had enough of heart break from both men decides she needs and break and wants to leave, after having a horrible arguement about the affair with kamire. But Yuki can not be apart from her again. In an attempt to wine her heart, he follows her to the airport and they profess their love for one another. Ending with a dramatic kiss.
2) REALISTIC
As Sara and Yuki spend more time in the park with their son an his friend, they both start seeing peices of a normal family again. The couple gradually start spending more time with each other and leads up to a kiss that niether one of them can stiop thinking about.... Yuki has had enough and tells her that he loves her still!!!!!!!!
As you can seee I have a pretty wild imagination about theses things, but it is only because I am really pasionate about the characters that you have potrayed.
UPDATE PLEASE
Reviewer: UPDATE Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 03 2012 09:41 pm
1. I want Kaoru with someone else. Kamir is an ass.
2. I think Yuki should just tell Sara. Sara shouldn't just give in though. Yuki really abandoned her when she needed him the most. She needs time to see if she wants to start again.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 02 2012 01:44 pm
so sad tyat little boy.
i think karou and kamir kinda should be together, who knows maybe she would just magically fall pregnant.
and yuki, should ... i dont know, but i dont feel it would be a loud announcement, maybe his mother should tell her?
Author's Response:
A loud announcement definitely would not be Yuki's style. I agree. Thanks!
Reviewer: chocolateorange Signed
[Report This]Date: April 02 2012 01:37 pm
So...Kamir is an A class idiot and I think he should suffer a little before him and Kaoru get together...but in the end I do think they should be together. And of course Yuki should announce his feelings, maybe with something grand or sweet involving Shouda.
But thats just the opinion of a hopeless romantic
Author's Response:
A Kamoru shipper? With a little pain on the side. I like it. Hopeless romantics are welcome. Thanks!
Reviewer: Simmmz Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2012 03:05 am
1. no they should not
2. first thing first he needs to get a divorce...maybe use that as a way to get together..be like I want you but not until I am truly free to love you the way you deserve not like our frist time but better.
Author's Response:
Noted and noted! Thanks!
Reviewer: jamminmaraca Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2012 02:05 am
i don't think that kaoru should end up together. How sara has helped her find her footing in life and become a confident woman. for them to end up together would smack of betrayal.
Reviewer: jen Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 02 2012 12:19 am
Hell no, Kamir doesn't deserve to be with either women. He knew Kaoru was married even though she is unhappy. He slept with her while in somewhat of a relationship with Sara. He is only thinking about himself. Yuki should just give Kaoru a divorce and they both move on. Yuki is feeling at fault but he was trying to work things out with Kaoru. I think Yuki should wait till he is done with Kaoru before letting Sara know about his feelings. Sara doesn't need anything else to depress her.
Author's Response:
Very well put! Kamir is pretty selfish...you make him sound so bad. :) I am sure Yuki would not try anything with Sara until everything was done with Kaoru. That is, he could say to Sara it was over and it be so. He would know Sara would die before she would do anything against his marrage.
Thanks!
Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2012 11:49 pm
I am glad Sarau found out the truth about Kamir..I really do not care for him and how dare him be jealous of Yuki!!
I do not want Sarau mad at Karaou though..I want them to be friends...I think Karaou is a good person in a bad situation...everything about her marriage was just wrong and both her and yuki were unhappy! Karaou really respects and admires Saarau..they should be friends.
I think Karou is too good for Kamir..I think she should enjoy being single and working..she should find someone that chose her first..desired her first and foremost ..not as an after thought because they could not have Sarau like Kamir and Yuki.
Also..I think Sarau in her heart knows Yuki cares about her because she still cares about him. I just think however he admits his feelings it should be done as respectful and tasteful ,sweetly and lovingly sensitive as everything about there relationship has been so far!!
Excellent updt sweetie....I just cannot get enough of this wonderful wonderful story!
Author's Response:
I know right? Kamir has some nerve. It will be interesting to see how Kaoru and Sara interact now that Sara knows. Indeed. I think you are right about what Sara knows in her heart. I think its growing inside her little by little. In fact, I'd go so far as to say the only things suppressing it, is his marrage. xD And we all know whats up with that!
Thanks nene!
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Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2012 11:44 pm
1. Lovely story.
2. Kamir and Kaoru are friends with benefits.
3. Yuki is finally has a backbone and he needs to tell Sara that he respect and love her.
4. Wedding bells are in order.
Thank you for this outstanding writing and please update soon.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2012 11:05 pm
Oh. Shouda is such a nice kid. I feel sorry for Sara but she handled the revelation rather well.
For Kamir to jump from one woman to the next,I am having second thoughts on him being with Kaoru. Yes,she cheated on her husband but two wrongs can't possibly make a right.
As far as how Yuki should confess,the indirect approach is always fun. For Sara to overhear it or something like that would be interesting to watch.
Reviewer: Ioneha Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2012 10:43 pm
I don't know how I feel about Kaoru and Kamir, Kamir only wanted to sex up Sara while Kaoru just wanted to feel something. It would be great if Kaoru used Kamir for sex and he developed feelings and got hurt. I am a fan of Kamir, but Kaoru deserves to find love. She knew when they got engage Yuki didn't love her, hell she didn't love Yuki. Her hurt and anger were her own and she choose to not to love. Yuki just let his momma treat Kaoru any old way. Becoming a father with the only woman that he ever loved iniated that his change. It would be cool if Yuki told Shouda how he feels about his momma and that he wants another chance. Then they could plot together on how to woo Sara!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2012 10:25 pm